So, what I get is that I need to add more activity to progress the relationship with the girls that doesn't involve mind control, is that right?
I think you may have to? As it stands the only way to do anything in a physical or even a personal way is to use the mind control. Again, I get that it is his power but does it have to be the only way to gain some ground with the LIs? Though as of right now no one in the game is an actual LI because there are zero ways to
actually progress with them. They are little more than puppets used for throw away lewd scenes.
I still think the biggest issue comes back to the complete lack of player agency so far. This is very, very, linier as of right now and unless you start letting the player make some decisions for them selves most will likely just get bored. I know I was starting to because it was just walls of text and I never really had the feeling of "playing" something, if you know what I mean. Right now it's a KN with more steps.
I'm not a fan of corruption really but different strokes. It's completely unbelievable to me that they can get so corrupted by that that they just shrug off being a sock puppet. But that's just me so it would be nice to be able to go about it a different way. If not, me myself, won't stick around to see how this one finishes. But there will always be people who are happy with a "simple porn game". I guess it takes more for me to stay invested.