I'm in the process of putting together a new SFW trailer that will show some more of the story and introduce a new voice actress for the two new characters. Should be getting it up really soon.
Like you, I hope that the developer does not change the designs, and also there is no news of an update.
Thanks for your feedback. The VN is still in active development. Just did a little more work on it tonight. Originally my plan was releasing a demo, a few trailers and then releasing the full, finished game after a few months of manic work. In retrospect this was an extremely optimistic plan for a novice amateur developer with a day job working on his first VN (with collaborators who also have other obligations).
Getting there! All the voice lines, art and most of the programming for early access is done. I just need to do a bit more SFX mixing and early access will be ready. There might be a bit of placeholder stuff, and it might be a bit rough around the edges in parts (I am not sure I will have the music quite like I want it) but I said I would get early access out by the end of the year (December 31st) and I am really gonna try and stick to that. Thank you for your patience!
Thank you so much for listening to my feedback. You understood my initial request to a T.I DMed you
Hey there! Thank you for the detailed feedback. I appreciate it so much! I'm going to see what can be done to add more transition CGs to try and tighten up the relationship between text and visuals. If you want to PM me or reply with a spoiler tag to suggest which scenes could use an extra CG variation, and what they would be, then I would be happy to take those on board.Being a deeply, deeply submissive woman myself, I found the game incredibly satisfying. In all honesty, It's probably the most enjoyable visual novel I've played to date.
I bought the game and played through all of version 0.6 in one sitting, even the parts I'd already played through in the demo.
The artwork, especially from the "chief and shaman scene" onwards, was absolutely terrific, though I think the game could definitely do with more in-between shots, and perhaps an extra image for every scene so that it doesn't feel like the shots linger on still-frames for too long. The visual presentation did sometimes get quite out of sync with what was actually happening dialogue-wise.
Speaking of which, both the narration and dialogue was worded really well. I loved all of the euphemisms you used and never felt like sentences were poorly written. It all meshed very well.
The voice actress did an absolutely wonderful job bringing the character to life. I can't sing her praises high enough. She really breathed life into every single line of dialogue and made the character feel THAT much more believable. Her performance as Lysandra is definitely a highlight of the game.
As far as the story goes, I've enjoyed it a great deal, but...
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Thus far, the game's a 9/10 for me personally, but it would've been a 10/10 if only the visual representations of what's happening didn't drift out of sync with what's happening in text so often.
Keep up the good work, Periapt. I look forward to the full version of the game!
I'm currently in the early stages of making a visual novel myself and know how difficult it can be to write scenes that flow well, so take your time to make sure everything is just right. Looking forward to the first ending and all endings to come.
