VN Others Completed Magic Slavery [Kexboy]

[XJ347]

My issues.

• This isn't a game, but a story. This is 100% linear.
• Only uses one image per sex scene. =(
  
• The sex scenes feel SUPER hallow. No emotion in them because the sex sex scenes are so short. Just an image to show they happen and move on. I am here for the description, if I want stills, I would look at porn on the internet.
  
• LOL the author says forced blowjobs aren't rape. What an idiot.
  
• They joke that one has larger breasts than the other, but every women's body in the game looks the same.
• No easy way to skip text at first glance. Crappy game engine I guess.
  
• I still don't know who the main character is to be honest. Is it the girls? I feel like it's the enslaver, but he isn't in every scene. IMO the fact I'm confused shows a major problem.

So much lost potential here. Feels like 4/10 where the potential is supremely high because of the non standard story, and good art style.

I actually liked

• Rape content where it's actual rape
• Art is really good

 

[yoyomistro]

I think Id rather play the blonde asshole that manipulates than being the chicks that get manipulated.

Yea, but I imagine at some point they get the magic artifact from him, and exact some femdom justice on the asshole =P. I know some of y'all don't like that shit but if it goes that route I'll probably give it a download.

 

[allenandarth]

wow we don't even play...we got no choice only to click foward...WHY!

 

[Gomly1980]

wow we don't even play...we got no choice only to click foward...WHY!

Kinetic novel that's why.

 

[Gomly1980]

Sad thing is the arts pretty good and the concept does sound interesting.

I haven't played his other stuff so can't comment on how good or bad of a developer he is, I can only go off what I see here.

Potentially it could have been fantastic but it feels a bit ... shallow, I guess and i'm not a fan of rape at all.

 

[Adirtymexican666]

Thoughts 0.4.0
Great art but the story and writing is terrible. lot's of illogical moments and awkward dialog.
it's even missing mandatory things like saving,text history,hiding UI/Text to see images.

in short it needs improvement.

 

[TuxedoMask]

My issues.

• This isn't a game, but a story. This is 100% linear.
• Only uses one image per sex scene. =(
  
• The sex scenes feel SUPER hallow. No emotion in them because the sex sex scenes are so short. Just an image to show they happen and move on. I am here for the description, if I want stills, I would look at porn on the internet.
  
• LOL the author says forced blowjobs aren't rape. What an idiot.
  
• They joke that one has larger breasts than the other, but every women's body in the game looks the same.
• No easy way to skip text at first glance. Crappy game engine I guess.
  
• I still don't know who the main character is to be honest. Is it the girls? I feel like it's the enslaver, but he isn't in every scene. IMO the fact I'm confused shows a major problem.

So much lost potential here. Feels like 4/10 where the potential is supremely high because of the non standard story, and good art style.

I actually liked

• Rape content where it's actual rape
• Art is really good

Thank you for the in-depth review!

 

[UncleVT]

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Devlog 0.5.0:
- new content (include NSFW)

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[dantesonofsparda]

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Devlog 0.5.0:
- new content (include NSFW)

download (ver 0.4.0):

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so i cant get the download to work on itch io or this site cuz of a file missing
i keep getting an error

 

[dantesonofsparda]

and the the game wont even pull up it is version 4.0

 

[Teddy]

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Magic Slavery Demo.exe - System Error
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The code execution cannot proceed because MSVCR110.dll was not found. Reinstalling the program may fix this problem.
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OK
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I also get this error. Did you work out how to fix it?

 

[gue5t]

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[Visty]

new link for 0.5 version?

 

[billbo]

0.5 is out. anyonr got it?

 

[UncleVT]

Added v0.5.0 to OP.

 

[Pakson666]

How fix it?

 

[Orlox]

Sad thing is the arts pretty good and the concept does sound interesting.

I haven't played his other stuff so can't comment on how good or bad of a developer he is, I can only go off what I see here.

Potentially it could have been fantastic but it feels a bit ... shallow

Unfortunately that's pretty much how all his games are. It's sad because some of them have really nice art and they start with an interesting theme but they end up being very short, shallow and disapointing.

 

[UncleVT]

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Devlog RC 0.6.0:

• final scene
• new arts for adult
• 500+ words in the new dialogues.
• 2 diferent endings

 

[2524.]

if i understand good...

we play as both women and we are submitted to an blonde guy who can do everything he want with us ?

i m right ?

Judging from that 3rd thumbnail that shows the guy groping them with a 1st person perspective ... it looks confusing.

 

[Homilion]

Why are they choices if you can't take them? When remembering the spell to remake the paper I tried choosing a wrong option and it didn't even open a dialog or some alternative text before doing the right thing.