Not to sound ungrateful but you should probably just look at the official walkthough and just add the stuff he hasn't instead of making one like this.Now finally, Walkthrough 0.5.7 (Two versions) (with no issues)
maybe that would make the creator stop making his though idk..if he just kept it up to date with the release of the game that'd be cool, though I assume he only releases walkthoughs 1 update behind.