RPGM Completed Mary’s Undercover Investigation of the Mansion of an Unscrupulous Politician [v1.0] [Yellow Ribbon Dress]

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morgy121

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Fun little time waster of a game... But...
Check the formatting. The word wrap can be increased, the text is only taking half the text box and often giving blank boxes because of run-on. And there are multiple occasions where the speakers name appears in the text box instead of at the top of it because it's formatted incorrectly.
And I'd recommend doing a find and replace on "teacher". The bad guy politician is constantly being referred to as teacher because of the translation.
And minor one, the detective levels aren't translated in the status screen.
I hate to be one to complain about free stuff, but this is all stuff that could have been picked up with a quick run through of the game to check it.
Still, thank you for your work.
 

Varik8876

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Hmm, well i got the password from overhearing the two people in the records room, which is chocolate/champagne and oranges or something like that, just where do I use it, the door wanting a password does not accept it, and there appears to be nowhere else to interact with either.

Honestly though most games like this really need a decent walkthrough to go with them, as most people will get along fine, but now and then you just end up sitting there going, well now where.
 

Emerald_Gladiator

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Fun little time waster of a game... But...
Check the formatting. The word wrap can be increased, the text is only taking half the text box and often giving blank boxes because of run-on. And there are multiple occasions where the speakers name appears in the text box instead of at the top of it because it's formatted incorrectly.
And I'd recommend doing a find and replace on "teacher". The bad guy politician is constantly being referred to as teacher because of the translation.
And minor one, the detective levels aren't translated in the status screen.
I hate to be one to complain about free stuff, but this is all stuff that could have been picked up with a quick run through of the game to check it.
Still, thank you for your work.
Just checked the game for about 5 minutes and I was gonna post this.
There are a plethora of errors in formatting. The text itself is "understandable", but for someone who works with Japanese AI translations for a living, I can tell pretty easily that it's directly translated from Japanese without concern for context or editing.

I dunno why this guy is saying he's a "translator" when this is literally AI-translated and completely unedited.
This is EXACTLY why MTLs should die, because it only encourages laziness and more of this trash; Westerners are probably conflating bad H-games with bad translations when in reality, if we actually had localizers or even native speakers who'd at least attempt to work on a translation, we could have quite a few decent translations of desired H-games.

At the very least, edit your MTLs. It's really not that hard to correct these things.
Don't be like that broken dude who literally breaks games because he doesn't know what he's doing when "translating".
 
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hentify.net

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Just checked the game for about 5 minutes and I was gonna post this.
There are a plethora of errors in formatting. The text itself is "understandable", but for someone who works with Japanese AI translations for a living, I can tell pretty easily that it's directly translated from Japanese without concern for context or editing.

I dunno why this guy is saying he's a "translator" when this is literally AI-translated and completely unedited.
This is EXACTLY why MTLs should die, because it only encourages laziness and more of this trash; Westerners are probably conflating bad H-games with bad translations when in reality, if we actually had localizers or even native speakers who'd at least attempt to work on a translation, we could have quite a few decent translations of desired H-games.

At the very least, edit your MTLs. It's really not that hard to correct these things.
Don't be like that broken dude who literally breaks games because he doesn't know what he's doing when "translating".
I'll admit I had some problems with the line breaks on this one, it was actually the first game I did.

If you check out my latest work, which I spent a long time editing and reviewing, you'll notice a significant improvement.

Still, I figured I'd post this as I had it!
 

Emerald_Gladiator

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I'll admit I had some problems with the line breaks on this one, it was actually the first game I did.

If you check out my latest work, which I spent a long time editing and reviewing, you'll notice a significant improvement.

Still, I figured I'd post this as I had it!
Fair enough. I hope you can improve this one.
 

hentify.net

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Fair enough. I hope you can improve this one.
Ask and ye shall receive.. well I was working on it anyway.

All issues should now be fixed, more editing, UI fully translated, line breaks issue resolved, consistent and more accurate character names are in the updated links in the main post.
 

Zippix

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Out of morbid curiosity: is there actually a true end or something, because there seems to be literally nowhere to go (without getting a "bad" end) after finding the underground prison? Being a LV5 Expert (lol) detective doesn't help much... xD

(Such a lazy game btw; basically stupid and stupidly basic - love how even the gallery room essentially has no indication which effing scene you want to watch when interacting with the flames . "Do you want to watch erotic scene #?"; that's it.)
 

The_VN_Critic

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Reminded me of my favorite ending to Detective Girl of the Steam City.
Get too cocky about ones abilities and end up as merchandise. would have loved this as a dedicated story for Sophie. Also needed more time with the auction failures themselves. Reusing CG with new context felt like a letdown for what should have been various unique situations depending who she was sold to or at what point in the story she was caught.
 

morgy121

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Out of morbid curiosity: is there actually a true end or something, because there seems to be literally nowhere to go (without getting a "bad" end) after finding the underground prison? Being a LV5 Expert (lol) detective doesn't help much... xD
There is, you can safely escape. But I don't remember it well enough to guess which part you're at. Did you get to the point of disguising yourself as a guard?
 

Zippix

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There is, you can safely escape. But I don't remember it well enough to guess which part you're at. Did you get to the point of disguising yourself as a guard?
Well, I remember I unlocked the "master detective" level, which lets you disguise, I'm assuming it was near the very end-game, after making it to the underground prison, but there was simply nowhere to go after - in one way there was the gay secretary with some goons, the other, a lone guard - I'm assuming you probs could commence at this place - but I got caught immediately when approaching, no prompt to try to disguise myself or whatever; and I'm pretty sure I didn't miss any conversation or "quest" (lol) or pickable item.

Doesn't really matter now, already deleted it - was taken to the gallery room after one bad end, so I assumed maybe it was inevitable. Looked at the scenes (very meh), then decided to part ways, but still thanks for trying to help!
 
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