VN Ren'Py Abandoned Measuring My Cum [Ch. 4 v4.0c] [Suzinak]

[Aner878787]

Glad this great game seems to still be going on.

 

[Ssisy]

I would really like to see an update. This was one of my few games I played here. This lady is stunning. Any other game with similar character?

 

[Devilman122]

Still no update...This game is dead.

 

[Loumax]

Still no update...This game is dead.

I guess we just have to give the creator some time ... he's back recently and creating and rendering the scenes takes time.

 

[lipe2410]

I guess we just have to give the creator some time ... he's back recently and creating and rendering the scenes takes time.

Well, he already got more than a year to make it. It's a lot of time, actually

 

[WALKUR]

 

[DanThaMan]

From reading that ^^ Asmodeus_ im guessing you no longer work on this game?

 

[Asmodeus_]

From reading that ^^ Asmodeus_ im guessing you no longer work on this game?

It's true! I'm just a player like you, hoping the new chapter will be released soon enough

 

[DanThaMan]

It's true! I'm just a player like you, hoping the new chapter will be released soon enough

Your writing is great it's a shame you left, i just hope that the new writer is at least as good as you were!

 

[Asmodeus_]

Your writing is great it's a shame you left, i just hope that the new writer is at least as good as you were!

I really appreciate your kind words! It means a lot!

And we have no idea for now. There's no way he could bring the same quality, not because I have some big idea about myself, but mostly because each writer is unique. There's no way to emulate/replicate the fucked up things I have in my mind

I just hope that the new writer is competent enough to give this project what it needs to continue

 

[lukachandrika]

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what is the relation between the next chapter and the new author , this chapter has already been written and most of the renders are done .

 

[atvlongjump]

I really appreciate your kind words! It means a lot!

And we have no idea for now. There's no way he could bring the same quality, not because I have some big idea about myself, but mostly because each writer is unique. There's no way to emulate/replicate the fucked up things I have in my mind

I just hope that the new writer is competent enough to give this project what it needs to continue

Man, hopefully it can at least hold up a little bit. The way you was telling it, was pretty great from what I was seeing. Along with it having some of the nicest renders, but that can only help it so much. Story is what really brings it together. Thanks for the work you did on the updates before you left.

Question though, are they gonna just completely redo the story again? or is it continuing from where you left off? Just curious if you happened to know.

 

[Asmodeus_]

Man, hopefully it can at least hold up a little bit. The way you was telling it, was pretty great from what I was seeing. Along with it having some of the nicest renders, but that can only help it so much. Story is what really brings it together. Thanks for the work you did on the updates before you left.

Question though, are they gonna just completely redo the story again? or is it continuing from where you left off? Just curious if you happened to know.

Thank you for your kind words! It means a lot to me!

For the second part, I have no idea. They might use Chapter 04 as I wrote, they might go on a different direction, or they might completely change the narrative. It's up to Suzinak and the new writer to decide. Whatever happens, I hope it lives up to what we've managed to create so far

 

[Asmodeus_]

Well I hope they remove the landlady's "psychological problem" bc it doesn't fit the narrative whatsoever. The PC's being femdommed by his landlady but apparently she's only doing it cus of a mental illness and he's taking advantage of it to fuck her. So what even is the power dynamic here?

Also the illness just drops out of the blue without having any relevance to the PC's or landlady's character beyond being an all-purpose justification for roleplaying as naughty aunt/sis/etc., which she could be doing anyway without having epileptic fits. If it's supposed to be psychosis/schizophrenia, that's not how that works. People suffering from those mental disorders aren't better at roleplaying/acting. The mood swings/character shifts are a symptom of mental illness which limits their ability to control thoughts and emotions, not a conscious choice.

I can understand your criticism, but to me it feels like watching the first 1,5 hours of fight club (it's a 2 hour movie) and then complaining that it doesn't make sense!

I know it's not the norm for Visual Novels, but every point you mentioned has its reasons (oh and it's not "magic" or a "dream" for those that have seen a lot of movies ).

Unfortunately, since this collaboration didn't work out in the end, you're not going to find out!

I can confirm though:

• She's not "femdom-ing" the MC because of a supposed "mental illness". There's a very rational explanation for that in CH4 and I hope that the part that I wrote gets out unedited so you can find out
• The MC is not "taking advantage" of any supposed "mental illness". He disagrees with her methods, but his feelings stem from love. And we've already seen that hers stem from love too. The MC is not some malicious guy looking to "date-rape" her or take advantage of her!
  
• Marge's behavior (what you say is an "illness") doesn't drop out of the blue. It's just the story starts from the middle. The start of the story and why Marge behaves this way is supposed to be given as the narrative progresses.
• And it's not "psychosis/schizophrenia". I'm not gonna say what it is, because that's the whole story!

 

[Zane11]

I can confirm though:

• She's not "femdom-ing" the MC because of a supposed "mental illness". There's a very rational explanation for that in CH4 and I hope that the part that I wrote gets out unedited so you can find out
• The MC is not "taking advantage" of any supposed "mental illness". He disagrees with her methods, but his feelings stem from love. And we've already seen that hers stem from love too. The MC is not some malicious guy looking to "date-rape" her or take advantage of her!
  
• Marge's behavior (what you say is an "illness") doesn't drop out of the blue. It's just the story starts from the middle. The start of the story and why Marge behaves this way is supposed to be given as the narrative progresses.
• And it's not "psychosis/schizophrenia". I'm not gonna say what it is, because that's the whole story!

If as the game progresses, it becomes apparent that the plot has been changed, would you then tell us what you had originally planned as the reason for Marge's behavior?

 

[Asmodeus_]

She falls unconscious and he just rolls with it every time with a couple lines of inner thoughts wondering about it. Unless he's extremely callous and immature he'd take her to a doctor right then and there. You might object that this is a porno land game so maybe shouldn't be taken so seriously, but then why the overly complex framing device to begin with?

Nothing in the story up to the first h scene has any inkling of the landlady suffering from mental/coronary disease to the point where she chronically loses consciousness. When it does happen the PC gives no indication it or anything like it has happened before. In fact, no indication that the PC and landlady have sexually desired each other before that point. Again, to me, it's basically a weird random reason to "justify" the quirky roleplay-based land sex. Which I don't see the point of given both the genre and plenty more believable (albeit morbid) alternative reasons for an eccentric cloistered upper middle class single landlady household to culminate in the Devil's Tango.

It's like if Fredo conspires with Roth against Michael cus he's stupid and didn't understand what was going on, rather than his resentment as the neglected middle child that was set up and developed from the beginning of the story. Plot twists should be woven into the narrative not random stuff you can shock the audience with and justify post hoc. Just my two cents in the spirit of healthy debate. Hope your own projects are faring well!

You're right on these points! I guess it falls down to style and preferences

Thank you for your kind wishes!

 

[Asmodeus_]

If as the game progresses, it becomes apparent that the plot has been changed, would you then tell us what you had originally planned as the reason for Marge's behavior?

Well the plot is certain to change from what I have in mind about this story after Chapter 05. That's because I haven't written much after Chapter 04. It's just an abstract scenario with no details. If the new writer and Suzinak choose to utilize what I have already written that's okay with me.

For now I don't plan to release anything about the story. I don't want to alienate fans of MMC and it doesn't matter what I had in mind. Let's focus our hopes that the next release for MMC comes out soon and the writing is amazing

 

[Zane11]

Well the plot is certain to change from what I have in mind about this story after Chapter 05. That's because I haven't written much after Chapter 04. It's just an abstract scenario with no details. If the new writer and Suzinak choose to utilize what I have already written that's okay with me.

For now I don't plan to release anything about the story. I don't want to alienate fans of MMC and it doesn't matter what I had in mind. Let's focus our hopes that the next release for MMC comes out soon and the writing is amazing

Fair enough, it was worth a try

 

[ar1122]

update when???

 

[ramvivat]

Well I hope they remove the landlady's "psychological problem"

heh...
If this is a problem, then it cures another problem. and error by error produces the correct result. always look at the result. because sometimes, keeping up with everyone, you nevertheless come to the wrong place where you need to ... if everyone goes in the wrong direction for you, and you are simply captured by the human flow.
in fact, I admire the role-playing mother's decision - a kind of managed schizophrenia, which allows both - mother and son - to save their mental health by doing a socially condemned thing.
it is another matter why the mother did not hire a prostitute on a permanent basis - another question, but since it was not discussed "in the frame", we will consider that such a solution is not possible within that continuum.

By the way, using the services of prostitutes is also not approved by society, isn't it?
that is, we actually have a "fork of decisions" or zugzwang - wherever you go, you will be wrong. and you can’t go anywhere either - the son’s health problem will not solve itself, the doctor requires a report on the course of the disease.

comrade, always try to get away from hypocrisy by condemning others, sticking labels on them.