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rakieten900

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The game had a status of "abandoned" let's hope now everything is up to date :D amazing VN, the next update will be awesome
 

Radon671

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My feedback about update.
The good:
-Suzinak returned!
-Renders and animations are still good. (Asmodeus stated he saw drop of quality in renders he received year ago)
The bad:
-Significant downgrade in dialog writing and plot. It even looks like discontinuation between Ch. 3 and Ch. 4. Also i see small plot hole: in first scene of update Marge is not role-playing. She never did it before and pretended she never touched her son. Why she freely HJ her son as "Marge" is not explained.
-Marge is no longer femdom kinky bitch.
 
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ramvivat

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and who can tell me exactly what room the MC has on the second floor, if you count right from the stairs? those two rooms that look out onto the living room - I saw the layout of these rooms from the game "Proud Father" - these are two square rooms. Then when you go up the stairs you immediately come across the door to the toilet with a small shower. and where is the MC room, which is L-shaped?
 

submissive -Ben83

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My feedback about update.
The good:
-Suzinak returned!
-Renders and animations are still good. (Asmodeus stated he saw drop of quality in renders he received year ago)
The bad:
-Significant downgrade in dialog writing and plot. It even looks like discontinuation between Ch. 3 and Ch. 4. Also i see small plot hole: in first scene of update Marge is not role-playing. She never did it before and pretended she never touched her son. Why she freely HJ her son as "Marge" is not explained.
-Marge is no longer femdom kinky bitch.
I feel that game will maledom instead witch is a majore let down marge is a goodess dommy mommy i want her back, was sad that the dev removed the best femdom scene in the game.

R.I.P Mistress Marge
 

HerbertIronsides

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Note that copyright lasts much longer than 20 years. Also note that something is copyrighted upon completion in a recorded format (anything from handwritten pages, to recorded on tape, to video-taped, to saved as a computer file).

[Yes, I'm aware this is a pirate games forum. If you're going to steal something, you should at least be aware you are doing so.]

If the original author could prove they wrote it, then stealing it verbatim would in fact open one up to legal action.

In other words, if it was published (electronically) in 2006, that does matter.
Yeah because some random writer from 06 is going to 1. care at all or even know, and 2. Have the money and time to take legal action which would become public and throw there name in with a incest porn work. Its nonsense that they needed to worry about the previous author at all. Sure reaching out was a smart and nice thing to do but if they dont exist online anymore then it was fair game. I think it was just used as an excuse by the dev to do their own thing and frankly it sucks compared to the og story.
 

ramvivat

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after Marge kissed Jacob, tears of tenderness appeared in my eyes - oh my god, this is fucking wonderful! =)
will there be dates? oh please, it will be so touching!


But I don’t understand why this idiot didn’t kiss his mother’s neck or shoulder when during the day he fucked her between her thighs and painted her back white? it would be a gentle and wordless expression of gratitude - and just as eloquent as “thank you, I love you!”
Jacob wants his mother to treat him like an adult man, and he didn’t think of the simple thing of showing gratitude to the one who did him a favor.
although - this is probably the cost of the years when his mother treated him like a child? - who knows..
 
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I feel that game will maledom instead witch is a majore let down marge is a goodess dommy mommy i want her back, was sad that the dev removed the best femdom scene in the game.

R.I.P Mistress Marge
I don't really think they're going to remove the femdom aspect of the game, probably the dev will just add some more renders and dialogues in that specific scene.
Let's be honest, that scene on their own doesn't make that sense in the narrative, i think Suzinak will add more sophie's dialogues or some office sections with both Marge and Sophie to justify her actions.

Nonetheless, the male dom wasn't about pure sex fanservice but about MC growing up and also showing to us how Marge really cares about her son.
Remember that the first lines of the game was about how oppresed MC felt about his relationship with his mom.

Let's see what will happen in the next 2 years update :KEK:.
 

ramvivat

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Jun 28, 2022
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I feel that game will maledom instead witch is a majore let down marge is a goodess dommy mommy i want her back, was sad that the dev removed the best femdom scene in the game.

R.I.P Mistress Marge
hmm older dominatrice can be sub for younger dominator. it is ok.
dom\sub it is not a constant but variables because dom or sub is always relative to somebody.
Mistress Marge is not RIP - she is only sub of Jacob but still she is Mistress to some other man or woman.

remember the MC from “grandma’s house” - he had Madame Samantha whom he was a puppy and at the same time he was the Master for Jasmine - he is at the same time and dom and sub.

... and Marge too.
 

motseer

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Dec 17, 2021
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Sadly this isnt true. The original Literotica Story is amazing and at first they were just copying it but they felt like they needed to get the og writer credit and ask for its use but since it was such a long time ago they could not find them. Obviously it doesnt matter it was like you said 2006 but instead they decided to rewrite the story in their own style and it sucks ass compared to the og. So a promising 3d adaptation of a great porn story was ruined and turned into just another bad story generic MS incest game.
This would very likely still be considered plagiarism if the original author decided to press the issue. Jus' Sayin'
 
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Assman_6969

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sad that the dev removed the best femdom scene in the game.
I was very much suprised to see that scene removed completely and apparently things that were planned from prior updates on progress to show supporters was also canned. I really could care less, all I was concerned with was getting more Marg! While that scene removed was a very good scene it was completely ridiculous when trying to follow the whole idea of the story itself with a big WTF smack in the head! I mean the dude was and still at that point was doing the whole measuringof his cum because HIS DAMN COCK AND BALLS WERE HURTING HIM PRETTY BAD HE CLAIMED, AND HEY MA, HE SAID IT HURT MOST WHEN ERECT! The cunt not only ties his hands but shoves her fuckin thong in his mouth so he can't do shit about it. I mean sure walk off but no guy is doing that hard and horny! Myself when the 1st one was given would have looked at her eyes and kicked her leg hard as she hit and if she did it again I would CUNT PUNT THE BITCH HARD! I mean I get it here we have the same type of weak and pathetic virgin mc that every other game to play has just another mc who is a quiet virgin nerd without any friends or any type of experience with females but his reaction here is just pathetic and by end it is embarrassing and sad how we get no real life ways of talking to her about the whole ordeal especially after the bitch did really lie no matter her bullshit wordplay he still did not get to cover the tits, she does it! The scene after I would never do that shit either and I would have painted the whores face soon as I was rdy to cum and make sure to say I covered your tis this time, that face to huh!?! Nite and fuck your rules haha!
The headache shit is retarded and her suddenly stopping in this updates last scene and only offering her dumb hand was a big let down for what seemed like a good ending to the update! It was going great with how things progressed and mc finally speaking up like a human male with 2 testies, albeit 2 small girly testies, he finally snapped! BUT FOR SOME REASON WHICH NONE AT ALL ARE GOOD EVER THE WHOLE ENDING RUINED THE EPISODE GOING 3 STEPS FORWARD AND WITH MINUTES TO GO THE SHIT HITS FAN AND WE SLAM BACKWARDS ALL THE WAY TO STARTING LINE GOING BACK 10 STEPS! If you wanna see how to ruin progress just play chapters this game! Marg is visually a 10 but her as an overall character just went from 6 to 1 or 0 really. As soon as she gets on bed the dev should go back and scrap that shit and let the fuck play out at least with her 2nd "headache" back to bitch mom then act like they didn't do much but got him off and leave the room and not going back to the lame no balls mc who is a bitch and is in his confusing state we get all over after him finally snapping but back to the dbag and his dull inner monologue......

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Orichan

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I was very much suprised to see that scene removed completely and apparently things that were planned from prior updates on progress to show supporters was also canned. I really could care less, all I was concerned with was getting more Marg! While that scene removed was a very good scene it was completely ridiculous when trying to follow the whole idea of the story itself with a big WTF smack in the head! I mean the dude was and still at that point was doing the whole measuringof his cum because HIS DAMN COCK AND BALLS WERE HURTING HIM PRETTY BAD HE CLAIMED, AND HEY MA, HE SAID IT HURT MOST WHEN ERECT! The cunt not only ties his hands but shoves her fuckin thong in his mouth so he can't do shit about it. I mean sure walk off but no guy is doing that hard and horny! Myself when the 1st one was given would have looked at her eyes and kicked her leg hard as she hit and if she did it again I would CUNT PUNT THE BITCH HARD! I mean I get here mc is a quiet virgin nerd without any friends or any type of experience with females but his reaction here is just pathetic and by end it is embarrassing and sad how we get no real life ways of talking to her about the whole ordeal especially after the bitch did really lie no matter her bullshit wordplay he still did not get to cover the tits, she does it! The scene after I would never do that shit either and I would have painted the whores face soon as I was rdy to cum and make sure to say I covered your tis this time, that face to huh!?! Nite and fuck your rules haha!
The headache shit is retarded and her suddenly stopping in this updates last scene and only offering her dumb hand was a big let down for what seemed like a good ending to the update! It was going great with how things progressed and mc finally speaking up like a human male with 2 testies, albeit 2 small girly testies, he finally snapped! BUT FOR SOME REASON WHICH NONE AT ALL ARE GOOD EVER THE WHOLE ENDING RUINED THE EPISODE GOING 3 STEPS FORWARD AND WITH MINUTES TO GO THE SHIT HITS FAN AND WE SLAM BACKWARDS ALL THE WAY TO STARTING LINE GOING BACK 10 STEPS! If you wanna see how to ruin progress just play chapters this game! Marg is visually a 10 but her as an overall character just went from 6 to 1 or 0 really. As soon as she gets on bed the dev should go back and scrap that shit and let the fuck play out at least with her 2nd "headache" back to bitch mom then act like they didn't do much but got him off and leave the room and not going back to the lame no balls mc who is a bitch and is in his confusing state we get all over after him finally snapping but back to the dbag and his dull inner monologue......

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"I was very much suprised to see that scene removed completely and apparently things that were planned from prior updates on progress to show supporters was also canned. I really could care less, all I was concerned with was getting more Marg!

While that scene removed was a very good scene it was completely ridiculous when trying to follow the whole idea of the story itself with a big WTF smack in the head! I mean the dude was and still at that point was doing the whole measuringof his cum because HIS DAMN COCK AND BALLS WERE HURTING HIM PRETTY BAD HE CLAIMED, AND HEY MA, HE SAID IT HURT MOST WHEN ERECT!

The cunt not only ties his hands but shoves her fuckin thong in his mouth so he can't do shit about it. I mean sure walk off but no guy is doing that hard and horny! Myself when the 1st one was given would have looked at her eyes and kicked her leg hard as she hit and if she did it again I would CUNT PUNT THE BITCH HARD!

I mean I get here mc is a quiet virgin nerd without any friends or any type of experience with females but his reaction here is just pathetic and by end it is embarrassing and sad how we get no real life ways of talking to her about the whole ordeal especially after the bitch did really lie no matter her bullshit wordplay he still did not get to cover the tits, she does it!

The scene after I would never do that shit either and I would have painted the whores face soon as I was rdy to cum and make sure to say I covered your tis this time, that face to huh!?! Nite and fuck your rules haha! The headache shit is retarded and her suddenly stopping in this updates last scene and only offering her dumb hand was a big let down for what seemed like a good ending to the update!

It was going great with how things progressed and mc finally speaking up like a human male with 2 testies, albeit 2 small girly testies, he finally snapped! BUT FOR SOME REASON WHICH NONE AT ALL ARE GOOD EVER THE WHOLE ENDING RUINED THE EPISODE GOING 3 STEPS FORWARD AND WITH MINUTES TO GO THE SHIT HITS FAN AND WE SLAM BACKWARDS ALL THE WAY TO STARTING LINE GOING BACK 10 STEPS! If you wanna see how to ruin progress just play chapters this game!

Marg is visually a 10 but her as an overall character just went from 6 to 1 or 0 really. As soon as she gets on bed the dev should go back and scrap that shit and let the fuck play out at least with her 2nd "headache" back to bitch mom then act like they didn't do much but got him off and leave the room and not going back to the lame no balls mc who is a bitch and is in his confusing state we get all over after him finally snapping but back to the dbag and his dull inner monologue......"
 
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