- Sep 6, 2017
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for people who actually wanted to read it :
"I was very much suprised to see that scene removed completely and apparently things that were planned from prior updates on progress to show supporters was also canned. I really could care less, all I was concerned with was getting more Marg!
While that scene removed was a very good scene it was completely ridiculous when trying to follow the whole idea of the story itself with a big WTF smack in the head! I mean the dude was and still at that point was doing the whole measuringof his cum because HIS DAMN COCK AND BALLS WERE HURTING HIM PRETTY BAD HE CLAIMED, AND HEY MA, HE SAID IT HURT MOST WHEN ERECT!
The cunt not only ties his hands but shoves her fuckin thong in his mouth so he can't do shit about it. I mean sure walk off but no guy is doing that hard and horny! Myself when the 1st one was given would have looked at her eyes and kicked her leg hard as she hit and if she did it again I would CUNT PUNT THE BITCH HARD!
I mean I get here mc is a quiet virgin nerd without any friends or any type of experience with females but his reaction here is just pathetic and by end it is embarrassing and sad how we get no real life ways of talking to her about the whole ordeal especially after the bitch did really lie no matter her bullshit wordplay he still did not get to cover the tits, she does it!
The scene after I would never do that shit either and I would have painted the whores face soon as I was rdy to cum and make sure to say I covered your tis this time, that face to huh!?! Nite and fuck your rules haha! The headache shit is retarded and her suddenly stopping in this updates last scene and only offering her dumb hand was a big let down for what seemed like a good ending to the update!
It was going great with how things progressed and mc finally speaking up like a human male with 2 testies, albeit 2 small girly testies, he finally snapped! BUT FOR SOME REASON WHICH NONE AT ALL ARE GOOD EVER THE WHOLE ENDING RUINED THE EPISODE GOING 3 STEPS FORWARD AND WITH MINUTES TO GO THE SHIT HITS FAN AND WE SLAM BACKWARDS ALL THE WAY TO STARTING LINE GOING BACK 10 STEPS! If you wanna see how to ruin progress just play chapters this game!
Marg is visually a 10 but her as an overall character just went from 6 to 1 or 0 really. As soon as she gets on bed the dev should go back and scrap that shit and let the fuck play out at least with her 2nd "headache" back to bitch mom then act like they didn't do much but got him off and leave the room and not going back to the lame no balls mc who is a bitch and is in his confusing state we get all over after him finally snapping but back to the dbag and his dull inner monologue......"
