Thank you for your feedback. Sorry that the story didn’t vibe with you.
The original story wouldn’t be as exciting as a character development. IMO to make an interesting story it needs some challenge, a conflict. In the original story, after their first few encounters, there would be no further development. It would just be a series of sexual positions.
That’s why we created this storyline; to bring an interesting evolution to the characters. Femdom won’t be the focus of this game, but there will be several femdom themes. Sorry if that’s not your thing.
I'm so happy to see this is back!
After my posts i felt a bit bad tbh, i made a lot of fuzz about copyright and other stuff that most games here are in violation in one way or another im pretty sure of, so even tho they were and still are my honest thoughts / standpoint on the matter it wasent completly fair if i had thought about this more beforehand. For example i do know that all illusion games dont have rights but are lucky enough that illusion games isnt doing anything and VAM has also way too much daz based characters so i doubt much legal content will ever be created with that tool and then there is the issue that its most likely most devs are using daz content without license too ... so me raging on about story copyright were a bit over the top in the end even in my own book.
I was thinking about writing this before and saying that it doesent matter as much and that i dont wanted to kill this off but i kept silent about it since i wasent alone about my feelings about the og text not really fitting and that if that story would have been followed the vn would go nowhere anyway and your statement to think this over gave me hope that this would come back even better, which it did imo.
I'm really happy for you, seeing that things worked out, cause i find the new text and changes much more fitting and a it is a step up from the og text and has already lead to better content.
I see people complaining (there will always someone complain about something
) about femdom, but i think they may have missed or forgotten that this was already part or nature of the orig story and the behaviour of the characters and if they had read it they would have also a better picture of were this were going.
Also if it had followed the orig story things would have gone into lots and lots of repeating never ending asshole licking to the point were it would have become a rather boring read and view.
The orig story featured also much older granny type woman as mom and doctorwere not described as young and pretty as they are in this story but with flappy ass and grey hair as the writer was clearly into much older woman and had a major tongue in ass fetish which is a highly unhealthy practice that makes me kinda gag everytime i see it but i do have an open mind and if others like that what do i care.
The story teased something that came to mind and was played around with regarding company i wont go further into as it would probably spoil things but if this is going into a similar direction i think most of the og story cornerstones would still be present with just enough changes to stay in its own.
So imo everybody should be very happy that things have changed at least a bit cause i dont think that many people would have liked that story played out, true to its origin.
Even tho femdom isn't my cup of tea per se either, as i'm not into golden showers, boot licking, cockcages and cuckhold stuff and all that stuff, it is my believe that a more dominant character and behaviour is fitting for an ic setting as moms are by default in control and in position of power, so it makes total sense.
I think light bondage and playful rp is mainstream nowadays and even tho if it is a female dominant part it is at least to this point int the story way off from what i would associate with real femdom.
It also doesent have to make a male a wimp to let a woman take control a from time to time. As it is known that people that have control in their day to day life are seeking a fantasy or sex life were they can give it up to relax a bit.
That may also lead to mom giving up here dominant side at some point from time to time as she like to please too and she is in a dominant career position so she fit that part too.
The turn for the persona change and the role play is also way better than anything the og story had to offer and it is wonderfully open for lots of scenarios and things that can be done in an otherwise limited scenario with limited character involvement.
Her being breaking free from here own inhibitions and repression in these kinda blackouts mixed with rp is a real gem for a writer as its for example as powerful as a time machine in the scenarios a writer can go in his story. So i see this as a good sign and it is showing that the writing is going somewhere. It is going pretty fast but since these things takes ages to make better a bit too fast than too slow imo. The beginning of the vn could be stretched a bit and it could use maybe some scenes to let people get a feel of the relation of the pair before the measurements. But i have to admit it would probably a bit boring and therefor i rather see this not fleshed out than missing other naughty content tbh.
Even if it turns out, that in the end, i wont like were the game may end up due to kinks, i would still stand by my opinion that the changes / rewrite is a step up for the game and is a general positive change for better.
Sorry for another wall of text, but i thought a simple thumbs up werent enough after my previous comments.
It is a bit out of order maybe as i did jump around a bit trying to converse my thoughts and im not an english native as is probably easy to see so that makes this even worse ..
I have to admit that if it stays this way i would see myself throw some money at you later on but im not sure yet were this is going and i would prefer a one time payment over steam or direct purchase of some sort over paypal to do my part as opposed to a sub.
Big thumps up tho text now is on par with renders and animations.