This new version lost something. The story unfolds totally different and compared to the original, I don't like it. I think I see where it's going.
It's intriguing, and definitely adds more to the generic story we'd usually get, but I think this would've been beter served as a retelling of the original story. So, finish the original story first and then make Measuring My Cum: Retold, or something.
If I look at this game without prior knowledge of the first two chapters before the rewrite, it's actually very solid. I do feel the role playing aspect came a little too easy. It might've been more natural if Marge did one or two acts as herself and then suggested the role playing because she wasn't comfortable.
I don't like the femdom, but considering the direction I think the game is going in, it makes sense. The scene where Marge brings MC tea in bed was actually the hottest scene to me, because it felt real. No role playing, just the tension between Marge and MC. I think that tension is the best part of this game. I hope, once the 'other' arc is concluded, we'll see more genuine stuff without the role playing.
The renders and animations are phenomenal. So many games look spectacular but have animations that make your eyes hurt. Don't put animations in your game if they look crap. But the devs of this game don't have to worry about that. These are some of the best animations I have seen.
I'm interested to see where this is going, but I can't help but feel sad I won't see the original story finished.