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Exactly the quality that I have come to expect from a solo developer when it comes to translation. Maybe the dev will at least invest in a better translation program, if not find a network of proofreaders at the least...
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Secret Jealous Lesbian Best Friend. I'm calling it here!
I just hope there is a playthrough where I can have them Both. They're both super sexy!
I just hope there is a playthrough where I can have them Both. They're both super sexy!
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Nice first release.
I mostly liked the looks of the characters, but some of their personalities seem a bit... over the top, shall I say? MC's friend comes off as an idiot and a bit of a douche, daughter's BFF is a grade A bitch, and her threats and aggressiveness towards her gay friend get old really fast. Not a fan of this kind of "humor".
Maybe it comes down to cultural differences, I don't know?
The renders are nice, and the story sounds promising. Dialogues definitely need a good proofreader though.
I mostly liked the looks of the characters, but some of their personalities seem a bit... over the top, shall I say? MC's friend comes off as an idiot and a bit of a douche, daughter's BFF is a grade A bitch, and her threats and aggressiveness towards her gay friend get old really fast. Not a fan of this kind of "humor".
Maybe it comes down to cultural differences, I don't know?
The renders are nice, and the story sounds promising. Dialogues definitely need a good proofreader though.
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I'm having a hard time getting into the story with that broken english flow. On the side note, what are the planned fetishes besides the "friend" plot.
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No, you don't.
I also saw those errors in the game, I downloaded the English version, to see how you were doing with that.
I must say that you have done a good job, I also have a lot of problems trying to make a game in English, being Spanish my native tongue.
I found your game entertaining, the daughter and the friend are quite sexy, I hope her friend is just "friend-jealous" and not "lesbian-jealous". I hope that the gay friend, is just the humorous part, I found it quite funny (if it's something else, it would take all the fun out of it).
And I hope the MC's friend and his son don't turn out to be just another problem to worry about.
At the beginning you threw a warning, so I hope that the decisions at least are clear of which one is the best, (no things like: If I dress in brown and green I get the girl. But if I dress in brown and light green someone else fucks her).
Of course you decide what to put in your game, we can only hope.
I wish you good luck with your game and that you get as much support as possible.
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Never get an option to sleep at their apartment for that scene.
Clearly it should be after getting kneed in the nuts after falling down, but I didn't see an option to stay there.
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I didn't get it either, she just showed him the house they hugged then he left
Yup, same for me. I assume it's just part of the second version he hasn't made public yet.
I could edit the script myself, but because it is a Renpy archive format file (.rpa) i get a compression error when i save it with the "atom" text editor? Shame really.
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verde123 : me gusta su juego, la "amiga" sin tetas grandes ni culo gordo, el humor y jugarlo en español. Hay un hilo de traducciones en español en F95, seguro que hay mas gente de españa y hispanoamerica interesada en su juego, si quieres puedes publicar un post en el hilo para dar a conocer tu cojonudo juego. Suerte con tu proyecto
Great start
Keep it slow like this
It's nice to see a story with the main character who's not horny as soon at he see his "friend"
dialogs are very nice and funny (Marcos top !)
graphics are great
I love the fact that the MC don't understand the relation between the 2 girls.
To resume
A very great beginning
Keep it slow like this
It's nice to see a story with the main character who's not horny as soon at he see his "friend"
dialogs are very nice and funny (Marcos top !)
graphics are great
I love the fact that the MC don't understand the relation between the 2 girls.
To resume
A very great beginning