VN Ren'Py Abandoned Meeting Her [v0.3.2.1] [Verde]

[m0us3r]

Good start. Considering limited resources, renders and characters are OK.

Fernanda is beautiful, I wish other women in the game be as cute as her.

I think Santiago is more funny than stupid, and maybe in the future he would surprise us with some deep understanding...

Best wishes, Verde, keep up the good work!

 

[bagodoughnuts]

If we can set the relationship, why can't we set the ages? Is it possible to mod that?
The english translation needs a bit of work, but it is easy to understand.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Well.. Even F95 barely tolerates age changing stuff..

Also with the Grandma of the game, no way the daughter would have been able to get out sooner then she did.

 

[m0us3r]

Well.. Even F95 barely tolerates age changing stuff..

Also with the Grandma of the game, no way the daughter would have been able to get out sooner then she did.

Well, in my country girls can marry since 14, in Mexico since 12 (not in all territories though), and in some Muslim countries even earlier. So there is nothing illegal if some player in his country sets the age of LI at 15, for instance. Or at 33 maybe, why not...

Demanding from everyone to follow WASP ideology is chauvinisme and double standards, IMO.

Moreover, when Japan relaxed laws about pornography, the amount of sex crimes reduced significantly. So such censorship can be considered immoral and harmful for people and societies.

And it seems that much more harm comes from massmedia than from computer games.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Well, in my country girls can marry since 14, in Mexico since 12 (not in all territories though), and in some Muslim countries even earlier. So there is nothing illegal if some player in his country sets the age of LI at 15, for instance. Or at 33 maybe, why not...

Demanding from everyone to follow WASP ideology is chauvinisme and double standards, IMO.

I mean yea.. But Patreon is US based and goes off US laws, and that is where the dev is hosting the game.

 

[m0us3r]

I mean yea.. But Patreon is US based and goes off US laws, and that is where the dev is hosting the game.

Of course, but the model looks adult, so setting age doesn't violate anything, is it?

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Of course, but the model looks adult, so setting age doesn't violate anything, is it?

True, don't see that it's needed though.

Since it would mess the story up, unless the dev added an older character that came with the girls instead of Santiago.

 

[m0us3r]

True, don't see that it's needed though.

Since it would mess the story up, unless the dev added an older character that came with the girls instead of Santiago.

I think it's the same as customizing names: it's not really important or necessary... Just for someone it could be nice to name a girl Gabi and set her age 17, rather than Fernanda and 19...

PS. And in my experience girls at the age less than 18 travelled a lot, even on their own.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

I think it's the same as customizing names: it's not really important or necessary... Just for someone it could be nice to name a girl Gabi and set her age 17, rather than Fernanda and 19...

PS. And in my experience girls at the age less than 18 travelled a lot, even on their own.

True, but we know the Grandma in the story probably wouldn't have allowed it.

But yea, setting age could be interesting.

 

[jake141199]

Look very promising! Will keep an eye on this one. looking forward to next update heads up, try and keep watch of grammar. while there was nothing too bad or off putting there were a few mistakes.

overall I think it was an excellent start to what could be an amazing play.

 

[Forgotted]

In some states you can marry at 15 w parental consent and maybe 14 if pregnant and you have parental consent, not positive about that one.

I was confused at first, I didn't realize the MC was the father. Since it asks what relation, I chose brother/sister. So that threw me off for a bit. My fault probably.

Since the grammar is so bad, it's hard to put up with. I tried because I thought it could be a great story. At some point, I just clicked as fast as I could to get through the first part w the two guys talking because it was boring and went on and on forever. I was also antsy to meet my 'sister'. After finally meeting her, I ended up deleting the game. I was really hoping it would be a good love story, and it might be, but it's too distracting w the grammar errors that really kill the vibe.....

Good luck though.

 

[CellStudios]

The real question here should be, why would anybody want the character to be younger than 18? that's just freakin weird and way shady

 

[m0us3r]

The real question here should be, why would anybody want the character to be younger than 18? that's just freakin weird and way shady

Totally agree with you. And why would people use specific names for Love Interests in games? As if, you know, they wanted to imagine their real daughters in place of those characters... Ewww...

Though, on the other hand, when I was 15, there was that girl I liked... She was younger than 18 years old though, so I never had the balls to actually tell her about my feelings... And then she moved away... Now I think, what if I relive my memories of her with the help of a game?.. Weird. But understandable I guess...

Uhm, sorry for the offtopic.

 

[CellStudios]

Totally agree with you. And why would people use specific names for Love Interests in games? As if, you know, they wanted to imagine their real daughters in place of those characters... Ewww...

Though, on the other hand, when I was 15, there was that girl I liked... She was younger than 18 years old though, so I never had the balls to actually tell her about my feelings... And then she moved away... Now I think, what if I relive my memories of her with the help of a game?.. Weird. But understandable I guess...

Uhm, sorry for the offtopic.

I can understand why people want to name characters after there own family ( some people actually have attractive family members, sadly I don't ) and most people ( just like myself ) don't actually want any kind of sexual relationship with their own family, it's just the taboo of it all. So they name characters after their own family for the familiarity of it but wouldn't actually want a real relationship with them, that's my two cents on it anyway

 

[lalapopoland]

The real question here should be, why would anybody want the character to be younger than 18? that's just freakin weird and way shady

Nothing wrong with finding 15 year olds attractive and wanting to fuck them. Definitely nothing wrong with it if it's a fictional game also.
Seems to me you need to start thinking for yourself for once.

 

[CellStudios]

Nothing wrong with finding 15 year olds attractive and wanting to fuck them. Definitely nothing wrong with it if it's a fictional game also.
Seems to me you need to start thinking for yourself for once.

I'm sorry but did you just admit you wanna fuck kids?

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[aulito]

i don't think age really matters for this game, you can play with your own imagine and pretend the age, but please respect the writer. the only matter for this game is to have a proofreader so the story won't lose the vipe.

 

[ShaddyGames]

Made a quick and dirty WT mod. Also corrected some of the grammar at the beginning. I'll finish the rest of the grammar corrections and create a thread for the mod after I get some sleep, but here's where it's at right now. All current important choices are labeled with points.

 

[Pulse12]

Discord Link pls?

The first build was good. The two main girls have killer models. I'm hoping for a slower build up in relationships, lots of times these games advance at unbelievable paces. My one complaint is that the intro with Marcos is wayyyy too long. It might turn away a lot of new people, it almost made me give up.

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Discord Link pls?

The first build was good. The two main girls have killer models. I'm hoping for a slower build up in relationships, lots of times these games advance at unbelievable paces. My one complaint is that the intro with Marcos is wayyyy too long. It might turn away a lot of new people, it almost made me give up.

Marco was there to point out that the MC has friends and a life, only difference from other games the first friend is a guy..