Story is progessing nicely.
There needs to be something done with the Rebecca side character. A bit of drama needs to come out of it if you have got her as a lover of sorts.
This does have good quality in the storyline, and has a good strong lead in for the main characters. DMD also has a good strong storyline as well. Overall a solid story so far, needs a bit of drama with some of the storyline choices, with side characters. Decisions made earlier have an impact mid to late story is one of the things I am enjoying with the Melody story concept.
Corruption doesn't need to be added to this, but Melodies father-in-law needs to have a stronger impact mid story, where some of the choices will lead to a confrontation. Choices made will either keep him in the story till the end or write him out of the story. To write him out, will require having a subquest that may need to neglect Melody.