Ren'Py Memory ParadoX [Beta P2] [Lewd Core Games]

[SpyderArachnid]

the theme of the prologue confusion You just got your memories wiped out, so you will have no clue of what's going on. The game is already AI-translated and proofread, so at this point I will need another human being to help.

In episode one, we will have the side character's backstory and the rest of the core information. Let's say they are isolated in that place for so much time. Maybe there are some people who don't like each other.

I mean, if my memories were wiped and I had no idea what was going on, my first thought wouldn't be to have sex with a doctor. It'd be to find out what the heck is going on first. It's like, you wake up finding out you have a dick and no memories, and the first thought is, sex? I'd be like, why the fuck do I have a dick!? What the hell happened!? lol

The problem I'm seeing is as a player, we are forced into sexual situations with some people yet have no idea who they are. Like the doc shows up, and we have sex with her. Yet, as a player, I have no idea who she is. And then the scene in the bathroom with some random girl blowing you, no idea who she is, and that's the only time you ever see her. Just blowjob alright bye.

The MC seems to know who all these people are, yet as a player, we have no idea. But they have no issue sticking their dick in them. So, it seems it is selective memory loss, as they still remember who all these people are. Shame that the player has no idea.

 

[Nick_Rock90]

Is this a female/female futa/female focused style of game?

 

[Lewd Core Games]

I mean, if my memories were wiped and I had no idea what was going on, my first thought wouldn't be to have sex with a doctor. It'd be to find out what the heck is going on first. It's like, you wake up finding out you have a dick and no memories, and the first thought is, sex? I'd be like, why the fuck do I have a dick!? What the hell happened!? lol

The problem I'm seeing is as a player, we are forced into sexual situations with some people yet have no idea who they are. Like the doc shows up, and we have sex with her. Yet, as a player, I have no idea who she is. And then the scene in the bathroom with some random girl blowing you, no idea who she is, and that's the only time you ever see her. Just blowjob alright bye.

The MC seems to know who all these people are, yet as a player, we have no idea. But they have no issue sticking their dick in them. So, it seems it is selective memory loss, as they still remember who all these people are. Shame that the player has no idea.

So instead of a story, you want a journal and a codex of every character as soon as they appear? If I lost one year of my memories, would I have to become a saint? and not interact sexually with anyone. The MC just didn't stop living for 1 year. This 1-year version maybe did some progress with the girls. And they did have a past. Have some little imagination, please. This is just the prologue.

 

[Jake the flake]

just an fyi, chrome blocked the download as dangerous but since no one else has mentioned anything it's probably an issue on my end.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

So instead of a story, you want a journal and a codex of every character as soon as they appear? If I lost one year of my memories, would I have to become a saint? and not interact sexually with anyone. The MC just didn't stop living for 1 year. This 1-year version maybe did some progress with the girls. And they did have a past. Have some little imagination, please. This is just the prologue.

It's a visual novel. It's your story. Why would I need to use my imagination instead? You play a visual novel to read the story (well, some of us do lol), not to imagine my own story. It's on you to tell me the details of your story, not me to imagine what they are. That would defeat the whole purpose of me playing your story.

And honestly? A codex would be awesome lol. I love codex in games. A place to store information on characters, locations, history, etc. This way the player can check that information themselves instead of getting info dumps in dialogue.

Personally, I didn't know we are still in a prologue. There was nothing saying we are in a prologue. All I know is this is the second release you've done. And from playing the first and second release, I still have no idea what is going on with the story. Even others mentioned they are lost in this story, so, it's not just me.

I get the main character lost their memories, but I'm not the main character. I'm the player. And as a player, I'm lost at what is going on. But if that's the way you want it to be, then sure, it's your story after all. Not telling you to change anything, just talking about my experience from playing it. That's all.

 

[damnedfrog]

Is this a female/female futa/female focused style of game?

Futa on female for sure, as the MC is a futa and already has sex with females.
From the planed tags, futa on male is planed, and should be avoidable.
Lesbian is also in the planed tags, but unless it some kind of flashback or the MC can return being a female, I suppose female on female will be between NPCs.
I don't think there will be futa on futa, as the character become a futa by accident, and from what we now for now she's the first.

 

[max_z_smith]

just an fyi, chrome blocked the download as dangerous but since no one else has mentioned anything it's probably an issue on my end.

Was that via VikingFile? Windows Defender gets unhappy with anything from that host, even though it's safe.

 

[Lewd Core Games]

It's a visual novel. It's your story. Why would I need to use my imagination instead? You play a visual novel to read the story (well, some of us do lol), not to imagine my own story. It's on you to tell me the details of your story, not me to imagine what they are. That would defeat the whole purpose of me playing your story.

And honestly? A codex would be awesome lol. I love codex in games. A place to store information on characters, locations, history, etc. This way the player can check that information themselves instead of getting info dumps in dialogue.

Personally, I didn't know we are still in a prologue. There was nothing saying we are in a prologue. All I know is this is the second release you've done. And from playing the first and second release, I still have no idea what is going on with the story. Even others mentioned they are lost in this story, so, it's not just me.

I get the main character lost their memories, but I'm not the main character. I'm the player. And as a player, I'm lost at what is going on. But if that's the way you want it to be, then sure, it's your story after all. Not telling you to change anything, just talking about my experience from playing it. That's all.

So let's go with codex then.

 

[the X hunter]

MC's looks before mutation and after, I need to see that. Thank you

 

[Nikephouros]

Will there be any futa on futa, or male on futa? I enjoy futa X female but personally futa X futa is soo hot

 

[Birdnman993]

Positive things, the MC is a powerful, vigorous, herculean, corpulent, robust, flame-haired Amazon.

Maybe I'm being ridiculous on this but I feel like this looks really silly, the MC suspended in space looks like it's a film set and there's a green background.

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Another thing to rethink (I think) at the beginning is to situate ourselves a little bit, who are you ? who am I ? why are you sucking my dick ? No homie love ? No hug ? It is taken for granted that the MC remembers Laura, a little thoughtful introduction would have been nice.

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I don't understand very well these proportions, we are supposed to be bigger and muscular but here the elf looks the same or taller, is this a mistake or the elves have a different physiology?

sorry in advance if I'm being silly.

 

[Lewd Core Games]

Positive things, the MC is a powerful, vigorous, herculean, corpulent, robust, flame-haired Amazon.

Maybe I'm being ridiculous on this but I feel like this looks really silly, the MC suspended in space looks like it's a film set and there's a green background.

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Another thing to rethink (I think) at the beginning is to situate ourselves a little bit, who are you ? who am I ? why are you sucking my dick ? No homie love ? No hug ? It is taken for granted that the MC remembers Laura, a little thoughtful introduction would have been nice.

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I don't understand very well these proportions, we are supposed to be bigger and muscular but here the elf looks the same or taller, is this a mistake or the elves have a different physiology?

sorry in advance if I'm being silly.

She was on heels. Aside from her mother, who is closer to her height, no one comes close. I'm going to take the opportunity while I rework part one to create an introduction environment for each character, nothing too complicated. For those who want more information, the codex cited in the upper thread is going to be finished. the "space" was to simulate a dream was an HDRI even though it was 4k, it didn't look like it. I tried to use a map but that's resulted in a gloomy situation.

 

[Lewd Core Games]

Will there be any futa on futa, or male on futa? I enjoy futa X female but personally futa X futa is soo hot

male on futa Maybe, but futa on futa is kind of hard considering the plot. I'll have to poke a big hole and ruin the reason why the MC became a futa in the first place. probably I'm going to do some renders off script with that theme

 

[Nikephouros]

male on futa Maybe, but futa on futa is kind of hard considering the plot. I'll have to poke a big hole and ruin the reason why the MC became a futa in the first place. probably I'm going to do some renders off script with that theme

I appreciate the answer. I do love the game so far!

 

[Lewd Core Games]

I appreciate the answer. I do love the game so far!

Stay tuned. this is not going to be the only one, at least in this year.