- Jun 23, 2018
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Remember, just before the game started, the organizer said someone was going to be late so just start without him. That would have been the brother.Wasn't it also stated that in "hide and fuck" game, intercourse is in the dark so at first guy and girl doesn't know who they fuck? And there guys were running with lights (the one in the barn and also the one who fucked Serena)
Story is still great, but I would found it more kinky if total darkes would be the scene.
It was also said that girls don't know which guys participate, and there they were starting from the same courtyard. In such case Jill would know that her brother participates in the game (maybe she knew). Couldn't it be organized that guys start from another place?
I know, I'm looking for a hole. As I said great story, but there is still a place for improvement in consistency ;-)