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VN Ren'Py MILF Games [v0.1] [Scarlet Tales]

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oidex

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Scarlet Taless said:
What other typos? We would be thankful if you could point them out.
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Sorry, I kinda deliberately stopped paying attention after the 10th or so.
But there is basically a little bit of everything:

Random capitalization inside parenthesis.
(She chuckles coldly). vs (defiant, though his voice shakes slightly)

Text in parenthesis randomly has punctuation inside, outside or not at all.
See above plus (She snapped her fingers.)
Sometimes even the parenthesis themselves are missing.
In a quieter, more discreet tone. You realize you just scared the hell out of Ryu!

Random use of semicolons instead of ellipses to denote pauses.
Sometimes sentences end with a comma (not a pause).

Oddly placed hyphens like For them, it's a game-breaking friendships, pitting friends against each other
Took me a hot second to realize that did not read as "game-breaking".

Missing articles like He came to States a while back with his sister Yuna

Wrong speaker
m2 "Anytime, Ryu. Just make sure you don't embarrass yourself when you do." instead of m1

More direct typos:
"Okay with that setaled," settled
"let me show you what I have for you guy's." guys

Stuff like that.
It just generally doesn't really feel proofread.
 
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odbpm said:
sad its forced mc name:cautious:
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To each their own, but I personally loathe forced "pick a name" games... best of both: default name, but allow changing. If only every bloody dev would do that... and put the bloody name change in the settings, not at the start of the game.

Just curious, do you use your own name for these things, or what? Why are you, and others, so anti reading a novel with a name the dev picked?
 
Ozygator

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Larry2000 said:
I read that first line and I instantly hated the MC. Please don’t describe your characters in these terms. It’s cringe. There’s room for irreverent humor, not in the synopsis. XD

That said, I think the renders are good and I love the couple dev team! Good luck!

P.S. are the tags in the list fully finished?
There aren’t gonna be any surprises? No En Tee Argh?
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Huh, never knew giving basic personality types is "cringe". Be interesting to see what bland, banal, self-congratulatory or maybe self-deprecating BS you describe your characters as. Since you're so worried about 'cringe' we can assume they are all beta-boys who worry more about what others think than forging their own path.. ;)

People with self-esteem don't give a fuck about someone's supposedly 'cringe' bullshit, just saying...
 
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Ozygator said:
Huh, never knew giving basic personality types is "cringe". Be interesting to see what bland, banal, self-congratulatory or maybe self-deprecating BS you describe your characters as. Since you're so worried about 'cringe' we can assume they are all beta-boys who worry more about what others think than forging their own path.. ;)

People with self-esteem don't give a fuck about someone's supposedly 'cringe' bullshit, just saying...
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First off, what did I do to you? Are you having a rough day or something? I didn’t attack the Devs, I said one line was cringe. That’s it. I don’t understand why my one statement caused you to light into me like I just committed a war crime.

Just saying huh? You made a lot of assumptions because of one statement I made. I normally get along with you, I don’t understand why you had to be so hostile.

To bring this to the actual game, the renders look good and the lighting is excellent! Just saying ;)
 
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Yeah I cant say i enjoyed this one all that much to be honest. First the mc and his friends are obviously morphed from female models and they looks like crossdressers. They are incredibly effeminate and look like they are wearing mascara.
The so called milf game is just incredibly creepy and the way the mc reacts and argues with his mom about it is peak loser behavior. The mc just had no redeemable quality's for me whatsoever.
You couple this with the non changeable mc name which is honestly a baffling decision, its really become a standard practice in adult vns across the board and not sure how with the 10 or so audio options in the game but sounds where still playing at full volume with them all turned down. This needs alot of work if its going to turn it around into something decent.
 
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Ozygator said:
Huh, never knew giving basic personality types is "cringe". Be interesting to see what bland, banal, self-congratulatory or maybe self-deprecating BS you describe your characters as. Since you're so worried about 'cringe' we can assume they are all beta-boys who worry more about what others think than forging their own path.. ;)

People with self-esteem don't give a fuck about someone's supposedly 'cringe' bullshit, just saying...
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This comes off as someone very fragile. People with self esteem don't give a fuck but you flew off. Nice.
Self aggrandizing usually isn't a sign of self esteem. It's a sign of insecurity, or the type of pride that is overbearing.

Words are cheap. I'd rather the story show us those characteristics than try to speak them at the player in a synopsis.
 
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