- Oct 9, 2018
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Thanks so much for the feedback! Personally I was not trying to make my characters cartoony, I was hoping to design them similar to the characters in the game, which I felt (especially celia and caroline) had somewhat unrealistic figures, as I made them. Thanks anyway, I will try to improve it! I totally get what you are saying about the MC, and I definitely agree. Though I should warn you: if you don't like this MC, you're going to hate ICstor's older games...The Milfy City guy looks like a grandfather compared to them. If you want a game with fairly realistic figures, (definitely a better main character) and a very active fan art community, I would definitely suggest checking out being a DIK as well.There's nothing wrong with your art, it has a recognisable style. I'm no fan of your more cartoony bodymorphs, but that's just me. No need to discuss taste here. The more realistic fysiques appeals more to me. I only hate MC for reasons I stated before.
And you're right, your joker does look good and gets the job done, while staying true to the nature of this thread. You did more work on him than you'd usually do otherwise, since you had to mix and match wardrobe. It's just in the original story he has nothing remotely manly about him apart from a big Cock. He's shorter than any of the women except Sara. And looks like a slightly overgrown 12year old. Nothing any woman I know would even bat an eye at.
MC would be better with a little more visible age, a bit more meat on his bones (no need to make him a bodybuilder though) and maybe a bit of stubble on his chin.
Even if you don't want to make much effort creating males there are plenty of ready made assets available that greatly overclass this Kenji puppet. I haven't even touched on males yet. So far I only have Caroline, and I'm here for similar reasons you are.
To learn Daz, get feedback and keep having new material made with my favorite adult game/story females. ICstor hasn't delivered anything in ages, this is my go to place for my fix on Caroline, Linda and company.
By all means keep doing what you do and don't take my comment as anything you have to follow. You do you and I can only state what I like or not, but that's essentially my problem, no need to make it yours. I should have a render ready to post later today, feedback will also be appreciated.
Cheers mate.
By the way: Your Caroline render is excellent. Sorry I can't be of any help with your issue