- May 16, 2017
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In my time here I would say in general, yes.
RPGM seems to be one of the least liked.
Personally there are some RPGMs that are good, but they require either minimal running around or it is very obvious where you have to go. Not like the 1st day after school, being told Victor dropped you at home, but you were at the school and had to find my way back.
Switching to Ren-Py, on a basic level it's pretty simple to get started and there is lot of help available here and online.
Unity is more complex, but it the more versatile in that you can build full 3d worlds in it, but you don't need it for a VN. Oh the other thing about Unity, it send stats back to Unity, no thanks.
There are other engines but they get more complex and resource heavy or less versatile.
Whatever you decide, your artwork is very special, so please let us see your talents one way or other.
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The art is too high quality, no way you can create meaningful amount of content each month with that style.
"For example, small monthly updates only contain 1 scene whereas the large update contains 2, and probably some non-sexual scenes as well depend on the schedule.". 4 scenes a month is optimal and this is quite a bit less which is a problem.
Harold/victor look like some "heres how a psychopath interprets human facial emotions" thing from psychology textbook.
The writing seems to be done by a novelist with no experience writing for porn games. Too long scene, too many words.
The mom-son relationship is too mundanely regular. Not enough going on to lead to incest.
Theres no femdom with those character designs and setting? Weird.
Poor pacing. Have a better trickling of sex scenes or promises/teasing of future if you keep playing. This is pretty dumpy. Why wasn't the blonde introduced giving a basic bj to a student? Would utilize elements of taboo, abuse of authority, stairway to heaven etc. Now it's a scene I dont understand the utility of, maybe it's explained hidden in the text that I skipped trough.
Rpgm is perfect as an engine for this kinda game but it's not utilized perfectly. Too large or confusing map design, no real quest design, no map or quest journal yet. Seems more of a doing shit as you go along instead of executing a plan based on experience. Lots of failed to load images errors relating to img/pictures folder.
"For example, small monthly updates only contain 1 scene whereas the large update contains 2, and probably some non-sexual scenes as well depend on the schedule.". 4 scenes a month is optimal and this is quite a bit less which is a problem.
Harold/victor look like some "heres how a psychopath interprets human facial emotions" thing from psychology textbook.
The writing seems to be done by a novelist with no experience writing for porn games. Too long scene, too many words.
The mom-son relationship is too mundanely regular. Not enough going on to lead to incest.
Theres no femdom with those character designs and setting? Weird.
Poor pacing. Have a better trickling of sex scenes or promises/teasing of future if you keep playing. This is pretty dumpy. Why wasn't the blonde introduced giving a basic bj to a student? Would utilize elements of taboo, abuse of authority, stairway to heaven etc. Now it's a scene I dont understand the utility of, maybe it's explained hidden in the text that I skipped trough.
Rpgm is perfect as an engine for this kinda game but it's not utilized perfectly. Too large or confusing map design, no real quest design, no map or quest journal yet. Seems more of a doing shit as you go along instead of executing a plan based on experience. Lots of failed to load images errors relating to img/pictures folder.
holy balls, the artwork is amazing. definitely going to throw in some money to support this artist
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Even though it looks good for art work but it seem to be having lots of bugs. i had a black screen after talking to the aunt. or atleast i think she was the aunt.
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OK just run through it.
Artwork for the women, beautiful. MC - blanked faced presumably to imagine your own there and Victor is just warped.
Script - far too wordy, especially the fap scene with the head, 1) too much reading/picture 2) so much it was covering the picture.
Grammar/spelling really need to get a proof reader or is it a native English speaker lots of daft errors.
Didn't come across any bugs just hit the hard end after the aunt scene - some notification would be nice.
Too much running around, but that's the nature of too many rpgms.
Advertised as incest content, but calling mum and aunt by first names, just makes it seem like landlady and her sister. Just loses the taboo aspect of it.
Artwork for the women, beautiful. MC - blanked faced presumably to imagine your own there and Victor is just warped.
Script - far too wordy, especially the fap scene with the head, 1) too much reading/picture 2) so much it was covering the picture.
Grammar/spelling really need to get a proof reader or is it a native English speaker lots of daft errors.
Didn't come across any bugs just hit the hard end after the aunt scene - some notification would be nice.
Too much running around, but that's the nature of too many rpgms.
Advertised as incest content, but calling mum and aunt by first names, just makes it seem like landlady and her sister. Just loses the taboo aspect of it.
Art is really pretty. Going to give it a try later.
Thanks！
Thanks for the feedback!
The blonde wasn't introduced with a bj scene or even a sex scene has some reasons, first and most important of all, we didn't have a "bitch" tag for her, give it another thought, we need a character that has that tag cuz we have none at the momment lol.
Mom/Son relationship will have some progress in the future, if you want to give any advice I can invite you to the discord chat since it's public anyway.
Again, the game was launched online in a hurry cuz we ran out of funds, much more quickly than expected. Will definatly make it much better as time moves on.
it's interesting, we kept running around minimal, literally almost no side quest, just story after story, and it is still too much. Will try to fix words cover the picture issue.
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Arts look good really damn good, keep pushing out content and give it a polish you will be able to attract lot of attention.
This coming from a gangbang addict who get turned off by vanilla shit will pledge to your patreon.
This coming from a gangbang addict who get turned off by vanilla shit will pledge to your patreon.
choose "Pay attention" instead of "Check out girls", the later leads to bugs, sorry.Same here
Thanks. Sigh, we had half of the game planned for Gangbang and humiliation stuff, but Patreon dude............... We will launch a DLC in the near future, it's about Rome, and gangbang~ hope you will like it