VN Ren'Py Abandoned MNTRS [v1.2] [DescoNTR]

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Cab-boe

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FOR AROUND 120 DOLLARS A MONTH OR SO (I DON'T KNOW EXCHANGE RATES) YOU CAN HAVE THIS GUY CREATE A VN FOR YOU. I WOULD CONSIDER HAVING HIM MAKE SOMETHING HORRIBLY EMBARRASSING BUT...
 
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Saint Blackmoor

Saint and Sinner
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THIS IS THE STORY OF DANIEL, WHO LIVES WITH HIS MOTHER AND IS VERY PROTECTIVE OF HER, BUT LITTLE BY LITTLE, HE REALIZES THAT HIS MOTHER IS NOT AS GOOD AS HE THOUGHT AND MUCH LESS WHEN HE IS CLOSE TO MALIK, HER BOYFRIEND, WHO LITTLE BY LITTLE IS HER CORRUPTING TO SUCH AN EXTENT THAT HE IS NO LONGER INTERESTED IN HIS SON KNOWING HIS DARK AND PERVERTED SIDE.
No need to yell, bro! :LOL:

I corrected the grammar for you. Just copy this comment.
 

Cab-boe

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I corrected the grammar for you. Just copy this comment.
Umm... I don't think that counts. Valiant effort though.

'This is the story of Daniel. Daniel lives with his mother and is very protective of her but, little by little, he realizes that she is not as good as he thought. Much less when she is close to Malik, her boyfriend, who corrupts her little by little to such an extent that he is no longer interested in her son knowing his dark and perverted side.'

It's still awful but that's how it should be written.
 
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