Okay, so this looks like a raging garbage fire. I'm going to DL and check this out just to see how many sins this game commits.
Sin 1 - Right out of the gate, using a version number designation that starts at 1 is a personal pet peeve of mine. Version 1.0 designates 'going gold', the release version of the final product. Earlier versions should be numbered less than one (e.g. 0.xx), and later patched/updated versions should be above one (e.g. 1.xx).
Sin 2 - When you uncompress the archive, the game's root folder is 'MNTRS-1.0', which just reaffirms Sin 1 and also is its own snafu since the version listed and downloaded is obstinately labeled as 'MNTRS-1.2'.
Sin 3 - Magenta text on a generic design explosion of bullshit, also colored in magenta, which is a UI readability/usability
faux pas. Also, even the game lists itself as version 1.0, indicating that zero fucks were given in keeping anything organized here.
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Sin 4 - Punctuation marks are almost entirely nonexistent. You'll get the occasional comma, perhaps even a question mark, but you'll only ever see a period if you happen to get more than one sentence per slide (which is incredibly rare). Meaning the game reads mostly as one massive run-on sentence.
Sin 5 - Incorrect gender usage, almost assuredly indicating the writer is not a native speaker (or is just sloppy as hell). When the MC is talking about their mom, the usage should be '...headache to be
her son...' and not '...
his son...'. Him/her gets mixed up all of the time, and is incorrect far more often than it is not.
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Sin 6 - MTL translation. Here I am giving the dev the benefit of the doubt and assuming that the absolute garbage fire that is the sentence structure of this game is due to it being translated through an early 2000's version of Babblefish, rather than anyone with an actual brain putting in the effort.
Sin 7 - The MC and his freind Trevor are munchkins. They each have the body of a twelve year old, with the shrunken head of an adult slapped on top; and it is very creepy looking to see an adult facial structure and proportions on this 'kid' body.
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Sin 8 - Everyone is an idiot. Trevor lies on the floor to look up under the mom's dress in the most moronic plan ever, and she's seemingly oblivious to it. The 'children' drop terms like 'big black cock' in actual dialogue that the mom is present for with zero reaction. Trevor gets stuck in a bathroom for some unexplained reason (the only way this makes any sense is if he was using the
en suite bathroom for the mom's master bedroom, but NONE of that is explained, nor why he'd use that as opposed to any other bathroom in the house). MC acts like a jealous boyfriend, not a child. Mom is indignant that son acts like a jealous boyfriend, but also ignores that the writer has written her to be dude-magnet that needs to constantly fend off attention.
Sin 9 - The dev thinks we're idiots too. QOS branding on the mom's underwear that the 'children' remark upon. More QOS branding on other clothing. Just signposting everywhere that YES THIS IS INDEED A GAME ALL ABOUT BBC JUST INCASE YOU MISSED IT BUT JUST TO MAKE SURE HERE IT IS BILLBOARDED ACORSS ALL HER CLOTHING IN A WAY THAT NOBODY WOULD EVER DO IN ACTUAL REALITY OH SHIT THE GAMES DESCRIPTION IS CORRUPTING MY BRAIN
Sin 10 - Mislabeled dialogue. There are instances of where the dialogue being spoken is assigned to the wrong person, and makes this cluster fuck harder to parse than it already is. The example below ONLY makes sense if the mom says it as an excuse to get the kids to close their eyes as she enters the room to retrieve something, giving the dev a zero effort peeping scene.
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Sin 11 - Everything is ugly. Come on. You're using 3D models someone else made and you bought off of some asset storefront, so how do you manage to make the mom this fugly? All they had to do was not give her a dead-eye stare and fuck with her proportions until she looked like a poorly inflated balloon, and they fucked it up.
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Sin 12 - Fucking pick an age! Are the kids actually kids? Then have them act like kids, and not middle-aged perverts. They look like they're not ready to have the 'Birds and the Bees' talk, but they're talking like frat-boy dipshits. The mom keeps calling them 'children', but they're not written like children. Children don't almost climax from just smelling a pussy. They're super creepy author-insert personas there expressly for the lewds, and now I need a long shower to wash all this filth off of me.
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Sin 13 - Staring into the middle distance. Can't even be bothered to have two characters
look at each other when they're talking.
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Sin 14 - The dev doesn't know how to hug people. Given how stilted the interaction between these supposed 'humans' are, it really shouldn't surprise me, and yet it did. They can't even get two character models to embrace each other in a hug without it looking freakishly unnatural. Either the dev is an actual extra-terrestrial who has only ever had human interaction explained to them second hand by perverts, or the dev has never actually been hugged in real life. Either checks out.
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Sin 15 - Complete lack of subtext.
Sin 16 - I don't think I have enough booze to get through the rest of this shit...
Sin 17 - Unintentionally hilariously misgendered pronouns, turning the BBC bull into a pedophile. So, yeah, that's a thing that happens.
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Sin 18 - The edgelord gets turned up to 9,000 when the dev tries their hand at macho ebonics for Malik. Imagine the most white-bread sheltered sad sack incel, and now imagine them trying to write a black bad-ass as imagined by a perverted teen on a Mt. Dew bender that had watched
Bad Boys II on repeat over a weekend and just now discovered internet porn. Now imagine all that, but also wrung through the auto-translation wringer to boot.
Sin 19 - Dev is really into child torture? I get that there are loli, tentacles, and non-con content around here. But making a child eat the cum out of his comatose mother's ass under threat of a beating? That's somehow a new low on a site with games that contain forced impregnation by monster insects.
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Sin 20 -
Who the fuck is this even for? Even if you are someone who enjoys BBC cuckolding, surely you prefer that content to not treat the audience as if you have the IQ of a mildly warm potato, right? At the end of the game the dev begs for money, with the promise of potential animations once the dev gets upgraded hardware. At this point the potential for animation in this game would be a
threat more so than a promise, given the level of quality for everything else. If you turned playing this into a drinking game and simply took a shot every time you noticed a grammatical error (missing punctuation, missing capitalization, misgendered pronouns, etc.), you'd die of acute alcohol poisoning and liver failure before you reached the end of the game.
