The game look like crap if you look at most of the images on the first post, so I would recommend to post some better images, as much of the art is good.
The introduction should be changed, you have to lose several times over in a fights which takes long time to complete. In some cases, it seems to work somewhat with just constantly surrendering to level?
The introduction character isn't that attractive, in the first fight, so this should be redone, I started out with getting bored and nearly quit.
A way to speed through text could be good.
In the ninja village.
When you have to spam the down-arrow, it feel like quite a meaningless addition and it makes a lot of sound.
Possible of removing this addition would be better, and it could be good to note that you can't win when doing the harder challange, as the bar just resets.
You mainly see just feets there and some bodies with clothes on, it feels like a very rushed area.
Here you can add different kind of women, size of women, more than just skin/hair color, when there's foot scenes, they become more attractive when you see more of the womens, possible that you see their underwear too. You could add an area or re-visit later, where you come across the showers, where you can see girls chaning and showering, or taking a bath. There could be scenes with a woman who forces the MC into exhibition for some reason, where if discovered, a punishment could be made or that it would be severe.
The cat and Slime woman, especially the Slime woman, have better sex scenes.
A good idea were if you could help them out with their daily work or something like that, for desperately needed money, where the dominate the MC.
The graphic of the squidwoman could be improved too, she have good scenes, but the graphic on her isn't that good, possible that her body look a bit more human, where legs are instead several squid-legs.
Also in the HQ.
I want too see the woman cleaning, by request for sex urges, starts cleaning the MC too, complaining that he isn't helping and wasting her time with useless work. It would likely have to be forceful, possible with spanking or even an enemy, or to masturbate him off. He could also be forced to clean their socks, underwear and get punished for slowing down, if he gets the request to help this character with her cleaning work.
Currently the way to play this game, is to cheat and you can do so if you edit save files in lower numbers, you can also edit a save file and then load the save file, beat the boss, save and then lower the stats in the save file.
For those who doesn't know how to cheat, they would likely drop this game right away.
My recommendation is to make the game easier as a lot of players might get bored otherwise and then drop the game for a long time, I would, I even ignored the game even if I had version 1 downloaded, due to that most of the images in the first post, were a bit lacking. The harder parts could be edited later, when the game is more complete. Unless the game is mean to be completed after abour another four short areas similar to the ninja area, then there won't be much to do in general.
A good idea is to face monsters in the forest to level up.
However if you're to later travel between areas, then you don't want long battles.
And interesting addition, would be if the gym girl which tricks you into doing her farm/yard work for her, asks the MC if he want to tour the local farm with her, since she treats him like livestook, possible making money renting out the MC to the far, where the MC gets a small part of what she gets. The slime girl could also bring the MC to the farm for livestook play, where males can experience that kind of life. There could be a version where all looks good and another more grim version for those who are disobedient. A lot of different scenes can be made here.
Making money in the game is easy, but just tedious and very boring.
Repeatable scenes, the only one in HQ, cost 700 gold for repeating, in comparision, you just make to little gold. You short of gets very tired to see the limited money making scenes. It might be better to visit many tables at once and skip seen scenes or those that there's no scene at the time.
I set three weak experiences in the start of the game, but these really didn't change the conversations and can be very time costly to have to deal with. As they don't make any difference in scenes and conversations, you're better of starting off with no weakness and getting corrupted later, due to that you wan to or see certain scenes, depending on characters that you interact with.
The MC could also be challanged by girls on the street who molest or sexually assault him, in situations where he don't want to make a sound or be detected. They could also pull of his clothers, or offer him in a lot of different scenes, different of what they deem to be more suitable for the MC.
The Innkeeper could have a daughter, which helps her to milk the livestook/MC in different ways, due to being busy, which also could have other plans for him, possible sharing him with her friends. Or if the rent gets expensive, keep the MC in her room as a servant for free, where a lot of different scenes can be made.
The MC could form a relationship with the daughter, possible as a pet, slave or livestook, she might be into a lot of tings, she could force-feed him nutrition to make him produce more milk.
In the brothel, you could introduce more rape scenes, where all bosses or characters that the MC interacts with, could have a lot of scenes with him and he could be trained there to serve different kind of womens.
The receptionist girl, could punish the MC for losing to much, possible whip or diciplining him with a lot of spankings. Spankings would be good with sound effects, with different sound effects that can get louder, the more intense it get. It could be what gets her off as well, so she could possible own him too or get an intimate relationship with her. Or if human women can't own slaves, she could share him with another monstergirlfriend that she have.
All four current endings for different bosses, are a bit boring, I suggest that they're remade later and made a bit longer, they feelt rushed.
The game is a very good femdom game, good dialoges but lack in sort of marketing and the grindy parts can likely scare people off, but it shows a lot of promise.
I got a lot going on in my life, I personally don't have time to massively grind in a game, so I tend to cheat.
Some speaks fondly of high grinding, however, when you have played over a hundred porn games, you get tired of grinding. Some grinding is fine, especially natural grinding with good sexual content (time-consuming to create, unless it's ordinary combat without sex, could be against ordinary animals/monsters) or that you can hold a button to skip the scenes quickly. To much grinding, can make people quit the games and leave them for later. If there's other games to play, you might give what's very grindy, less priority.
