- Oct 17, 2017
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Welp I guess I made it
It was a good one, really good one
Although there were some rough moments and performance issues
I'm not going to b*tching about anything for the fact that this game is totally FREE but if someone interested in critique there it goes
- Performance
I don't really know why, I even pressed F3 and changed settings to "powersafe", but game sometimes spikes from stable 60 fps to 3 and freezes all the time I checking Items and in battles with many enemies
- Interface
Item menu and other menus are just plain awkward
It gets worse when you get more and more items + with performance issues it's just oof!
Imagine scrolling every item you have to finally get to some Ugli or Anaph potion you just happen to buy AFTER you're completely run out of its stock with 3 fps
- Text
After some time I got really tired of reading such escalations of describing every tiny detail around that I cant see with my eyes using the existing character sprites
I mean it's not a bad thing to try and describe everything but when it becomes really unimportant and already surreal enough, then tons of texts before your eyes will just leave you exausted with lack of emotional impact
At some point of the game I just start skipping like half of the text and I lost nothing at all
And I'm experienced reader, I know that sometimes you can skip text without consequences but some other people may just drop it after sensing a lack of interest
So I recommend being more short unless it's something really important
- Pictures
Welp, yep
Lack of pictures of the surroundings
I hope author find a good artist aaand I really appreciate that he didn't use some free pictures from free library or at least it seems so
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Well that will cover the critique part, now time for praising
+ Story
The story seems more or less original, with enough of everything in it
It doesn't look like a casual fairytale, MC and other characters have their motivs with enough surrealism and comedy in it
So it's just good (and not finished)
+ Characters
Characters have their personality and behavior
They really let you immerse yourself in the game world, not fully tho
But that goes mostly to BF (battle fuck) game genre
There is much of "slice of life" part, sometimes you can feel their feelings and sympathize with them
Some of girls may be really dear to you
But nothing of too much deep here, at least for now
+ MC system and battle system
I guess I'll just say that it's comfortable
There are some interface and performance issues, but I've criticized it before
Despite that, it works smoothly enough and entertaining for BF game
+ Music
I love the music choices here
It sets the right tone and atmosphere through game
Though sometimes it feels kinda out of place, but that's rare (like the sad Caverns tune)
I guess it will be improved later and be even better
+ Art work
It's gorgeous
Every character looks uniq
I can't say that every appearance is my slice of pie (some of them even terrify me), but it's good
Never I imagined that a bat girl can be such a thrill...
Yeah, Tabitha definitely my type
______________
I think that's enough
Could talk more about it, but not here
Anyway
Thanks for the game
And I wish you continued success in your progress
It was a good one, really good one
Although there were some rough moments and performance issues
I'm not going to b*tching about anything for the fact that this game is totally FREE but if someone interested in critique there it goes
- Performance
I don't really know why, I even pressed F3 and changed settings to "powersafe", but game sometimes spikes from stable 60 fps to 3 and freezes all the time I checking Items and in battles with many enemies
- Interface
Item menu and other menus are just plain awkward
It gets worse when you get more and more items + with performance issues it's just oof!
Imagine scrolling every item you have to finally get to some Ugli or Anaph potion you just happen to buy AFTER you're completely run out of its stock with 3 fps
- Text
After some time I got really tired of reading such escalations of describing every tiny detail around that I cant see with my eyes using the existing character sprites
I mean it's not a bad thing to try and describe everything but when it becomes really unimportant and already surreal enough, then tons of texts before your eyes will just leave you exausted with lack of emotional impact
At some point of the game I just start skipping like half of the text and I lost nothing at all
And I'm experienced reader, I know that sometimes you can skip text without consequences but some other people may just drop it after sensing a lack of interest
So I recommend being more short unless it's something really important
- Pictures
Welp, yep
Lack of pictures of the surroundings
I hope author find a good artist aaand I really appreciate that he didn't use some free pictures from free library or at least it seems so
______________
Well that will cover the critique part, now time for praising
+ Story
The story seems more or less original, with enough of everything in it
It doesn't look like a casual fairytale, MC and other characters have their motivs with enough surrealism and comedy in it
So it's just good (and not finished)
+ Characters
Characters have their personality and behavior
They really let you immerse yourself in the game world, not fully tho
But that goes mostly to BF (battle fuck) game genre
There is much of "slice of life" part, sometimes you can feel their feelings and sympathize with them
Some of girls may be really dear to you
But nothing of too much deep here, at least for now
+ MC system and battle system
I guess I'll just say that it's comfortable
There are some interface and performance issues, but I've criticized it before
Despite that, it works smoothly enough and entertaining for BF game
+ Music
I love the music choices here
It sets the right tone and atmosphere through game
Though sometimes it feels kinda out of place, but that's rare (like the sad Caverns tune)
I guess it will be improved later and be even better
+ Art work
It's gorgeous
Every character looks uniq
I can't say that every appearance is my slice of pie (some of them even terrify me), but it's good
Never I imagined that a bat girl can be such a thrill...
Yeah, Tabitha definitely my type
______________
I think that's enough
Could talk more about it, but not here
Anyway
Thanks for the game
And I wish you continued success in your progress
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