VN Ren'Py Moonripple Lake [v0.3] [BCG]

[kikomascado]

Totally agree.

By itself, maybe it was, but it's is probably to set up him as a villain.
The whole plot seems to revolve around the mistery and his family, so the dev must've wanted a big introduction.

Really liking the game so far, and despite being AI, which can be know by its sloppyness, it's obvious how much care it went on the game.
The images are really consistent, even when changing little things, and the animations transitios are top notch.
Already one of the most well done Ren'Py games I've seen.
Looking forward for more.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Only if it's made optional

That route should be made optional AFAIK. BCG did mention in an earlier post about how he would make NTR an optional route to explore upon completion of the mainline narrative and primary routes.

 

[sagerock820]

By itself, maybe it was, but it's is probably to set up him as a villain.
The whole plot seems to revolve around the mistery and his family, so the dev must've wanted a big introduction.

Really liking the game so far, and despite being AI, which can be know by its sloppyness, it's obvious how much care it went on the game.
The images are really consistent, even when changing little things, and the animations transitios are top notch.
Already one of the most well done Ren'Py games I've seen.
Looking forward for more.

Sure but it could have been toned down a bit. The non consensual stuff with Suzie I could have done without.

I agree with you on the graphics, I've not seen an AI game done this well. It looks great.

The only other thing I would mention is - it seems events with Suzie are happening pretty fast. Anon went from 0 to 100 very quickly on wanting Suzie to do more sexy stuff. I don't mean make it a long slow burn but it didn't need to be so quick. IMO.

And the beach scene - the amount of beer they are drinking is ridiculous and they are supposed to drive and pick up Cee from the station? They'd be lucky if they made it there alive.

 

[DaPistash]

I thought MC was ok until he said he didn't read books and got anything news-worthy from social media. What a dork.

He is a cuck...

 

[sagerock820]

He is a cuck...

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

the amount of beer they are drinking is ridiculous and they are supposed to drive and pick up Cee from the station? They'd be lucky if they made it there alive

LoL imagine they get into an accident along the way, and then these guys come to pick them up as a kind gesture of support

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

LoL imagine they get into an accident along the way, and then these guys come to pick them up as a kind gesture of support



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Why do you hate the MC's wife so much???

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Why do you hate the MC's wife so much???

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sh sh sh trust me, it's *whispers in ear* for her own good mmm yeah oh yes daddy

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[GetOutOfMyLab]

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sh sh sh trust me, it's *whispers in ear* for her own good mmm yeah oh yes daddy

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[Kitiuuu]

the game is very cool and i love playing the cuckold hero and how he watches or does it himself that his girlfriend is touched by other guys

 

[JagOvv SmearOvv]

Only if it's made optional. Dev did say it was an NTS game. Caleb is just a stupid, arrogant douchebag.

I know, that's why he's my favorite character now!

 

[kogahaya]

We can review scenes in the gallery?

 

[sagerock820]

We can review scenes in the gallery?

No. Gallery images are not from in game.

 

[Poundar]

We can review scenes in the gallery?

Nope. Gallery contains Polaroid photos that are scattered throughout the open roam sections.

There’s no Scene Replay implemented yet.

 

[I Like You Wife]

You're supposed to hate him, it's the whole point of him being there. Just because you get

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doesn't mean you're a loser. I think I've made it abundantly clear that otherwise Anon's mostly a nerdish chad. Think Henry Cavill.


You know I wondered if anyone would be bothered by it, but I kept it in because you're drunk and I thought it fit


Of course! Even though you won't catch me fapping to that type of content any time soon, it's fun for me to make


save locations for this episode should be:
Windows: %APPDATA\RenPy\Moonripple_Lake-69420
Macintosh: $HOME/Library/RenPy/Moonripple_Lake-69420
Linux: $HOME/.renpy/Moonripple_Lake-69420

First, thank you for your reply. Secondly, I don't hate him. In fact, if the male lead had been a coward from the beginning, I might even have felt pleasure in seeing him being bullied.

Exactly because of this, when the male lead, who isn't a coward, is knocked down by a huge baby, it makes me feel emotionally split. It's so sudden that it's like my brain and cerebellum are being pulled in different directions by two ropes. Emm, English isn't my native language, so there might be some grammar problems. Please excuse me.

As a player, my perspective will basically be locked on the male protagonist, and my choice determines the behavior of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. A role that has no way to control, so that I lose the sense of choice and control, then I will have a strong aversion to this role

I have a pleasant idea that I hope you can refer to.
That is, when a man makes love to the mother of a giant baby, the baby is tied to the floor, stuffed with a mouth ball and an anal plug

 

[BananaCreamGames]

Congratulations on your first game! Wish there was an android version.

is there android version?

Not yet. Would take me a handful of days to implement because of how free roam works with hover functionality not present in tablets and phones. On my todo list.

nice game nice art need femboy route and thx

Planned (if you have femboys turned on).

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Woah, those are nice! Awesome!

We can review scenes in the gallery?

Not yet, on todo list

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

You know I wondered if anyone would be bothered by it, but I kept it in because you're drunk and I thought it fit

I was fine with the camera floating/magnifier effect, only thing I'd change is some scenes like this one:

"anon_stroke_loop_offscreen" should be displayed infront of suzie, not behind. Minor things.

I found that whole scene very off-putting and unnecessary. Unneeded drama for what has been an otherwise pretty chill game.

I think it was fine, as long as it's viewed through a narrative lens and not a fetish lens - which will be difficult round these parts. I saw it as the former - it drives the intrigue forward about the town and the old landlord. Furthermore, assuming you intervened, it did a great narrative job of showing not telling how the common townspeople are all frightened of that group of cronies. I didn't find it anymore tonally incongruent than any of the other horror-themed stuff earlier on.

Sure but it could have been toned down a bit. The non consensual stuff with Suzie I could have done without.

Agreed with this part though - that was a little much given the escalation - what's more; it serves as active bait for the people that want fetish content out of this - ala the token bully to march in and stomp him and have his way with Suzy. I'd say the scene was perfect barring the kiss.

The goons holding her mouth was a much more effective "violation" depiction without treading into fetish land.

re-screenshot guy, I so hope this specific girl doesnt remain an anon party girl

Sweatshirt+jeans and all, *chefs kiss*. If you were able to give an ai the prompt "PGJ ideal girl in the art style of Moonripple Lake" - that's exactly what it would spit out.

 

[idkmanerally]

I was fine with the camera floating/magnifier effect, only thing I'd change is some scenes like this one:
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"anon_stroke_loop_offscreen" should be displayed infront of suzie, not behind. Minor things.

I think it was fine, as long as it's viewed through a narrative lens and not a fetish lens - which will be difficult round these parts. I saw it as the former - it drives the intrigue forward about the town and the old landlord. Furthermore, assuming you intervened, it did a great narrative job of showing not telling how the common townspeople are all frightened of that group of cronies. I didn't find it anymore tonally incongruent than any of the other horror-themed stuff earlier on.

Agreed with this part though - that was a little much given the escalation - what's more; it serves as active bait for the people that want fetish content out of this - ala the token bully to march in and stomp him and have his way with Suzy. I'd say the scene was perfect barring the kiss.

The goons holding her mouth was a much more effective "violation" depiction without treading into fetish land.

re-screenshot guy, I so hope this specific girl doesnt remain an anon party girl

Sweatshirt+jeans and all, *chefs kiss*.

good points all around. i love the idea of a villain, not enough VNs actually have real stakes and obstacles to overcome, it's nice.

that said, i wouldn't mind if caleb and MC end up having to team up to beat the ghosts, become allies, and then caleb's dick can find its way into suzie's mouth

 

[lkjfedasl]

i ain't mad at this. i like the art style. too bad the movers didn't get a better tip

 

[BananaCreamGames]

I was fine with the camera floating/magnifier effect, only thing I'd change is some scenes like this one:
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"anon_stroke_loop_offscreen" should be displayed infront of suzie, not behind. Minor things.

I think it was fine, as long as it's viewed through a narrative lens and not a fetish lens - which will be difficult round these parts. I saw it as the former - it drives the intrigue forward about the town and the old landlord. Furthermore, assuming you intervened, it did a great narrative job of showing not telling how the common townspeople are all frightened of that group of cronies. I didn't find it anymore tonally incongruent than any of the other horror-themed stuff earlier on.

Agreed with this part though - that was a little much given the escalation - what's more; it serves as active bait for the people that want fetish content out of this - ala the token bully to march in and stomp him and have his way with Suzy. I'd say the scene was perfect barring the kiss.

The goons holding her mouth was a much more effective "violation" depiction without treading into fetish land.

re-screenshot guy, I so hope this specific girl doesnt remain an anon party girl
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Sweatshirt+jeans and all, *chefs kiss*. If you were able to give an ai the prompt "PGJ ideal girl in the art style of Moonripple Lake" - that's exactly what it would spit out.

Ah yes, that particular zoom effect. The original intent was to give you a better, closer look at Suzie's fuckholes :d
Then I realized it disconnects the character too much from the background, and kind of breaks immersion.
Yeah suzie should be behind the cock 100%!
You'll notice that I've since stopped using that function, and have instead focused on making backgrounds to move with characters in parallax.

You saw that situation as was intended, yeah. Maybe I'm trying to push too much story into my porn game haha.
Caleb was intended as someone to rally against, and much less a 'he wants my girl, he'll take her'.
Also, his shitty self is a perfect point to grow from. I'll just say I have plans for Caleb. We'll see where it takes me, plans can change. But his original purpose wasn't to cuck MC.
It's funny how no one cares as vehemently about Drago, who openly wants Suzie, but he's just a little dork, so it's whatever.

Oh, that's Sophie's (the library girl's) bff, we might see her again