VN Ren'Py Abandoned Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v0.33] [Interblade]

[Richard Perkins]

Made an incest patch
version: [v2.6.6]
feature: It changes the characters info. mc refer to Sophia as Mom, Ellie - sister. Sidestory's mc, Bob, refer to Monica as Mom
install: Unzip inside the "game" folder.

notes:
This patch should work with future versions(unless the dev changes the code), may(or not) require an update for new content.
I might have missed something, let me know if you see it(preferably with a description of the scene and line text, a screenshot would also help).

At the begging(typos) he call sopihe his dad girlfiend in stead of mom

 

[joelurmel]

At the begging(typos) he call sopihe his dad girlfiend in stead of mom

This is a bug from the original game ! not from the incest patch. because it use pattern matching to replace Sophie to Mom in certain case. So if it have sopihe the incest patch does not work

 

[joelurmel]

Can you please send the line where it is, or a screenshot?

it's in
game\Acts\Act_02\act02scene03.rpy: sop "Haha Sopia Wins!"

EDIT: I have badly learn the problem, but there is this one from the dev

 

[joelurmel]

His name is Bigdick? Seriously?

And a boy with a dick of 40 Cm ??? Seriously ?

 

[Richard Perkins]

Can you please send the line where it is, or a screenshot?

 

[joelurmel]

As I understand, you suggest changing it to "Haha Mom Wins!" But I think it's okay to keep the original.

No, it should be "Haha Sophia Wins!" and not "Haha Sopia Wins!"

 

[FaceCrap]

That title is confusing. Why it's called "son and brother" instead of "son and mother"? No gay stuff, right?

originally the son referred to the relation Dylan vs Sophia, and the brother part to the relation Dylan vs Ellie... but... that was then, whut we have now... no idea, but the only part of the title still somewhat valid is that the story somewhat started out with a night in a motel. At least, at some point it did... no idea if that part survived.

 

[xapican]

I don't get what is happening here, was the Patreoquisiton passing by or what ? sorry I was lazy and did not read all the posts,

 

[virus115]

Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

 

[drhotrod]

Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

 

[joelurmel]

The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

and with videos that are made in 281p in the last update which in addition, are extremely noisy

 

[INNERBLADE]

The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

Bit of history here. Game was created out of frustration of the extremely slow pacing of the game; A wife and mother.
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-wife-and-mother-v0-185-lust-passion.5944/

So that's why this is not a slow burn game.

 

[INNERBLADE]

and with videos that are made in 281p in the last update which in addition, are extremely noisy

which vid would that be? Which version did you play.

 

[INNERBLADE]

Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

It's not tagged as such a game..

 

[INNERBLADE]

the dev really needs to learn how to code.
No wonder it's re-written several times.
Instead of using "MCName" + "suffix" for sayer in renpy, he uses "Dylan", "Dylan (shouting)", "Dylan (soft)" ... and so on.
WTF? Alone for Dylan he uses several HUNDRED (yes, you see right - no typo/mistake over here) different sayer-definitions.
over 2000 sayers ingame for now:
View attachment 2674362
Ever heared about variables and how to use them?
mc_name = "Dylan"
suffix_soft = "(soft)"
....
suffix_angry = "(angry)"

(or even better: use 1 dictionary instead of dozen suffix)

then use sayer: mc_name+suffix_soft
(or sayer: player+suffix['soft'] if you use dictionary)

At least people would be able to rename the MC like they want to. renaming is a basic feature in all modern avn games.

There is no need to use an entirely new sayer for every emotion you want to express.

*SIGH* people decide to create games and start to put some lines together even without at least some basic knowledge about coding.

EDIT:
Or even better: just use ONE sayer (ffs "Dylan" if you want), and put the mood into textline:
Sayer: Dylan:
Textline: "(whispering) ... whatever needs to be whispered"
=> like other games do for a GOOD reason!

Houwdy,

Uhm wellllllll hehe yeah not great at coding. I now have this mess.
How could I best solve this and add the ability for new players to chose a name

 

[joelurmel]

which vid would that be? Which version did you play.

I'm playing the 2.6.6 version and the files are :
wfcvderhnbtgfkmy_2.webm
wfcvderhnbtgfkmy_1.webm
wfcvderhnbtgfkmy.webm

 

[joelurmel]

Houwdy,

Uhm wellllllll hehe yeah not great at coding. I now have this mess.
How could I best solve this and add the ability for new players to chose a name
View attachment 2683678

simple

in the start label, at the begining:

$ mcname = renpy.input("{b}What is your name? (if you don't want to change, just press Enter{/b})")

$ mcname = mcname.strip()

if mcname == "":
$ mcname="Dylan"

And in all others scripts, replace all occurence of Dylan by [mcname].
If you have to use upper case of mcname use toupper from python.

EDIT:

And if you don't want to modify all your scripts you can use:

def replace_text(txt):
txt = txt.replace("Dylan",[mcname])
txt = txt.replace("DYLAN",[mcnamne])
return txt

config.replace_text = replace_text

 

[Hyperserver]

Houwdy,

Uhm wellllllll hehe yeah not great at coding. I now have this mess.
How could I best solve this and add the ability for new players to chose a name
View attachment 2683678

exactly how joelurmel told ya here:

simple

in the start label, at the begining:

$ mcname = renpy.input("{b}What is your name? (if you don't want to change, just press Enter{/b})")

$ mcname = mcname.strip()

if mcname == "":
$ player_name="Dylan"

And in all others scripts, replace all occurence of Dylan by [mcname].
If you have to use upper case of mcname use toupper from python.

then:
define mc = Character($ player_name {size...........})
define mom = Character($ mom_name {size.....})

And just use ONE sayer for each character. If you want to additional show the current mood the character has, just write it at start of the Textline instead if defining an extra sayer.
like:
mc" *Angry* But [mom_name] ... It wasn't i, who did this!"
mom" *in slightly rage* Well [player_name], i don't care. Go and see [girl_name] and ask her about"
mc" *SIGH* ok, [mom_name] - i will do"

=> so there would be the 2 sayer "mc" and "mom". Player's own chosen name would be stored in "player_name" whilst mom and girl would be stored in "mom_name" and "girl_name".
Note: the "[ ]" are used to put stored names within the displayed text.

 

[shawnnation]

Made an incest patch
version: [v2.6.6]
feature: It changes the characters info. mc refer to Sophia as Mom, Ellie - sister. Sidestory's mc, Bob, refer to Monica as Mom
install: Unzip inside the "game" folder.

UPD 06.06.2023: some Improvements
notes:
This patch should work with future versions(unless the dev changes the code), may(or not) require an update for new content.
I might have missed something, let me know if you see it(preferably with a description of the scene and line text, a screenshot would also help).

doesnt seem to work

 

[joelurmel]

doesnt seem to work

It work perfectly ! Have you removed my version before using this one ?