It'll be ready in one week!Hi! Any news about the next update? Thanks in advance and have a nice day
Great! Thanks for the info and keep it up bro, you're doing an excellent jobIt'll be ready in one week!
You're right, it sounds bad! (First chapter, first time writing a script, I'm still a noob) I'll fix it. What I was trying to imply is that they must have had lots of sex before, as boyfriend and girlfriend and a lot more after getting married. Rosamaria's answers is to show that Valerie never had sex with Gaylord before.I just started playing this game. Good that there's action right away. So many visual novels are trying to be "different" by having slow-burns that I can never find the ones they're trying to be different from, and a lot of them just blueball you. Good that this one doesn't seem to do that. So far.
It gets a bit Engrishy sometimes and while it's a bit of a distraction, I don't really think it's a big deal. However, there is one part that irks me and I felt I needed to comment as soon as I saw it. It's about Rosemary's explanation about Valerie's issues, and Sunny's response to it. "But they were married, right?" Oh no no no, fuck no. Marriage doesn't ever change the fact that what Gaylord did was rape. I feel like I have to put that out there because Sunny's talking about it as if it's ok as long as they're married, and unfortunately that reflects a real-world attitude that's still prevalent in a lot of minds today. Old, decrepit minds of people with one foot in the grave, but still.
I know this VN isn't rapey because I can read the tags, but I'd like to say I wouldn't have an issue if it was (I mean, I wouldn't be interested in playing it, but I wouldn't complain about it in the comments section either.) But VNs that are about that don't typically--accidentally or intentionally--promote the view that that kind of thing is actually ok in real life. This does end up promoting the idea that it's ok if they're married--though I suspect unintentionally.
You're right, it sounds bad! (First chapter, first time writing a script, I'm still a noob) I'll fix it. What I was trying to imply is that they must have had lots of sex before, as boyfriend and girlfriend and a lot more after getting married. Rosamaria's answers is to show that Valerie never had sex with Gaylord before.
SUN: "That sounds sick, but they were husband and wife, after all, right?"
SUN: "What a coward, he took advantage of her, fucking bastard!"
Thank you for pointing it out!
It's actually a shame. I never get to bite anyone's eyeballs out of their still-living face in a VN! Hope the sharks chewed on his balls slowly.Least he died in the end
True, I'm kind of hoping that driver guy (don't remember his name..) comes back so Sunny can kick his ass.It's actually a shame. I never get to bite anyone's eyeballs out of their still-living face in a VN! Hope the sharks chewed on his balls slowly.
Wednesday Paapi!Expected release date of next update ??
I kind of agree with you there, but I'm just going to assume Haruka was lying on the plane and just has an anal fetish..furthermore the 3 some with Haruka and Ginger I'm not into dominant women and after the first scene with Haruka, I was looking forward to popping her cherry but she did that with a toy between the first meeting with her and the 3 some
Will there be scenes with Gissell soon? That woman needs MC's loveWednesday Paapi!
Yes,Will there be scenes with Gissell soon? That woman needs MC's love