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Unfiltered, opinionated dialogue is added. Nothing else. I added it because some were getting offended by certain words.
just put it inside of the "game" folder.
UnDoubleUpUhUh
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Anybody know if MissFortune's PIP, JokerLeader 's walkthrough and the i-patch from VirginPanties are compatible with each other?
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They should be, we all use different scripts.
ryansFLYIN
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Oh, I didn't know this was going to be a harem...
Judging by that entire scene at the school, I assume the MC's girls are going to be able to have some fun with one another? I'm dying for a game where the MC's girlfriends send him photos of them having fun with each other, or calling and letting him listen when he can't be there... tease him for when he gets back.
Judging by that entire scene at the school, I assume the MC's girls are going to be able to have some fun with one another? I'm dying for a game where the MC's girlfriends send him photos of them having fun with each other, or calling and letting him listen when he can't be there... tease him for when he gets back.
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UnDoubleUpUhUh
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Whats with the ridiculous tattoo, no choices to say no to Fame, really this should have been a choice, really can't stand not being given a choice for these things
Lord Volt
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The early game is way too wordy for nothing at all happening. Lots of pointless scenes that add nothing to the story. Kind of a mess flow wise. The images look nice though if not a little washed out and the concept is solid. It just seems like the creator is trying to hard to make this a meaningful story and adding a lot of unnecessary fluff in the process of trying to accomplish that. You don't need to completely describe every detail of every characters back story.
Lord Volt
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What you're describing is world building..
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and I'm saying it's overdone. Details don't always need to be explicitly stated, sometimes it's better to imply things and let the reader come to those realizations themselves. It's not ideal to hold the readers hand through the entire story because then it's harder to get swept up in it.
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lol my only complaint (but not really, I don't want to sit through that much time in-story for a tattoo) about the tattoo is that one of that size would probably take at least two appointments. Several hours for the line art and then several hours for coloring. My sleeve took about 22-23 hours in total.
Lord Volt
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I think the tattoo came out far too faded for fresh ink imo. But honestly it's just nitpicking assets at that point I guess.