The early game is way too wordy for nothing at all happening. Lots of pointless scenes that add nothing to the story. Kind of a mess flow wise. The images look nice though if not a little washed out and the concept is solid. It just seems like the creator is trying to hard to make this a meaningful story and adding a lot of unnecessary fluff in the process of trying to accomplish that. You don't need to completely describe every detail of every characters back story.
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What you're describing is world building..
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and I'm saying it's overdone. Details don't always need to be explicitly stated, sometimes it's better to imply things and let the reader come to those realizations themselves. It's not ideal to hold the readers hand through the entire story because then it's harder to get swept up in it.
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lol my only complaint (but not really, I don't want to sit through that much time in-story for a tattoo) about the tattoo is that one of that size would probably take at least two appointments. Several hours for the line art and then several hours for coloring. My sleeve took about 22-23 hours in total.
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I think the tattoo came out far too faded for fresh ink imo. But honestly it's just nitpicking assets at that point I guess.
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lol true, unless that was the intended effect of that particular tattoo. But probably as you said.. asset issue.
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Tattoos are preference. As for Fame? You can basically reject her every step of the way outside of the tattoos and the gallery invite in E03, so I don't really understand what your complaint is?
Put it in the "game" folder.
Yeah, I know it's not super realistic, but I wasn't going to make two scenes out of it.
I tried pumping some more color into it, but it not being a LIE asset made it tough to do without screwing up the torso skin coloring.
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It's sacrilege really, Fame is one of the HOTTEST LI's i've seen. If anything she reminds me of Ryan Ashley who is a total goddess btw. I'm going to cautiously assume she was the inspiration.
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my complaint is the fact that you can't say no to getting the fucking tattoo
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MissFortune - Can we have a mandatory facial tattoo next?
Not really an option in this type of engine, it would double the number of renders required any time the MC's chest or neck is visible.
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Actually, would be possible via Ren'Py layered images and spot renders in Daz. Still has to do an extra render of the chest area in Daz, but would save time and disk space.
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This is a good start with great renders. Definitely shaping up to be a high quality game. My only issue is that we're on the third update to the game and already the dev had to delay for a long time due to personal issues and he's already talking about needing to manage burnout. I know shit happens and I would never suggest someone put their real life on hold to make a game, but it doesn't inspire a lot of confidence that the game won't be abandoned when we're already talking about burnout in update 3. The dev also seems to be having a lot of hardware problems and he's said he's moving to a new state for a new job soon, so lots of instability here.
Full disclosure, I used to be a backer and then stopped when months went by with no updates.
Full disclosure, I used to be a backer and then stopped when months went by with no updates.
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