VN Ren'Py Abandoned Moving to the Wrong Neighborhood [v1.0] [jessica 1222]

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Jstforme

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I just want everyone to know that this game is a direct rip of this story on Literotica - . If it is the same creator, good for you, but I doubt it due to the writing style between the two versions and the slight name change. I'm all for making good stories into games, but you should at least have the decency to directly shout out your source material. Otherwise you're just trying to take credit for someone else's work.
Yea, it's for sure from that story, not word for word, but yea...at least acknowledge the work you're copying from. This next update will be where the actual story stops, since it was never completed.
Frankly I get the vibe from this guy (the developer) that his mind/creativity isn't as twisted and dark as the story would need to go on much further.
 

bluerubber

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but... so far this is one of those games that is completely linear and no choice affects anything except to deprive the player of scenes. Nothing in the story changes no matter the choice as far as I can tell.

Edit: Can confirm...I have to say, as someone who loves NTR and usually looks for it specifically, even I am irked that neither the bad wife nor the cuck choices have any impact over the story at all. Picking the "safe" options amounts to kinda sparing the player from some scenes, but they still happen just the same, you just don't get to see the render results of said scenes. It's actually a little insulting tbh. Just make it a story with no options at all, don't pretend the options actually mean anything. I say that because if it's the devs intention to have more than 1 story route in the completed version, I'm more than fine with the dev spending all their time on ntr route first until it's finished, but at least let us know as much. As it stands, the safe route is completely useless and only wastes time.
 
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bluerubber

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I just want everyone to know that this game is a direct rip of this story on Literotica - . If it is the same creator, good for you, but I doubt it due to the writing style between the two versions and the slight name change. I'm all for making good stories into games, but you should at least have the decency to directly shout out your source material. Otherwise you're just trying to take credit for someone else's work.
Well that author has been active on lirerotica as recently as 2 weeks ago according to their saved favorites tab...so if you really wanted to push the issue, you could ask that author. Honestly, even if it is the case, I would feel fine if this creator actually finished the story as opposed to the story in literotica which has left readers without any story continuation for nearly 3 years. It's an abandoned story much to the same way some devs will take an abandoned game and recreate and finish it around here. If someone took over Tyrant I prob wouldn't feel bad since that dev has basically been stealing thousands of dollars every month from patreon fan accounts...
 

ThorMcBalbo

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From now on there is no more story written by the author on literotica, let's see how the dev plan to continue :love:
 
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Buster65

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WTF?!... This is an absoluty CLICHÉ (And I must say, quite an old-fashioned cliché.) This story has all the racist stereotypes ... The muscular black man, who sells drugs, is rude and treats all women like whores. Obviously he has a huge dick (You knew this is a myth, right? Not all black men have big dicks) On the other hand the white husband, with a small penis and weak personality and the wife, who thinks it is okay to be degraded and be treated like a whore.
Anyway ... I think this story would have been fine for the eighties or something like that.
 

BUCCO

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blah blah blah shit blah blah blah shit blah blah blah nice bikini blah blah blah end of version 0.8 (is that a joke?) you should have made it clear whether he raped her or slept with him, not a hill as a sign, because if so, this game died for me!!!
 
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bluerubber

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This update badly needs an edit and/or second look. In new material the names are swapped multiple times, and then at one point you walk in on a bj and comment how you've never watched gay porn before..except it's a big boobed chick giving the blowie...It left me even more confused. Maybe dev originally had gay scene in place and decided against it (thank you) but only swapped the renders and some of the text...just enough to leave me confused...
 

markyy1987

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Jesus, just enjoy the game and leave all those SJW/Woke concerns to the media outlets.

You're in a fetish forum so if its offensive to you, just leave the thread and look for something else. There's something for everyone here, and yes, some people enjoy whats in here.

So f**k off! XD
 

BebeStrumf

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Ok.. Risking it here a little.
I'm not sure if I should write here or not but I will ask. Why on the "Latest Updates"( https://f95zone.to/latest/ ) I can't access the thread of this game is just shown and blurred and can't access it but on main page if you look down on Latest Replies if is in the list you can access it. Or if you can find it by search in the search list you can access it.

Is it a game that my class of user should not access or just a glitch? because was same on v0.7 post.
 
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BUCCO

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this is not an update this is just a concept where there are no important decisions, bad enough because from the beginning you could decide whether to be an exemplary wife or not. it was interesting to keep her from cheating (because I still play like a paladin) and the game pushes you to be evil. but if she slept with him or raped her and that she was tormented and broken is not the result of seeing something bad (for example, that her husband did not help and pretended not to see anything, or that she saw how a gankster killed someone ..) but that that the author let her sleep with the gangster, without the choice of the player, would mean that all the choices so far were irrelevant and vain.
 

Paapi

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this is not an update this is just a concept where there are no important decisions, bad enough because from the beginning you could decide whether to be an exemplary wife or not. it was interesting to keep her from cheating (because I still play like a paladin) and the game pushes you to be evil. but if she slept with him or raped her and that she was tormented and broken is not the result of seeing something bad (for example, that her husband did not help and pretended not to see anything, or that she saw how a gankster killed someone ..) but that that the author let her sleep with the gangster, without the choice of the player, would mean that all the choices so far were irrelevant and vain.
Bucco. Unavoidable ntr b.s now ???
If yes, it is best for me to escape from this .......!!
 
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