VN Ren'Py My Best Deal [v3.5] [Pirot King]

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Overview:
After saving a girl from certain death, a young man finds himself in heaven where he cuts a deal with the goddess of love.​

Thread Updated: 2024-11-05
Release Date: 2024-10-26
Developer: Pirot King

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Censored: No
Version: 3.5
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux, Android
Language: English, Russian, Polish, Chinese
Other Game: Dirty Pool
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Extras: WALKTHROUGH MOD - FAN SIGS - FAN SIGS 2
*This unofficial port/version/patch is not released by developer, download at your own risk.

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[Falcer]

it looks very promising

 

[Bakkalon]

School setting incest....well i wont pretend i dont download all of them

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Oh I remember this dev. This is gonna be so good.

 

[Old Dog]

Looks nice time to try it out

 

[rKnight]

THIS GAME IS RIGHT UP MY FUCKING ALLEY! ...that's all.

I just hope Pirot King doesn't abandon his other project "DIRTY POOL"

 

[Killer94]

finally been waiting to try it out .....

 

[Darkmetal]

I liked Dirty Pool and Emily was one of my most favorite models ever, so definitely going to give this a try.

Edit: Played it. Story premise is interesting, renders are very good and there are idle animations. So best way to seal the deal, metaphorically and in game is:

Spoiler: DEAL!

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[fortuna95]

This Dev indeed has crazy and funny ideas, but he paused unfortunately his first good game because of this one!

 

[ltpika]

Yeah, I miss Dirty Pool

 

[ive_got-problems]

I'll give it a try, but I won't get too attached.

 

[woltka35]

well not gonna try this game for the developer. I've played Dirty Pool. It was nice game but unfinished. Probably this game is gonna be same. Not worth.

 

[fenris95]

"Are you.. an angel?"
"Agenl? No."

Could do with a proof read. But this is one of the first games among the 200+ that I've played that has some nice animations during normal dialogue. The renders are also pretty good. Liking it so far!

 

[Fzoner95]

>incest
>first picture
*sigh*

*opens pants*

 

[Rythan25]

Are we gonna let our nephew freeze to death in this one too ?

 

[botc76]

I see the twins from Dirty Pool and the blonde girl looks cute, but when the dev puts a game onhold to start a new one AND the first game already updated irregularly, that is not exactly a glowing endorsement for the new one.

 

[Deleted member 54063]

I see the twins from Dirty Pool and the blonde girl looks cute, but when the dev puts a game onhold to start a new one AND the first game already updated irregularly, that is not exactly a glowing endorsement for the new one.

We've seen that happen before, a lot, and the outcome. You'd think they would be chances to learn from the mistakes of others. Sadly not.

 

[botc76]

This line is a big indicator for me. I see this broken English line so often, that it has become a flag for me, to stay away!

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It's: "We'll explain everything to you". This isn't even a difficult one.

It saddens me because everything preceding this was written kinda well, there were mistakes, but they weren't too bad.

But still, job advert, proofreader wanted!

The thing is, that alone doesn't really tell you much. It's simply that in many other languages the sentences aren't formed in the same order as in English and even someone really well-versed in that language will occassionaly intuitively build sentences according to how his own language works.
It reads awkward, sure.

 

[Deleted member 54063]

The thing is, that alone doesn't really tell you much. It's simply that in many other languages the sentences aren't formed in the same order as in English and even someone really well-versed in that language will occassionaly intuitively build sentences according to how his own language works.
It reads awkward, sure.

That's a good point. I hadn't considered that.

But still reaching out to anyone in the community to proofread is easy enough.

 

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