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I cough, but no one ever repliesBut still, job advert, proofreader wanted!
*Ahem!*
I cough, but no one ever repliesBut still, job advert, proofreader wanted!
I just today posted a listing that I'm open to do editing... Someone point the dev my wayBut still, job advert, proofreader wanted!
I proof-read it, took about an hour. It needed changes about every fourth line of dialogue. Feel free to compare it to the original once you've unpacked it and give me some feedback if you have the time.But still reaching out to anyone in the community to proofread is easy enough.
Still early days, this feels like it's just setting up the story. Given the dev's previous game (which somehow I have not played), I wouldn't be surprised if branching paths are in the works.other than a single choice to "watch" near the end this is a kinetic novel...i was really hoping for a gameso disappointed because it looks so damn good and the story is interesting...hohumm..