The game was great, and I'm really hoping it gets on Steam. However, one genuine piece of feedback I have is that the fat guy's progression with Rei, Eris, and Rin feels a bit rushed. The scene where Rei sees Tom with Rin in the shower and decides to hook up with the fat guy was really well-written and a great example of how NTR should unfold. But I feel like there could have been one or two more scenes leading up to the fat guy's advances on Eris and Rei. For instance, when Tom rejects Eris, the fat guy could be secretly watching, and there could be an additional scene or two showing him gradually advancing on her before they hook up on Tuesday night. Similarly, with Rei, there should be a few scenes of the fat guy touching her, building up her sense of betrayal by Tom, so that by the time they sleep together, it feels more gradual and justified.