- Dec 26, 2017
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The art is fantastic and the concept is good. The grammar/dialog could use work. Mainly minor grammar errors, flow and phrasing. The path with the back seat bj had an error with her head going behind the cock making it look like she was vigorously rubbing her face on it.Hello everyone!
Belmontart here!
Im the artist of "my cousin´s bride"!
First of all I want to thank all those who have played my game (even as jack sparrow xD), I knew that undoubtedly someone would eventually pirate it, but I didn't think so soon haha, which makes me feel good that more and more people know about my work.
I also appreciate all the feedback you have given in this forum, I have taken all the comments in a constructive way and plan to improve in all those aspects!
I am Hispanic and the localization work of the game was practically null, so an apology for the lousy translation and grammar work!
I must clarify that this was my first game, so many things were done on the fly and without a clear order, plus I had to change DEV twice since the first one dropped the project for work reasons.
Originally the project was planned to be "short", that's why I didn't plan a continuation (at least not immediately).
I am concentrating on my next game which will be infinitely bigger, with correct localization, with at least one avoidable NTR route, many more routes and much more!
Last but not least, and as a thank you, I leave you a 67% discount code for all my gumroad store, it will be only 20 spaces (Gumroad dont allow a bigger discount)
code: f95luffy
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The pacing could also use some work. Draw out the reluctance and regret more.
For a first game this is really good. I normally play games with a mom son kink but a video of the game play convinced me to download. Really excited for your next game as that looks more likely to involve my kink.
Would love to see a similar premise involving the father arranging the reluctant seduction of his wife by son, such an under represented scenario.