The art is fantastic and the concept is good. The grammar/dialog could use work. Mainly minor grammar errors, flow and phrasing. The path with the back seat bj had an error with her head going behind the cock making it look like she was vigorously rubbing her face on it.
The pacing could also use some work. Draw out the reluctance and regret more.
For a first game this is really good. I normally play games with a mom son kink but a video of the game play convinced me to download. Really excited for your next game as that looks more likely to involve my kink.
Would love to see a similar premise involving the father arranging the reluctant seduction of his wife by son, such an under represented scenario.
