Short, drags at the beginning, unoriginal naming the Emma Stone looking girl "Emma", ends stupidly.
You introduced your main character 1 single character in the first release. We see the others but this is where you choose to end things? Lame. It would have taken you like maybe 10 renders to resolve that part and have you lay the ground work for his introduction to the rest of the story.
But nope. Had to be another "Oh a cliffhanger, that's what I'll do" developer. Next update won't even finish out a day's worth of time, I bet anything.