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VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Dessert Story [v0.2b] [TeamRedProductions]

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RoadWulf

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Nov 18, 2018
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Ok so... is there going to be a plot to this at some point? Because your release and the update should have been the length of one release, and even then we still haven't seen a plot. We keep seeing characters that the MC has no interaction with and again, because of how short the updates are, it could be years before we do.

And like said... what the hell is the plot of this? Because there isn't one established yet. Imagine watching the first 15 minutes of a movie and having no idea what the hell it's about. Just on this update alone you have 7 female characters established and he's only talked to one of them. Sure, he knows 4 of them, but you had him avoid them.

Now I will say the art in this is mostly good, the Celebrity fakes are interesting, and game is pretty. But that's not enough.
There needs to be more content per update, and at some point you're going to have to make a plot.

Also, lets talk about where you ended this update. This was a clear "Fuck it, that's enough" moment, because where you should move on to the next scene, the update ends. You skipped 2 days of time, and ended it after introducing Jane (barely).

I give this one more update before I just quit playing it.
 

J.R.

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Jan 2, 2020
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Thanks for the game update, it now fits way better for me with the new choice regarding the doctor. Only one thing seems to become a "problem" for me: almost ALL the girls are hot! - so it will be damn hard if I have to choose one in the future...
 

Canto Forte

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Jul 10, 2017
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My Dessert Story v 0.2b

Hi guys, we are told that there are fans of our game that didn't like its current direction. So we made that optional with this update. There are also a few changes and additional renders to complement the new implementation. We are happy to hear suggestions like these, but we might not be able to implement every idea that our fans pitch to us. We will try, guys. Anyways please enjoy and maybe leave a positive review on any forum you know. It's just to help with more traction, and in return, it will definitely motivate us further.
Ps. sorry if my English is broken. I am not a native English speaker. Hoping for your understanding.

Ok so... is there going to be a plot to this at some point? Because your release and the update should have been the length of one release, and even then we still haven't seen a plot. We keep seeing characters that the MC has no interaction with and again, because of how short the updates are, it could be years before we do.

And like said... what the hell is the plot of this? Because there isn't one established yet. Imagine watching the first 15 minutes of a movie and having no idea what the hell it's about. Just on this update alone you have 7 female characters established and he's only talked to one of them. Sure, he knows 4 of them, but you had him avoid them.

Now I will say the art in this is mostly good, the Celebrity fakes are interesting, and game is pretty. But that's not enough.
There needs to be more content per update, and at some point you're going to have to make a plot.

Also, lets talk about where you ended this update. This was a clear "Fuck it, that's enough" moment, because where you should move on to the next scene, the update ends. You skipped 2 days of time, and ended it after introducing Jane (barely).

I give this one more update before I just quit playing it.
How do you like them apples, Wulf?
 
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My Dessert Story v 0.2b

Hi guys, we are told that there are fans of our game that didn't like its current direction. So we made that optional with this update. There are also a few changes and additional renders to complement the new implementation. We are happy to hear suggestions like these, but we might not be able to implement every idea that our fans pitch to us. We will try, guys. Anyways please enjoy and maybe leave a positive review on any forum you know. It's just to help with more traction, and in return, it will definitely motivate us further.
Ps. sorry if my English is broken. I am not a native English speaker. Hoping for your understanding.



How do you like them apples, Wulf?
BOOM! I know I'm not 'Wulf'. I'm 'Wolf' and I'm glad they changed that one part I had an issue with. Now, I can't wait for the next update.
 

RoadWulf

Forum Fanatic
Nov 18, 2018
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My Dessert Story v 0.2b

Hi guys, we are told that there are fans of our game that didn't like its current direction. So we made that optional with this update. There are also a few changes and additional renders to complement the new implementation. We are happy to hear suggestions like these, but we might not be able to implement every idea that our fans pitch to us. We will try, guys. Anyways please enjoy and maybe leave a positive review on any forum you know. It's just to help with more traction, and in return, it will definitely motivate us further.
Ps. sorry if my English is broken. I am not a native English speaker. Hoping for your understanding.



How do you like them apples, Wulf?
How did that address anything I said?
 

Canto Forte

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Jul 10, 2017
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Well .. how nice ... who among you is willing to actually give a suggestion 4 the plot?
How did that address anything I said?
Nice little swerve with the perpetrator being the Ginger Doc, but I gotta ask was the blackmail thing necessary? It could easily go south for MC.
Dev is all so shallow and dodgy about what is MCs reason to keep living the awful life he has...
How about this .. Nico is the shrew .. taming of the shrew would be a nice homage to the classics.
 
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Ok so... is there going to be a plot to this at some point? Because your release and the update should have been the length of one release, and even then we still haven't seen a plot. We keep seeing characters that the MC has no interaction with and again, because of how short the updates are, it could be years before we do.

And like said... what the hell is the plot of this? Because there isn't one established yet. Imagine watching the first 15 minutes of a movie and having no idea what the hell it's about. Just on this update alone you have 7 female characters established and he's only talked to one of them. Sure, he knows 4 of them, but you had him avoid them.

Now I will say the art in this is mostly good, the Celebrity fakes are interesting, and game is pretty. But that's not enough.
There needs to be more content per update, and at some point you're going to have to make a plot.

Also, lets talk about where you ended this update. This was a clear "Fuck it, that's enough" moment, because where you should move on to the next scene, the update ends. You skipped 2 days of time, and ended it after introducing Jane (barely).

I give this one more update before I just quit playing it.
Fucky Sucky?
 
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