Yeah I'll try but I am worried. I have seen too many games here get abandoned just because of the comment section on here haha.As a patron you could ask them if they are interested in a discussion or maybe replying to some of the comments in this thread. Even bad feedback is useful for devs. Of course they don't have to be active on F95, but maybe something good could come of it. Do they have a discord? There is none in the OP.
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The game sounded good... until I read the comments. I guess I'll add it to my ignore list.
In any case, good luck to the developer.
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Yo, i liked this game at first because of the gorgeous Girls, and the MC was a decent enough guy(at first). But this new update changed that for me. The MC catches a guy trying to rape someone, prevents it(good job), and then has the brilliant idea of blackmailing the guy and letting him go instead of calling the police on his ass. I get that the MC needs money right now, but that was just wrong, what's stopping the guy of trying to rape someone else? Letting a rapist walk free because of money? Fuck, i wouldn't do that even if i was homeless and without a penny to my name. I really don't like where this game is going, honestly i think the DEV should make the game the way he wants to, but should also at least let people know which direction the game is going so people know what they're getting into, because that was a complete 180 from 0.1 to 0.2
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There are some good looking models. But the story is all over the place.
It's early in development, so the Dev can still fix things.
The decision to blackmail the doctor was a bad move in my opinion.
Also what happened to Sarah that she is unconscious for several days? She didn't suffer any major trauma, she wasn't stabbed. Are we supposed to believe that falling to the ground caused her to be unconscious for several days?
Why did the MC leave after realizing the lady being attacked was his aunt Sarah. At the beginning he mentioned that she was the only aunt that was nice to him - so why vanish after saving her life. So he is willing to risk his life to save a complete stranger, but once he realizes it is his (favorite) aunt he isn't even concerned enough to check on her in the hospital?
Another part that didn't make sense - the MC is worried that Nicole will think he is a perv because of his painting and then immediately after thinking that he stares at her ass.
Then towards the end the main character has a choice - stare at the joggers ass or don't risk it. Regardless of what you pick the bodyguard still glares at the MC and thinks he is a pervert. So why put a choice there at all? I didn't review the code, so I don't know what affect the choice had behind the scenes, but in the story you got the same response.
I think this could be a compelling VN, but the Dev just needs to clean up some inconsistencies.
I will give props to the curveball the Dev through at us though - I thought for sure the rapist would be the biker/gangster and not the doctor. But again - the whole blackmail thing was kind of stupid.
It's early in development, so the Dev can still fix things.
The decision to blackmail the doctor was a bad move in my opinion.
Also what happened to Sarah that she is unconscious for several days? She didn't suffer any major trauma, she wasn't stabbed. Are we supposed to believe that falling to the ground caused her to be unconscious for several days?
Why did the MC leave after realizing the lady being attacked was his aunt Sarah. At the beginning he mentioned that she was the only aunt that was nice to him - so why vanish after saving her life. So he is willing to risk his life to save a complete stranger, but once he realizes it is his (favorite) aunt he isn't even concerned enough to check on her in the hospital?
Another part that didn't make sense - the MC is worried that Nicole will think he is a perv because of his painting and then immediately after thinking that he stares at her ass.
Then towards the end the main character has a choice - stare at the joggers ass or don't risk it. Regardless of what you pick the bodyguard still glares at the MC and thinks he is a pervert. So why put a choice there at all? I didn't review the code, so I don't know what affect the choice had behind the scenes, but in the story you got the same response.
I think this could be a compelling VN, but the Dev just needs to clean up some inconsistencies.
I will give props to the curveball the Dev through at us though - I thought for sure the rapist would be the biker/gangster and not the doctor. But again - the whole blackmail thing was kind of stupid.
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Version .2B
Has the option to turn in the doctor to the police. Hopefully this encourages people to support dev patron
I am just hoping for the best man lol