VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.18.2 P2 Ch.6] [Tropecita Games]

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Sylaann

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TropecitaGames said:
The translator who did v.0.1 is not working on the project anymore. Since then I'm translating the game myself and I've got external help from a native proofreader who corrected v.0.1 (hundreds of errors) and v.0.2 (dozens). He's doing his magic on v.0.3, v.0.4, and v.0.4.5 right now.
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There is still a few mistakes "his is for a guy, you have to use "her" for words like labia (this is from the sex scene with Eileen)

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ufff exquisite game I understand that we are at the beginning of the game so few scenes, hopefully erika will have more scenes soon
 
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Sylaann said:
"Take care, Eile" instead of "Take care, Eileen"


maybe it's a nickname but MC never used it before, I think, so I guess it's a mistake


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It's not a mistake. He used it when he met her at the cafe, when she explained why she dropped out of college (Her father was fired and she had to look for a job to supplement her mother's income.). It is an affectionate way of calling her.
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I love the affectionate names, and sometimes the characters will address each other by a diminutive if the original names haven't been changed:
Emma is addressed as Em from time to time, Daphne as Daph, and Erika as Eri. Eileen has been named Eile a couple of times, in the cafe and in the forest.
Samantha and Scarlett will get "shortnamed" also, especially if I found a diminutive for Scarlett that I like.
 
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Darkiger

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Got this error in the Landry :

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 609, in execute_call_screen
store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__
renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
Exception: Screen laundry is not known.


-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 692, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 696, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 70, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 700, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 704, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1317, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1320, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 70, in script call
File "scripts/init/Global Labels.rpyc", line 115, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 66, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1323, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2232, in execute
self.call("execute")
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2220, in call
return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/statements.py", line 281, in call
return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 609, in execute_call_screen
store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 3161, in call_screen
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse="screen", type="screen", roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 4252, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 743, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/sl2/sldisplayables.py", line 110, in event
return self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1064, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 999, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 322, in run
new_rv = run(i, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 329, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__
renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 1185, in show_screen
raise Exception("Screen %s is not known.\n" % (name[0],))
Exception: Screen laundry is not known.


Windows-10-10.0.19041 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.1.22070801
Her Little Secret 0.1.8
Thu Aug 11 13:13:20 2022
```
 
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Darkiger said:
Got this error in the Landry :

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 609, in execute_call_screen
store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__
renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
Exception: Screen laundry is not known.


-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 692, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 696, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 70, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 700, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 704, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1317, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 54, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1320, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 70, in script call
File "scripts/init/Global Labels.rpyc", line 115, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1386, in script call
File "scripts/HomeInteractives/togoto_screen.rpyc", line 66, in script call
File "scripts/v0.1_d1/ver0.1.rpyc", line 1323, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2232, in execute
self.call("execute")
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2220, in call
return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/statements.py", line 281, in call
return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 609, in execute_call_screen
store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 3161, in call_screen
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse="screen", type="screen", roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 4252, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 743, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/sl2/sldisplayables.py", line 110, in event
return self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1064, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 999, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 322, in run
new_rv = run(i, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 329, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_control.rpy", line 131, in __call__
renpy.show_screen(self.screen, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 1185, in show_screen
raise Exception("Screen %s is not known.\n" % (name[0],))
Exception: Screen laundry is not known.


Windows-10-10.0.19041 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.1.22070801
Her Little Secret 0.1.8
Thu Aug 11 13:13:20 2022
```
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I think you've posted here mistakenly instead of in the Her Little Secret thread.
 
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Allan Trumbull said:
Got a patched apk sized 303 mb. Why apk from op sized 808 mb ?
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The OP links are for the whole game, not just the upgrade patch, and it's uncompressed so no quality is lost (only a 95% compression when converting from png to webp is applied.)
 
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I'm at the first cafe scene with the x-gf and if I decide not to pursue her, the MC still treats her like he just banged her, calling her honey and all. It kind of just defeats the purpose of the choice tbh. I wasn't very keen on getting back with an ex who commented as if she may have slept with a few guys since they broke up so I was a little disappointed by that.
 
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*looks at synopsis*
"returns home after college"
*looks at MC*

How long after college exactly? Because that guy is in his 30's. Did he go to Grad school too?
 
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Duke4515 said:
I'm at the first cafe scene with the x-gf and if I decide not to pursue her he still treats her like he just banged her, calling her honey and all. It kind of just defeats the purpose of the choice tbh. I wasn't very keen on getting back with an ex who commented as if she may have slept with a few guys since they broke up so I was a little disappointed by that.
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They were a couple for years, and they love each other (as friends if you didn't pursue her). They call each other with affectionate names (the MC calls "honey" or "sweetheart" every girl he loves, as a friend, family or partner)
 
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RoadWulf said:
*looks at synopsis*
"returns home after college"
*looks at MC*

How long after college exactly? Because that guy is in his 30's. Did he go to Grad school too?
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He looking older is intended.
I can't see Norah, Marta, or Samantha (all three of them in their 40s) dating a shota-looking guy. Fucking him, perhaps. Dating him and building a future together, no way.
The 18-21 girls don't mind too much, they hardly can go for younger guys, and a guy in their age range that treats them as queens and looks older and more mature is a plus for them.
The women in the age range between girl and MILF won't be taken aback by his looks. They will appreciate him looking 30:
Alexia:24
Sophie:28
Maddie:22
Megan: 23
 
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