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Well, she is great as she is and she shouldn't do anything drastic just to please me. He breasts are a little too large to be perfect, doesn't mean I don't like them though. But smaller is better.
An example girl would be Veronica Rodriguez.
She isn't going to dye her hair. Redhead power is championed by her and Daphne . We already have a dyed redhead in Erika (who isn't going to return to her natural color either).
I didn't know Veronica. Beautiful girl
One suggestion for the dev(s), don't do colored text for the different characters dialogue. It is fine if their names are in different colors but for example purple or gray text on a black textbox makes it hard to read. Stick with white text for all dialogue.
One suggestion for the dev(s), don't do colored text for the different characters dialogue. It is fine if their names are in different colors but for example purple or gray text on a black textbox makes it hard to read. Stick with white text for all dialogue.
As this is not the first time this comment surfaced, I think in the next update I'll try to change it. I don't know if it will apply to saves or if it will need a new start.
seriously, bro... you can see that quite a few people notice that the main character looks really older... this is not a reproach.. but... Seriously, he looks older than Mom!!! the mother looks very good in her early 30s (yes, we know that according to the plot she is about 40)... and in my opinion, when girls find out that a guy looks younger than his years, it attracts them (so he is healthy), but if he looks 10 years older than he really is, then there is clearly something wrong... girls don't like old men. they love these old people's money. and with this money they get young lovers....
I may be wrong about that ... but it really can often be seen in reality.
sorry for my English ... it 's not my language ... I write using google translator
As this is not the first time this comment surfaced, I think in the next update I'll try to change it. I don't know if it will apply to saves or if it will need a new start.
It should take effect when the game is first loaded, either from a fresh start or a saved game. I have edited the script files, option and gui rpy files in other games before and the changes appeared as soon as I opened the game after making the changes. Ren'py games load all the rpy/rpyc files into memory on launch.
As this is not the first time this comment surfaced, I think in the next update I'll try to change it. I don't know if it will apply to saves or if it will need a new start.
First off, I want to say that I quite like this game for what's available for now. The girls are quite pleasant and I appreciate that you're not forced into any character's route, and getting a second chance for them is pretty nice too in case you change your mind. Personally, at this point in the game, I mostly like the four younger characters. They're all cute and I enjoy the scenes you have with them. The ever-present best friend character is also pretty solid. And in contrast to a common comment, I have no issues with the MC's appearance. And maybe I've just played too many of these games at this point, but I don't mind the English even if it's not perfect. I can understand everything just fine and it's not unpleasant to read. Assume everything else I don't mention is fine, too; I'm rubbish at writing reviews, so I'll probably have forgotten things.
But I do have a concern and a complaint. Just the one of each.
The one concern I have is in terms of scope. As it is right now, there's quite a lot of girls who have been introduced (12 or so?), although only about half of that has much interaction for now. And when the rest of the titular dorm develops, I'm just afraid that it might be a bit much to manage. On the other hand, if I like at least half of them, that should be OK in terms of content. I do hope I don't end up shafted at the finish line if I've not chosen every character, though. I'm not sure what your plan for multi-character endings is, though. But take that as optimism for this game getting finished and not a complaint.
One complaint, though. And this is a me complaint, not necessarily something wrong with the game.
And a similar line at the lake. Maybe I'm just being petty, but I really think that it would be better for that not to be brought up at all. Unless it's critical for the story, I think it would be better to just leave what she got up to in the interim to the player's imagination. As it stands, that just rubs me the wrong way. But it's the only complaint I have. Other than Erika's tattoos, but I'm not going to be a bitch about those.
seriously, bro... you can see that quite a few people notice that the main character looks really older... this is not a reproach.. but... Seriously, he looks older than Mom!!! the mother looks very good in her early 30s (yes, we know that according to the plot she is about 40)... and in my opinion, when girls find out that a guy looks younger than his years, it attracts them (so he is healthy), but if he looks 10 years older than he really is, then there is clearly something wrong... girls don't like old men. they love these old people's money. and with this money they get young lovers....
I may be wrong about that ... but it really can often be seen in reality.
sorry for my English ... it 's not my language ... I write using google translator
I also see that a few people want NTR and I don't mind them.
The MC is who he is, looking older than his age for a good reason.
As I said in a post yesterday, if I see a guy like him in my home city, I would think he's 25-30. And if I see someone like Martha I can think she's 32-37.
In my experience, a woman wants to be treated well in most cases, regardless of the man's age (real or perceived).
Here is where the MC shines; he knows at every moment what to say to each of the women he comes across to make them feel unique, worshipped, and loved.
And that's regardless of age or wallet thickness.
If it were as you say, people like me who were already bald at 24 would never have gotten laid.
And no, I'm not rich.
I also see that a few people want NTR and I don't mind them.
The MC is who he is, looking older than his age for a good reason.
As I said in a post yesterday, if I see a guy like him in my home city, I would think he's 25-30. And if I see someone like Martha I can think she's 32-37.
In my experience, a woman wants to be treated well in most cases, regardless of the man's age (real or perceived).
Here is where the MC shines; he knows at every moment what to say to each of the women he comes across to make them feel unique, worshipped, and loved.
And that's regardless of age or wallet thickness.
If it were as you say, people like me who were already bald at 24 would never have gotten laid.
And no, I'm not rich.
thanks for the answer, bro.. I'm glad you're a good person. and that you 're dating decent girls ... unfortunately, more and more girls are interested not in culture, education and family values, but in "glamorous life", "daddies", ...
First off, I want to say that I quite like this game for what's available for now. The girls are quite pleasant and I appreciate that you're not forced into any character's route, and getting a second chance for them is pretty nice too in case you change your mind. Personally, at this point in the game, I mostly like the four younger characters. They're all cute and I enjoy the scenes you have with them. The ever-present best friend character is also pretty solid. And in contrast to a common comment, I have no issues with the MC's appearance. And maybe I've just played too many of these games at this point, but I don't mind the English even if it's not perfect. I can understand everything just fine and it's not unpleasant to read. Assume everything else I don't mention is fine, too; I'm rubbish at writing reviews, so I'll probably have forgotten things.
But I do have a concern and a complaint. Just the one of each.
The one concern I have is in terms of scope. As it is right now, there's quite a lot of girls who have been introduced (12 or so?), although only about half of that has much interaction for now. And when the rest of the titular dorm develops, I'm just afraid that it might be a bit much to manage. On the other hand, if I like at least half of them, that should be OK in terms of content. I do hope I don't end up shafted at the finish line if I've not chosen every character, though. I'm not sure what your plan for multi-character endings is, though. But take that as optimism for this game getting finished and not a complaint.
One complaint, though. And this is a me complaint, not necessarily something wrong with the game.
And a similar line at the lake. Maybe I'm just being petty, but I really think that it would be better for that not to be brought up at all. Unless it's critical for the story, I think it would be better to just leave what she got up to in the interim to the player's imagination. As it stands, that just rubs me the wrong way. But it's the only complaint I have. Other than Erika's tattoos, but I'm not going to be a bitch about those.
Thanks for your kind words about the game.
I will break my answer down one point at a time:
I love that you like the game, it's still getting started and, if the reception continues to be good, I hope it lasts a long time.
The four younger girls are one of the axis around which the game revolves, I tried to make them all a bit different from each other so that they seem unique and not just by their looks.
The ever-present best friend (gay and crippled), in this case only male friend, also has his reasons for being there. The first is that it would not be believable for the MC to not have any friends when he comes home. The second is that he's a hacker, and that's already been useful if you don't interfere in the bathroom with Jack. More to come in the future.
On the scope of the game: during these early updates, I've focused on the characters living in the house, Scarlett (who almost lives in the house) and Eileen. Without building those relationships beforehand the game would seem like a fuck-fest, and despite it being an adult game, I want it to have a solid story behind it. The next update (part two of v.0.4, to be released shortly) will continue to focus on the women in the house, as it will be the end of Sunday. v.0.5 - Monday, while not forgetting the women at home, will start to develop relationships with other characters.
About the dangerous sentence: Eileen is an independent woman and no one can think that, after breaking up with her two and a half years ago, she has led a nun's life in college. But she is an independent woman who needs a coherent reason to agree to enter a harem. Actually, to be the creator of the harem, as happens in the scene in the forest. Until then the MC hadn't even considered it, hence his thoughts as he runs off before meeting her. He feels guilty for having started a relationship with Norah and Erika simultaneously. But Eileen gives him a way out, which is the creation of the harem.
Erika's tattoos are not just decorative. They will have some prominence and/or explanation starting in v.0.6. I can't tell more without spoilers.
Their thoughts are already in (italics and between parenthesis) in the game for everyone except for MC's thoughts. I kind of fucked with the declaration of his variable.
About the dangerous sentence: Eileen is an independent woman and no one can think that, after breaking up with her two and a half years ago, she has led a nun's life in college. But she is an independent woman who needs a coherent reason to agree to enter a harem. Actually, to be the creator of the harem, as happens in the scene in the forest. Until then the MC hadn't even considered it, hence his thoughts as he runs off before meeting her. He feels guilty for having started a relationship with Norah and Erika simultaneously. But Eileen gives him a way out, which is the creation of the harem.
I think most people don't have a problem with her having slept with someone else during their time apart (except for the crowd who think mc's moms should be virgins) for the reasons you state. The problem is that she mentions it (out of sight, out of mind kind of thing).
At least that's what i think is the problem but i could be wrong since i couldn't care less that she mentions it (i'm not that insecure).
I think most people don't have a problem with her having slept with someone else during their time apart (except for the crowd who think mc's moms should be virgins) for the reasons you state. The problem is that she mentions it (out of sight, out of mind kind of thing).
At least that's what i think is the problem but i could be wrong since i couldn't care less that she mentions it (i'm not that insecure).
About the dangerous sentence: Eileen is an independent woman and no one can think that, after breaking up with her two and a half years ago, she has led a nun's life in college.
I dunno, I can only say what I do and what I don't like. But really, whether I follow her path or not is relevant only to me. More important is that you write what you want to write; that's better for the game overall, I think. I can only share my thoughts and feelings, which I have. I'm not going to harp on about it.
Erika's tattoos are not just decorative. They will have some prominence and/or explanation starting in v.0.6. I can't tell more without spoilers.
Don't worry about that. No amount of explanation is going to make me ever like tattoos, so don't even concern yourself. It was just a throwaway comment. At least these are on the more tolerable side of things. They don't ruin the character for me or anything, anyway.
I think most people don't have a problem with her having slept with someone else during their time apart (except for the crowd who think mc's moms should be virgins) for the reasons you state. The problem is that she mentions it (out of sight, out of mind kind of thing).
A little of column A, a little of column B. As I said, I'd prefer it just not even broached in any way. I'm not sure if insecurity is the right word, but then I'm not sure what would be. It's not a big deal in any case.
I finished the update last night, and for the most part I was find with it. However...
This is a major pet peeve of mine, and it crops up in lots if games. What was up with the sniper in the bushes?
I'm very concerned that this US an indication of a subplot that really doesn't make sense in this story. I know people like to introduce elements like this to add more conflict to a story, but doesn't this story already have more than enough conflict? A whole lot of potential love interests, many if whom are taboo to the MC -- just in that is plenty of conflict. Assuming Jack gets out of jail somehow, that's plenty of conflict on the level tjis story needs. I think introducing some shady conspiracy is just going to force the story off the rails.
If this was a story about someone involved in organized crime or subterfuge or government cover ups if buy it in a heartbeat, but thus seems to be a story about a normal guy building a harem out of his family and friends, so the conspiracy stuff comes out of nowhere and creates a jarring disconnect.
The only time a LI's history should be brought up at all is if it's something like they waited for the MC. Like they couldn't get that person out of their head so they didn't even bother looking for anyone else. That shows just how much they were into the MC.
I'm not sure what kind of guy gets off to the knowledge an ex rode the cock carousel and you were her favorite pony but it sure the hell isn't me. I do not need to hear about any guys or gals period. There was literally no reason to include that information. For me at least, her telling the MC that meant no way in hell would I ever want her under any circumstances. Even if that line was removed I'll always remember it so she's never going to be of interest to me. She is forever tainted as far as I'm concerned.
. We already have a dyed redhead in Erika (who isn't going to return to her natural color either).
