VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.21.2 S3 Ch.1] [Tropecita Games]

[Trope95]

I found it quite good, there were a few jumps in scenery which didn't flow well, one minute in one place and next you know elsewhere. There needs to be something in here I would hazard to say.

There were a number of grammar and gender issues throughout (him and not her etc) but it didn't detract to much and was ok. Definitely like the render for Scarlett,, quite nice and would like to see more of her later

I would suggest that with each character the name is next to the text as there were occasions when another character spoke, there was just a blank there which is just something I think would look better.

Supposed to be a walk through but so far I haven't seen it in use yet so maybe that is a later thing.

Regardless I liked it and think this does show a lot of merit and opportunity to improve heaps.

Thanks for your feedback.
We see the transition between scenes is something some people complain about. We will try to do it more smoothly.
I can't fire our proofreader, as I married her 20 years ago , and the compensation would be expensive. We will look for this gender issues asap.
You will be seeing a lot of Scarlett, as she's almost glued to Daphne.
The walkthrough is there if you choose it when you start a playthrough. It says when a decission is important and not only lead to extra dialogue. The first time it appears is the (first) movie night with Martha/Mom/Boss

 

[strus94738]

That catsuit, ohhhh.
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This looks really good so far!

Just a quick questions, will there be any of those girls that prefer domming the MC?

 

[armion82]

Thanks for your feedback. We will try to reproduce your problem and solve it as fast as possible.
Did you rename the characters?

Even renaming her,don't make the choosen name to appear.

 

[Trope95]

That catsuit, ohhhh.
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This looks really good so far!

Just a quick questions, will there be any of those girls that prefer domming the MC?

Thanks for your feedback. The catsuit milf, Norah, is also one of my preferred characters, and not only for her looks.
About dommnig the MC:

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Almost all the kinks will be avoidable.

 

[Trope95]

Even renaming her,don't make the choosen name to appear.

its because when you put the game in english in the script the names are not set up... i think i fixed it but im not 100% sure... test it if you want

I figured out what is causing this.
In "Script.rpy" at line 118 it is listed as "define mom", but should be "$ mom".
I edited the file for my game and it works fine now.

Thanks for your feedback and sorry for the inconveniences.
Blankbeater and AshramAscendant have found where the problem is (Thanks to both of them). You can try their solutions.
We will upload an updated version or a patch as soon as possible.

 

[kristijanEX]

I can tell I'm gonna enjoy the game, 8 girls in a update and more to come ?
Fuck yes.

 

[Blackeye.]

Unofficial Android Port of:

My Dorm [v1.0] [Tropecita Games] + IC Patch

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My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.

if you like my ports, consider buying me a cofee

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as to motivate me and get me going to do more ports, and help me pay for mega storage, thanks

 

[WICKEDp4th]

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Off to a good start i guess. The backstory with the Father was kinda "new" much appreciated.
You have put together a much enjoyable cast i would say. All the Girls are adorable. Variety is pretty good too.

But i have some little issues so far with the Project.

- The renders are very grainy
- The MC looks way to old, maybe you look for another male character for him?
- and yes i know, that sounds maybe a liitle bit ridiculous /at least for a Porn VN), but i think the pacing is very far off. We're only at day 3 and every girl has already sexual desires for the MC. I guess by that speed the VN turns into a fuckfest by Day 6 or 7, or maybe you're just planning this project as a "short-Story" with just a few updates, then don't mind that point.

Good luck and godspeed with My Dorm!

 

[Trope95]

Unofficial Android Port of:

My Dorm [v1.0] [Tropecita Games] + IC Patch

MEGA

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My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.

if you like my ports, consider buying me a cofee

You must be registered to see the links

as to motivate me and get me going to do more ports, and help me pay for mega storage, thanks

Thanks a lot. We are not so familiarized with renpy as to release an official Android port just now. We are investigating on how to do it so the user experience looks as good as we want.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

time jump so the pregnancy isn't only an 'end game thing

 

[Trope95]

TropecitaGames
Off to a good start i guess. The backstory with the Father was kinda "new" much appreciated.
You have put together a much enjoyable cast i would say. All the Girls are adorable. Variety is pretty good too.

But i have some little issues so far with the Project.

- The renders are very grainy
- The MC looks way to old, maybe you look for another male character for him?
- and yes i know, that sounds maybe a liitle bit ridiculous /at least for a Porn VN), but i think the pacing is very far off. We're only at day 3 and every girl has already sexual desires for the MC. I guess by that speed the VN turns into a fuckfest by Day 6 or 7, or maybe you're just planning this project as a "short-Story" with just a few updates, then don't mind that point.

Good luck and godspeed with My Dorm!

Thanks for your feedback.
The girls are the game center (as it should be ) and we've put a lot of thought about them so they are not personality clones, giving them their own way of thinking and, obviously, their own looks. I like you enjoyed them.
About the grainy renders: We are experiencing an issue. We tested the game in 8 different computers (all of them with FullHD screens, updated drivers, etc.) and in two of them the renders are seen with a lot of grain. We are testing if it's a computer thing or a picture format thing, as we are new to webp format.
About the fuckfest and all the girls having sexual desires for the MC (Some spoilers about girls mental state):

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[armion82]

Thanks for your feedback and sorry for the inconveniences.
Blankbeater and AshramAscendant have found where the problem is (Thanks to both of them). You can try their solutions.
We will upload an updated version or a patch as soon as possible.

The solution works.
Another great loking mom.And aunt.And other female relatives.And all the girls.
Now my list should become top 20 moms,top 20 aunts,top 20 sisters and top 10 cousins.Without actually grading them

 

[Call of Booty]

Oh,I love this one.Apart of great girls and milfs with different shapes and personalities,humor is what glue all together nicely.Keep up the good work,dev

 

[Mareeeeta]

Not a bad start, a little bit too classic, we have seen this a lot.
I think I like Daphne the most for now.

I'm a bit sad that in a lot of game girls have everytime a stupid boyfriend. I understand why, because with a good guy this girl can't be a LI, but it would change the dynamic.

Good luck dev' !

 

[Trope95]

Oh,I love this one.Apart of great girls and milfs with different shapes and personalities,humor is what glue all together nicely.Keep up the good work,dev

Thanks for your feedback.
We've tried to write some funny scenes that, as you say, glues all together. We know this is a porn game; but we think you can laugh, or at least smile, during the relationship development. We try hard to make a game that we'd enjoy playing.

 

[Trope95]

The solution works.
Another great loking mom.And aunt.And other female relatives.And all the girls.
Now my list should become top 20 moms,top 20 aunts,top 20 sisters and top 10 cousins.Without actually grading them

Thanks for testing it. We will provide it officially asap.
We are glad our girls have entered your lists; specially the top 10 cousins list (are there Daphne and Erika or only one of them?)

 

[Trope95]

Not a bad start, a little bit too classic, we have seen this a lot.
I think I like Daphne the most for now.

I'm a bit sad that in a lot of game girls have everytime a stupid boyfriend. I understand why, because with a good guy this girl can't be a LI, but it would change the dynamic.

Good luck dev' !

Thanks for your feedback.
The game begins somewhat classically, with the idea of veering off the beaten path once the students reach the dorm, in about a week.
I love Daphne, actually I love all the girls. In the team everyone has his/her favourite girl, and our betatester has fallen for Daphne.

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[Olsens.M]

Lack of creativity in these so called game developers, jesus christ.

 

[maybelaterd00]

anyone having problems downloading i get to 211 mb of 211 mb and then it stops. Does show in folder or anywhere same happens on all the dl sites

 

[armion82]

Thanks for testing it. We will provide it officially asap.
We are glad our girls have entered your lists; specially the top 10 cousins list (are there Daphne and Erika or only one of them?)

Of course both.