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Nope. The college she didn't attend won't play any role. It's only her backstory to show how she sees that pregnancy derailing her life.So you're saying there's a chance the school her mom attended could end up being a MAJOR plot point later on, eh?
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He would. Erika would not be out of reach. You can't take her away from me. Though, all the family stuff started with Martha, right? So maybe, just maybe, MC would not be open to whole keeping it in the family thing. Small chance though, because who would in their right mind would be okay not to take a shot if they see Erika?Without (the MC thinking) his dad cheated on Martha, would he have reacted the same when he caught Jack cheating on Erika? If not, Erika may be out of reach too.
The implications of having Saira and Edmund around are huge. Perhaps the MC isn't in the café to catch Jack. Perhaps Saira discovers she's in love earlier, doesn't go to India, and seals the relationship. Without the Dorm, perhaps even the MC doesn't return to Newport (remember he had job offers from several firms). Or maybe he stays in Portland with Saira for a year, working in the company he was working for while studying.He would. Erika would not be out of reach. You can't take her away from me. Though, all the family stuff started with Martha, right? So maybe, just maybe, MC would not be open to whole keeping it in the family thing. Small chance though, because who would in their right mind would be okay not to take a shot if they see Erika?
Here you go then,The implications of having Saira and Edmund around are huge. Perhaps the MC isn't in the café to catch Jack. Perhaps Saira discovers she's in love earlier, doesn't go to India, and seals the relationship. Without the Dorm, perhaps even the MC doesn't return to Newport (remember he had job offers from several firms). Or maybe he stays in Portland with Saira for a year, working in the company he was working for while studying.
I'm happy we won't know. Since My Dorm is the best-case-scenario for every character (besides Edmund, Jack, or Jonas), any other combination would be sad.![]()
Close enough; Jack.Here you go then,
Saira thinking about sealing the deal but first she wanted to permission of her parents. MC accepts a job away from home. So before starting the job he decided to visit his family. When he was at the Newport, he sees Erika. Then, boom! He and Erika started to date. As Erika said she always compared her dates to MC. If she can have MC, who would give a flying fuck about Zack.(it has her boyfriend's name, right?) Erika apply to a school where MC gonna work. They move in together. MC refuses Saira, saying she missed her chances. Happily ever after.![]()
Nope,It's a short visit. So no Simone, no Scarlett, no Eileen. He visits the family, seen Erika, started the relationship. They probably won't go public with it. After they move in together, they can break the news.But, in that scenario, is it plausible that Eileen would see MC and still integrate the harem idea in his head?
Oh, Mack. Got it.Close enough; Jack.
You could go with Stanford.Nope. The college she didn't attend won't play any role. It's only her backstory to show how she sees that pregnancy derailing her life.
It would be cool if Scarlett ends up in Harvard or Yale and she graduates there, but it's too far away from the MC.![]()
Your theory, although I loved it, doesn't hold water. Erika already saw the MC in My Dorm, and she continued dating Jack until the MC caught him cheating on the 4th day. So no reason for her to dump him earlier in your version.Here you go then,
Saira thinking about sealing the deal but first she wanted to permission of her parents. She goes back to India to confront her parents. MC accepts a job away from home. So before starting the job he decided to visit his family. When he was at the Newport, he sees Erika. Then, boom! He and Erika started to date. As Erika said she always compared her dates to MC. If she can have MC, who would give a flying fuck about Zack.(it has her boyfriend's name, right?) Erika apply to a school where MC gonna work. They move in together. MC refuses Saira, saying she missed her chances. Happily ever after.![]()
See above. Eileen would be there. It can change if Erika and the MC flee the night after the Twins and the MC doesn't go to the lake (where Eileen told him about harems). However, we should remember the MC plays AVNs, so no need for any girl to insert the harem idea in his mind.Close enough; Jack.
But, in that scenario, is it plausible that Eileen would see MC and still integrate the harem idea in his head?
But you are missing this is an alternative timeline. In my timeline MC has completely different mindset. First of all, he knows he has limited time like a few days, a week tops. He is also not worried about whole Dorm business. He goes after Erika because he can't miss his shot. Rick cheated on (what a fucking idiot) because she was unsure, also comparing to MC thing still holds truth. Which means, Erika would accept this advances. So,Your theory, although I loved it, doesn't hold water. Erika already saw the MC in My Dorm, and she continued dating Jack until the MC caught him cheating on the 4th day. So no reason for her to dump him earlier in your version.
In the first 3 days he:
* Showered with Norah.
* Had oral sex with Eileen in the cafe.
* Had a couple of dreams with Martha (one of them with mini-Norah hugging his dick). One of them ended with him cumming in front of Martha's eyes.
* Kissed Norah in the (different) cafe.
* Peeped on Martha at Maddie's store.
* Had the first not-a-date with Martha.
And every one of those things happened with Erika around.
Aren't You glad then that she isn't a side Girl like originally planned?I'm more in love with that girl every time I render her.
Meh... her catto is way better than her in all regards... catto should be MC of the game tbh...Aren't You glad then that she isn't a side Girl like originally planned?![]()
Zeus is one hell of a Cat I'll give you thatMeh... her catto is way better than her in all regards... catto should be MC of the game tbh...![]()
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Fortunately, I listened to the community's advice. Not having her and Megan in the harem would have meant a couple of scenes to be distributed between the other girls.Aren't You glad then that she isn't a side Girl like originally planned?![]()
Spoiler?: Who do you think the narrator is? We know Zeus can understand "human language", so perhaps it's him who is explaining the story to his kitties.Meh... her catto is way better than her in all regards... catto should be MC of the game tbh...![]()
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Fortunately, I listened to the community's advice. Not having her and Megan in the harem would have meant a couple of scenes to be distributed between the other girls.
I know HP would say that it would be a good change if those two scenes were for Martha, but I said distributed.
Having them adds more depth and options to the story.
Spoiler?: Who do you think the narrator is? We know Zeus can understand "human language", so perhaps it's him who is explaining the story to his kitties.![]()
Stanford? In that case you might as well stick with the local Community College.You could go with Stanford.
I doubt Scarlett is going to be playing (American) Football.Stanford? In that case you might as well stick with the local Community College.
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But you are missing this is an alternative timeline. In my timeline MC has completely different mindset. First of all, he knows he has limited time like a few days, a week tops. He is also not worried about whole Dorm business. He goes after Erika because he can't miss his shot. Rick cheated on (what a fucking idiot) because she was unsure, also comparing to MC thing still holds truth. Which means, Erika would accept this advances. So,
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