VN Ren'Py Abandoned My First Time [v3.0] [ItalianLover3D]

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HaremKing112

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i dont understand the description....

he fucked up at school, soo his parents decide to send him at school ? .. what the sens of that ?

parents should send him to the army or something... but send him at school because he fucked up at school... and graduate in same time... meh wut ? o_O

if the dev try to say that he fucked up school and soo he didnt moved up a grade and stay at his same school for another year... that's more logic and ok, but if its that, then description is hardly engrish'ed
i guess the parents of the MC are so fucking Cruel
 

ꜱᴛᴀɢᴡᴏᴏᴅ

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Graphics don't make a game.
When it's porn, graphics are tied with the story at the top spot of what I find important. That said, this looks reasonably okay.
I haven't had time to try it yet but from the screenshots, I'm concerned about a lack of variety when it comes to body types. Most notably, the breasts all look the same. I'll check it out later though nonetheless. I'm not writing it off without trying it.
 
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Skyrim

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i dont understand the description....

he fucked up at school, soo his parents decide to send him at school ? .. what the sens of that ?

parents should send him to the army or something... but send him at school because he fucked up at school... and graduate in same time... meh wut ? o_O

if the dev try to say that he fucked up school and soo he didnt moved up a grade and stay at his same school for another year... that's more logic and ok, but if its that, then description is hardly engrish'ed
Maybe it's a bad translation. I'm italian and someone use a way to threaten his sons like this "se fai il cattivo ti mando al COLLEGIO" ("if you are not a good boy i'll send you to the COLLEGIO). Where "collegio" it's not the english "college".
But i've not played the game, so i don't know in the game what is meant for college. If in the game it's the english college, i'm agree with your perplexity about plot.
I'm corious if the developer is italian or not
 

italianlover3d

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Hi guys, here we are! Directly from the bunga-bunga's land!

Wooow we really didn't expect all these comments, but we have to admit that they are all important to us, so first of all thank you to spend time for us!

We also admit that we are new in that kind of game's development and we'll trying to do our best, and we're just realizing in this first phase that isn't easy to understand what people really want.

So we see that a lot of you didn't understand about the College and you are right.. that's our fault!

As Skyrim said, in Italy what we call "College" isn't the University (even though the main italian influential English-Italian dictionary "Zingarelli" also traslate it this way!); anyway here it's a ugly and sad place, often run by bisbetic nuns (after spending years there we personally guarantee you that even the MOST catholic boy will call them slutty bitches) where they give you shitty food and lodging at a cheap price and you have a place where you can study and prepare yourself for exams (without distractions, no TV, Internet, No porn.. shit)

So right, we should explain better on the description!

@Justanx & @jdertaufer: right, "prep/boarding school" could be a better traslation! ; )

About the render: yes, the first episode renders are in 3Delight due our previous video card and other hardware limits; so we decided to invest more money in a brand new PC and yes, we're already rendering in Iray for the second episode.

@myuhinny: yeah we have already understood that the lipstick on MC make him looks like a transgender ; ) ..anyway issue about lights & reflections, we'll correct!
For the toupee you make us laught 'cause it came to mind that scene from Wayne's World: (see attachment, I think we still can't post link yet!)

@HorizonD: the "whore" to Valentina was a thought (used by a horny boy!): maybe these thoughts written in brackets are not very clear, could italic be a better choice?

So again thank you very much for playing our game, we will sure take account of your critics & suggestions!

Ciao!
 

HorizonD

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Yes, I know it was a thought. Brackets are fine for thoughts. I described it wrong, my bad.
With slutty bitches, whores.... other countries, other customs, I guess. ;)
Other people may find it a little strange. Perhaps not overdo it with such expressions.
 

Early Cuyler

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When it's porn, graphics are tied with the story at the top spot of what I find important. That said, this looks reasonably okay.
I haven't had time to try it yet but from the screenshots, I'm concerned about a lack of variety when it comes to body types. Most notably, the breasts all look the same. I'll check it out later though nonetheless. I'm not writing it off without trying it.
Exactly. You said "graphics are tied with the story", if the story is not compelling a player loses interest. If the game is full of bugs and the game-play is cryptic it becomes difficult to play. There are many factors that go into a porn game.

But I don't wanna get off topic, I'm still talking about this game. You said you didn't even give it a try yet. So give it a shot first.
 

macadam

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ah, soo it is a religious boarding school then..

now its way more logic :D
 

Vethor

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When it's porn, graphics are tied with the story at the top spot of what I find important. That said, this looks reasonably okay.
I haven't had time to try it yet but from the screenshots, I'm concerned about a lack of variety when it comes to body types. Most notably, the breasts all look the same. I'll check it out later though nonetheless. I'm not writing it off without trying it.
In most good games I do not care if the graphics are even minecraft like, but in porn games if the images are trash even if the game play is great it's just not enough.
 

macadam

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maybe these thoughts written in brackets are not very clear, could italic be a better choice?
for thoughts. i think the best is to use a different size font and something very clear. the bracket is pretty good, but problem is sometime some devs use them also for stuff like sound or clue/indice/hint. i myself prefer to use the stars **** for though, wich imho, make difference with the ( ) / [ ] wich is used on many differents way by others devs.

but that just my own opinion...

for explain it better , here what i see from many games :

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" *i wish i could kick her non-chicken ass*...SLAP ! "

( that's my way to do it XD)
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" (i wish i could kick her non-chicken ass) ... *slap !* "

(that's how you plan to use it with bracket)
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" i wish i could kick her non-chicken ass ... ( you slap her ass ) "

(that's what i see in many many games.)
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but use the one you think is the best for you :) . just saying sometime its a bit confusing. using italic and else will definitly help even more. but you can also just change the color . any simple way for the players to simply recognize a thougth is a +
 

italianlover3d

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Thanks @macadam ! We'll do try and see what's better for the next episode! Maybe with the italic or font color (I personally don't like the stars but I've see many games that use it..)

@thunderrob is also right, we'll try to limit the "terminator" mode in the next chapter, it was a try as saw in many games but at the end could be boring.. anyway.. we'll be back ; )
 

Huldrafolk

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I'm Italian so I have to be proud of this but... nope, I can't even try it if there is no incest. It's easy.
Aspetto aggiornamenti, implementate l'incesto o tutto il gioco perde di senso
 
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Early Cuyler

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I'm Italian so I have to be proud of this but... nope, I can't even try it if there is no incest. It's easy.
Aspetto aggiornamenti, implementate l'incesto o tutto il gioco perde di senso
We’ll see what happens in future updates. Maybe the Dev will have an incest patch or something.

Sono d'accordo. Tenere le dita incrociate per l'incesto.
 

StokkaFilippo

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Hi, I'm another user from the land of Bunga Bunga. Hope the best for this game. Let make us proud.
Ps Ragazzi, inutile cincischiare, tocca strapazzare la mammina :D
 

italianlover3d

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Hi guys, a little update!

As we mentioned, the second episode (in progress) will be done in iray; so we also decided to remake the renders of the first episode and some various corrections (attached two previews 3delight vs iray, @myuhinny: no more lipstick for MC!)

As we noticed a lot of interest on that mum .. well we thought of introduce an erotic scene with her as a protagonist .. And last but not least, we are also thinking of something for some ..dirty incest ;-) ..stay tuned!
 
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