It's quite fast paced, and I like it. It's refreshing to get things done instead of a slow burn that takes months in real time and gives you night creeping scenes and shit. The MC not being an ultimate loser despite being somewhat naive is also a big plus, I laughed as hell when he told that bitch to fuck off.
The assets are basic, but I guess overtime, if the project is successful, that will change. Despite that, the renders were quite clear, no complaints on that department. The designs were good as well except for the overly top hulk dad, and the MC being a midget then at the end looking tall af. From 18 to 23, people usually don't go through a grow spurt in terms of height like that. Ah, end scene MC, the arms were quite slim compared to the overall body he has, that should be changed, either trim back on the body, or make the arms bigger so it won't look that weird.
Animations were they what they were, I've seen much worse than those. Only bothering thing are those porn sounds, those a big no to me, though maybe some likes it.