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I've read it on Literotica, it was a good one.
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Thank you to all my old and new patreons for choosing to support me and MFUL .
What to expect in Chapter 2:
1. I will be working on giving a patreon release, so you awesome people can get to play the game before the free release.
2. I will be improving the flaws in Chapter 1 pointed out by some people to the best of my capabilities.
3. Chapter 2 is going to be huge. So, I may have to release it as Part 1 and Part2. But I will try to release the Chapter 2 in its entirety without dividing it into two parts.
4. The Harem route will be focusing on building relationships and having dates with the characters you like and love. And I will be introducing new characters and our MC will be bolder and more confident than before.
5. As for NTR route, as you may have seen in Chapter 1, I tried doing something new. Like dividing the screen in multiple portions while MC was on a call so the player can see both the MC and the NTR content. I initially planned to do NTR as a bad ending scenario, but instead of just suddenly give a small NTR scene I tried to create a little build up in the bad ending. Now for Chapter 2 I will again be trying to do something new, it may turn into a whole new route with multiple paths and choices.
That's all, stay healthy and stay safe.
That's all.
QUESTION FOR THE DEVELOPER:Before Chapter 1, yes they were supposed to be just bad endings. But I tried doing something like creating a build up towards bad ending and using splitscreens to show both MC and the NTR content. I have come up with something new with the second NTR too and if things go smoothly, It could be turned into a complete new route with choice based decisions.
Thank you for pointing things out to me, I may be able to correct few of them and I will try my best to not to repeat the same mistakes in future renders. About NTR 2, I some new Idea I want to try, I hope you will like that.
Thank you
Hi, in original story, MC had runaway cutting ties from the family due to the NTR event. And since that part has been changed, what you are saying makes sense. The time skip is essential to the storyline, but MC will be keeping touch with his family.
Netori, pregnancy and Trap/shemale. Pregnancy and Trap/shemale will be introduced in Chapter 2. Chapter 2 will be focusing on MC's relationship with all harem possibilities, as the Chapter 3 is planned to be the end game, Chapter 2 is going to be big. And thank you for using MFUL in your signature Alex, that's very nice of you
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Thank youI will try fixing it
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Yes and choices that lead to it are marked.
Any chance you can redesign the body of the grandmother? She doesn't have the body of a woman who should be in her 60's. I would love for her to be more saggy and be like a woman that age should be. It is not that I have a thing for such older women, but she looks to be in her 40's. Other than that, this looks to be a very exciting game!!!
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Don't have the link but the story title is A Family Destroyed
bear in mind that the dev have change the plot so you can only see tiny resemblance.
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Oh brother, there are some granny's there, that look more hot than women at 30's.
Thanks
Yes, they are and will be avoidable and marked.
Won't spoil
I have tried that without making her look full of wrinkles. I will try again but I don't know if my laptop will be able to render light wrinkles
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I have a rough outline in my head, about what I will be doing in chapter 2, then I will be dividing it into scenes and write a plot line. Then I will be writing a scene, make its renders and compile it in renpy one by one. For sex scenes, I have used bj, cowgirl, doggy and missionary in Chapter 1. Last time I planned 26 scenes for chapter 1, by the time I reached the end, I had made 33
I can put anal play in main story line, threesome won't be available before chapter 3.I can add footjob and threesome in NTR route though.
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Too bad a footjob only in a NTR routeI have a rough outline in my head, about what I will be doing in chapter 2, then I will be dividing it into scenes and write a plot line. Then I will be writing a scene, make its renders and compile it in renpy one by one. For sex scenes, I have used bj, cowgirl, doggy and missionary in Chapter 1. Last time I planned 26 scenes for chapter 1, by the time I reached the end, I had made 33
I can add footjob and threesome in NTR route though.
, anyway, thanks for the answer.
Too bad a footjob only in a NTR route
I will create a female character poll, MC will be able to get a footjob with the winner in non-NTR path.
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You made my day
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I was very surprised by this game,it has so much potential and I hope he carries this VN further . The english and grammer was actually really good . Good luck on your first game!
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Have I just finished playing through the same game? *goes away to double-check the game I just finished* Well this thread certainly is for the game I just played through. While I would say the English was a little above average (not as many spelling mistakes as I was expecting given the dev's statement that English isn't their native language) there were still a few mistakes that stood out for me, such as "Atleast" instead of "At least" and the constant use of "prolly" instead of "probably", but the actual grammar was very much below average. Pretty much every sentence had words that were transposed which made reading a sentence somewhat harder than it should have been. There is also punctuation used where it isn't needed, primarily way too many commas inserted where there simply shouldn't be a comma.For the most part I usually just ignore spelling mistakes and poor grammar, more so when a dev has been honest and open enough to say right from the start that English is not their native language so there will be mistakes. But when someone says that the English and grammar was actually really good when it clearly wasn't is just too much for me to remain silent!
Despite the poor grammar and English spelling I did, overall, enjoy the first chapter. There were some other issues: animation being rather "jerky" and awkward (others have mentioned that earlier); the sound effects are sometimes a little abrupt (both in starting and stopping) and can sometimes be a bit of a surprise (a warning about sound effects at the start of the game would have been appreciated); there are some rather sudden shifts in scenes (maybe due to choices having removed some scenes?) that leave you feeling as if you've missed something and then there's the scenes that just don't make sense such as the event with the MC's mom, after she runs out of the room he apparently just goes back to sleep?
I do agree that there is potential here and I also hope the dev does indeed carry on with this one. Good luck and best wishes for Chapter 2!