I think it's over all a pretty good Start.
But i could be better in some Things.
- Characters Heigth in some Renders.
In some Emily is about a Head bigger then MC, in some shorter. Like at the Kiss at the Airport.
Brittany looks like a Giant when she walks off after MC found out that his Dad paid her.
Brittany shrinks vom Sentence to Sentence when she talks to Emily and shows her the Picture.
- Moms Wine Glass is missing the Handle
- Animations. Not completly fucked up, but ... odd.
- The english is definetly not bad, but proofreading wouldn't hurt.
- The Menu Backround hurts my Eyes