VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1] [Ulala Games]

[OneWayMissile]

At least it is all in the family.......Not anywhere near to THE TYRANT........HATE that game

What type of logic is that? Lmao

 

[OneWayMissile]

ulala0077 Are all the ntr routes be bad endings route?

 

[Fzoner95]

I already "played" the old intro so I was curious how your VN would turn out. Here are some points:

- Please increase the resolution to 1080p! It's 2020!
- If there is a family member like an uncle in the story it's not really necessary to tell the player the relationship (mother's side, father's side), but since you give an introduction anyway I suggest telling the player exactly how everyone is connected. I guess uncle Bob is MC's father's brother?
- Bob lives with MC's "nan" and his wife, but Nanna Sophia lives alone. So if you have both grandmas please tell us who is who.
- I like the characters and the dialogue!
- When Adam and Brit meet for dinner there is a timejump, they greet and then they have already eaten. That's fine but please add a quick fade here, to black for example. Doesn't have to be long
- there are unnecessary fades during the call in the bathroom though, kinda annoying
- Anna wears shoes with heels with her pyjamas.
- It's nice to have animations but I think good still images are better than bad animations
- MC wakes up, dresses completely and only THEN notices his mother's clothes on the ground

So yeah, I didn't really like the NTR parts (I enjoy them sometimes) but I like the love parts. And granny is hot, I just wish she wouldn't look so stupid all the time. I'm looking forward to the next version.

 

[Madjuls]

I liked this game and I look forward to the next update.

 

[Famescua]

I like how this is going so far. All I ask is please dont do the 5 years later and he doesn't know what's going on with his family's life. That is a bit cliche. I'm talking from experience when I say that because when I was in the military I still kept in touch with my family and so did just about everyone I knew. Granted there were a few who were loners but with this mc I dont see how you can write that out considering he basically told them all he loves them and wants to try a relationship with them. So just keep that in mind. Great game keep up the good work.

 

[paper tiger]

Grandma looks the youngest of all the females...

nice.

 

[AlexTorch]

ulala0077 I have some questions, you have plans to increase the list of fetishes of the game? Chapter 2 will be only about Anna and Emily or we will have more Sophia action? And last, have plans to add a galery?

 

[eddie987]

I wasn't expecting the time jump in the end and since I'm really curious to see how the "revenge" in the future tags will play out, it will be interesting to see how some people will react when they see the new and improved MC after all these years. Talking about the new look, it needs some work, especially on the arms that look disproportionate with the rest of his body, like someone else already pointed out, but the dev said that he's working on it, so I think that he just wanted to give us an idea about the MC's physical changes. The animations weren't the best, but I don't really mind. The dev is doing a really good job considering it's his first game and he's using a laptop. What I like the most about this game, is that even if the MC was played by his own father and his ex, he's not acting like a little bitch, but he fights back and actually winning. I'm looking forward to the next update.

 

[istlover08]

so far so good i have one major criticism some of the sex scenes especially the first one with the mom look very jank i would prefer a still render compared to that if you cannot do animation well

 

[WheelsandtheLegman]

I enjoyed this game! DM me the story please and you don't really got to do those animations.

 

[Avaron1974]

I hope i'm as young looking as the gran when I hit that age.

Less blonde and more red but even less grey would be great.

 

[katabasi]

did i see i frikin black burger?
this game seems stuck in 2010

 

[JoleenStar]

It's too bad the endings happen so quickly. Good luck on your game I suppose.

 

[Siindr]

So ntr is completly avoidable? Orrrr???

 

[AlexTorch]

So ntr is completly avoidable? Orrrr???

Yes, there is a Giant "WARNING, NTR" in the dialog.

 

[ulala0077]

ulala0077 Are all the ntr routes be bad endings route?

Before Chapter 1, yes they were supposed to be just bad endings. But I tried doing something like creating a build up towards bad ending and using splitscreens to show both MC and the NTR content. I have come up with something new with the second NTR too and if things go smoothly, It could be turned into a complete new route with choice based decisions.

I already "played" the old intro so I was curious how your VN would turn out. Here are some points:

- Please increase the resolution to 1080p! It's 2020!
- If there is a family member like an uncle in the story it's not really necessary to tell the player the relationship (mother's side, father's side), but since you give an introduction anyway I suggest telling the player exactly how everyone is connected. I guess uncle Bob is MC's father's brother?
- Bob lives with MC's "nan" and his wife, but Nanna Sophia lives alone. So if you have both grandmas please tell us who is who.
- I like the characters and the dialogue!
- When Adam and Brit meet for dinner there is a timejump, they greet and then they have already eaten. That's fine but please add a quick fade here, to black for example. Doesn't have to be long
- there are unnecessary fades during the call in the bathroom though, kinda annoying
- Anna wears shoes with heels with her pyjamas.
- It's nice to have animations but I think good still images are better than bad animations
- MC wakes up, dresses completely and only THEN notices his mother's clothes on the ground

So yeah, I didn't really like the NTR parts (I enjoy them sometimes) but I like the love parts. And granny is hot, I just wish she wouldn't look so stupid all the time. I'm looking forward to the next version.

Thank you for pointing things out to me, I may be able to correct few of them and I will try my best to not to repeat the same mistakes in future renders. About NTR 2, I some new Idea I want to try, I hope you will like that.

I liked this game and I look forward to the next update.

Thank you

I like how this is going so far. All I ask is please dont do the 5 years later and he doesn't know what's going on with his family's life. That is a bit cliche. I'm talking from experience when I say that because when I was in the military I still kept in touch with my family and so did just about everyone I knew. Granted there were a few who were loners but with this mc I dont see how you can write that out considering he basically told them all he loves them and wants to try a relationship with them. So just keep that in mind. Great game keep up the good work.

Hi, in original story, MC had runaway cutting ties from the family due to the NTR event. And since that part has been changed, what you are saying makes sense. The time skip is essential to the storyline, but MC will be keeping touch with his family.

ulala0077 I have some questions, you have plans to increase the list of fetishes of the game? Chapter 2 will be only about Anna and Emily or we will have more Sophia action? And last, have plans to add a galery?

Netori, pregnancy and Trap/shemale. Pregnancy and Trap/shemale will be introduced in Chapter 2. Chapter 2 will be focusing on MC's relationship with all harem possibilities, as the Chapter 3 is planned to be the end game, Chapter 2 is going to be big. And thank you for using MFUL in your signature Alex, that's very nice of you

I wasn't expecting the time jump in the end and since I'm really curious to see how the "revenge" in the future tags will play out, it will be interesting to see how some people will react when they see the new and improved MC after all these years. Talking about the new look, it needs some work, especially on the arms that look disproportionate with the rest of his body, like someone else already pointed out, but the dev said that he's working on it, so I think that he just wanted to give us an idea about the MC's physical changes. The animations weren't the best, but I don't really mind. The dev is doing a really good job considering it's his first game and he's using a laptop. What I like the most about this game, is that even if the MC was played by his own father and his ex, he's not acting like a little bitch, but he fights back and actually winning. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Thank you

so far so good i have one major criticism some of the sex scenes especially the first one with the mom look very jank i would prefer a still render compared to that if you cannot do animation well

Thank you I will try fixing it

It's too bad the endings happen so quickly. Good luck on your game I suppose.

Thank you Well I am a bit hasty with this one as I am really loving the idea and plot of my second planned game.

So ntr is completly avoidable? Orrrr???

Yes and choices that lead to it are marked.

 

[4Finger]

The normal Mc in the game:

After 5 years Mc came back and realized he really loved his father soo much that he wanted to look like him....

Keep the normal Mc in the game...

 

[Claudio83]

Before Chapter 1, yes they were supposed to be just bad endings. But I tried doing something like creating a build up towards bad ending and using splitscreens to show both MC and the NTR content. I have come up with something new with the second NTR too and if things go smoothly, It could be turned into a complete new route with choice based decisions.



Thank you for pointing things out to me, I may be able to correct few of them and I will try my best to not to repeat the same mistakes in future renders. About NTR 2, I some new Idea I want to try, I hope you will like that.



Thank you


Hi, in original story, MC had runaway cutting ties from the family due to the NTR event. And since that part has been changed, what you are saying makes sense. The time skip is essential to the storyline, but MC will be keeping touch with his family.


Netori, pregnancy and Trap/shemale. Pregnancy and Trap/shemale will be introduced in Chapter 2. Chapter 2 will be focusing on MC's relationship with all harem possibilities, as the Chapter 3 is planned to be the end game, Chapter 2 is going to be big. And thank you for using MFUL in your signature Alex, that's very nice of you


Thank you


Thank you I will try fixing it


Thank you Well I am a bit hasty with this one as I am really loving the idea and plot of my second planned game.


Yes and choices that lead to it are marked.

I'm hoping in a NTR/cuckold/sharing route, avoidable for whom doesn't like it

 

[AlexTorch]

Netori, pregnancy and Trap/shemale. Pregnancy and Trap/shemale will be introduced in Chapter 2. Chapter 2 will be focusing on MC's relationship with all harem possibilities, as the Chapter 3 is planned to be the end game, Chapter 2 is going to be big. And thank you for using MFUL in your signature Alex, that's very nice of you

Hey, that a minimum that i can do so some people see your work, i'm really liking so far, as you can see, you are in the top 10 , but serious, i hope that everything goes well with your game.

 

[Siindr]

Love that ntr is avoidable. For my review now, i like a Game where the romantic relations grow slowly, after all this is incest, takes a long tine to overcone barriers and such. Time skip is a nich touch cant wait for ch 2.