VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1] [Ulala Games]

[Look-see]

Huh there's still no shitstorm from hardcore anti-NTR people (I am anti-NTR but I am diplomatic and I can just leave) hopefully it stays that way.

agreed im pretty much throwing this game in the rearview. forced NTR not my thing delete and move on. NTR in a game? if it's avoidable sure ill give it a shot.

 

[Look-see]

I just hope he returns one day as very successful and have a loyal wife and beautiful children, with a warning to the parents to fuck off and not interact with their grandchildren by him. Its on r/relationships and here is the link

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one story i liked was to put it simply. "guys gf cheats on him, breaks up with her, dates her sister and her family pretty much constantly reminds her that she cheated and favors the guy of their own cheating daughter."... you know after writing that next time i'll make sure to have the link in hand.

 

[Rythan25]

No sexual content ? Whoa... thats a REALLY fucked up life...

 

[Ara-sH]

Grandma looks younger than mother!!!

 

[ulala0077]

Here's the thing : just because you liked that story doesnt mean that turning it into a game will sell,if you plan on making a living or earn something out of making games you might want to reconsider unavoidable shit that will turn off the majority of players.Some players/most players (non-ntr ones) tend to find unavoidable NTR distasteful NO MATTER if you make it avoidable after that.My advice for your first game you might wanna rethink the ''traumatizing'' event and get more people hooked up then slicing your fan base in half (at least) with forced fetishes.

You are right. Guess, I will get some coffee ready and try to come up with something that equally impacts MC greatly but also doesn't force NTR on non NTR fans, giving a full avoidibility of NTR. The dad paying the girl to have a relationship with MC idea that was mentioned earlier was good too.

 

[BrokenDreams]

it's sad to see that the game Dev has to give so many justifications for implementing NTR in his own story. For the NTR hating people-
---> Open game thread
--> Read description
--> See NTR
--> Leave
and you won't be missed.
Very simple steps to do.(that is assuming the bitching folks have the mental capacity to understand the simple concept of avoiding something which they don't like)

 

[Look-see]

You are right. Guess, I will get some coffee ready and try to come up with something that equally impacts MC greatly but also doesn't force NTR on non NTR fans, giving a full avoidibility of NTR. The dad paying the girl to have a relationship with MC idea that was mentioned earlier was good too.

THIEF!.... i'll allow it. you have my blessings child.

 

[Captainx227]

Looks promising, I'll be following your progress. Good luck.

 

[ulala0077]

Thank you, all of you guys for your valuable insight. I know plenty of you are bummed out with the no sexual content tag.

But this was more of a character introduction and story introduction. I don't want to create a game that only I will like, and something that only caters to my fetish.

I want more and more people to enjoy something that I have created like I enjoy the games out here.

I will try to work around the forced NTR. I want to do my best to please both NTR and non NTR fans. As only the intro have been done, it won't be that hard.

I will keep all of your suggestions in my mind while developing a detailed storyboard for first chapter.

 

[Look-see]

Thank you, all of you guys for your valuable insight. I know plenty of you are bummed out with the no sexual content tag.

But this was more of a character introduction and story introduction. I don't want to create a game that only I will like, and something that only caters to my fetish.

I want more and more people to enjoy something that I have created like I enjoy the games out here.

I will try to work around the forced NTR. I want to do my best to please both NTR and non NTR fans. As only the intro have been done, it won't be that hard.

I will keep all of your suggestions in my mind while developing a detailed storyboard for first chapter.

my last piece of advice before im out for the day. get an idea of how much you can render between updates. if splitting up NTR and non-NTR routes make the update seem short for players depending on their play style. honestly some devs do this thing where one update focuses entirely on one route and then finish the other route the next month. sure it sux but at least players get more appreciation per update instead of saying "that's it?"

sandbox games would be the exception but i dont reccommend that if you're new to coding

 

[✝Fenrir✝]

I want the MC to go full Itachi uchiha and kill everyone

Seriously this is fucked up dude

MC has to take revenge

credits for this idea: TiffanyMonroe

 

[Methos23]

I will try to work around the forced NTR. I want to do my best to please both NTR and non NTR fans. As only the intro have been done, it won't be that hard.

Have the father killed that should make the Mc traumatized while your at it have every man killed except the MC

 

[Vuynjou]

this seems interesting

 

[JokerLeader]

You are right. Guess, I will get some coffee ready and try to come up with something that equally impacts MC greatly but also doesn't force NTR on non NTR fans, giving a full avoidibility of NTR. The dad paying the girl to have a relationship with MC idea that was mentioned earlier was good too.

I don't like NTR but that's a not bad trauma for the start, but after that, i hope there's no more NTR, but good luck with the game

 

[SpikeZg]

46mb intro, OK...

 

[ulala0077]

my last piece of advice before im out for the day. get an idea of how much you can render between updates. if splitting up NTR and non-NTR routes make the update seem short for players depending on their play style. honestly some devs do this thing where one update focuses entirely on one route and then finish the other route the next month. sure it sux but at least players get more appreciation per update instead of saying "that's it?"

sandbox games would be the exception but i dont reccommend that if you're new to coding

Sandbox will fuck my mind up right now, simple visual novel coding already too much for me right now. I am planning on giving updates 1 route a time alternatively. like 1 month a non-NTR update, other an NTR one.

 

[darlic]

Grandma looks younger than mother!!!

Agree, the models should be switched

 

[ulala0077]

Good luck with this. One concern/suggestion I have. I hope the guy doing the stealing is one guy. Right now you're introducing a father, an uncle and a grandpa. That's too many of them. I always hated it when an ntr story is written in a way that there are multiple men involved, it just kinda dilutes the trauma aspect of ntr for me. I think it'd create a stronger focus if only one man is stealing all the women you care for in your life, rather than it being split up to different men.

I will keep this in mind. I have a very important question for you and other NTR players, as an NTR player, what is your end game in a game. Most NTR games, where the guy who is stealing the girls are either abandoned or under development. I want to ask what an NTR gamer see as an end game for such games.

Is it to get as many NTR scenes possible while slowly and steadily winning your girls back in the end or having the other guy winning it all.

I have a good well thought plan about MC following the first part while keep the NTR loving part of his personality intact but when I think about the latter part, I can't seem to be able to think more content than 2-3 updates and an early game over.

 

[Ara-sH]

There is a possibility of having a romantic relationship with granny in one of the routes, I tried my best to make her look old yet bangable. I will improve it more as I gather more rendering skills.

make her face older, but her body not so much.

 

[SpikeZg]

Ok, played it (or watched it LOL) looks interesting, why describe in the OP that there will be NTR moment in the begining of the game and then not put that into the game?

MC looks like a cuck boy, so it won't be hard
characters look meh aside from sister and GF, i guess GF is going to fuck someone and he is going to see it? or mom?
when can we expect that NTR moment?