VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1] [Ulala Games]

[tsunku]

Revenge route is about MC retaliating against both the guy and the girl.

but, no sexual content?!? HOW?!? WHY?!?!? the sister is crying cuz she's getting no brother cock!!!

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[Amahl Farouk]

NTR games are only a win for me, if the girl doing the playing around your back eventually gets won over again and mindbroken and dumped. Take the power back!

 

[Amahl Farouk]

Unless of course you are playing the girl and then everything is just peachy! But cucked MC's they need rehabilitated

 

[Tumai]

Listening to too much "advice" can mess up a game just as badly. Just make the game you want to make as best you can.

 

[Ghostdanser]

I'm not a fan of NTR and generally avoid any games with lots of NTR in them, that said, if a game has an integral NTR scene at the beginning and thereafter NTR is avoidable, then I will give it a shot. Heck, I've got about a half-dozen story outlines going and one of them requires NTR at the start of the game with no other NTR content beyond that. My advise is listen to people, but ultimately make the game you want, IF you can make the game work with a non-NTR trauma and you are cool with that then do it. If you really think that NTR is the only trauma that works, then go with it. Ultimately you will never please everybody. I don't have time to look at the game right now, but I have dl'd it and will probably comment back later. Either way, good luck!

 

[ulala0077]

Ok, played it (or watched it LOL) looks interesting, why describe in the OP that there will be NTR moment in the begining of the game and then not put that into the game?

MC looks like a cuck boy, so it won't be hard
characters look meh aside from sister and GF, i guess GF is going to fuck someone and he is going to see it? or mom?
when can we expect that NTR moment?

Well the game was initially going to start with the NTR event in the beginning and then the choice based scenario to follow NTR or non-NTR path. I may have to change the story to not to force NTR on non NTR players. If that happens, I will add add the previously thought out NTR scene as bonus scene but it won't be a part of the game.

 

[leon02457]

Android port will be much enjoyable!

 

[ulala0077]

I'm not a fan of NTR and generally avoid any games with lots of NTR in them, that said, if a game has an integral NTR scene at the beginning and thereafter NTR is avoidable, then I will give it a shot. Heck, I've got about a half-dozen story outlines going and one of them requires NTR at the start of the game with no other NTR content beyond that. My advise is listen to people, but ultimately make the game you want, IF you can make the game work with a non-NTR trauma and you are cool with that then do it. If you really think that NTR is the only trauma that works, then go with it. Ultimately you will never please everybody. I don't have time to look at the game right now, but I have dl'd it and will probably comment back later. Either way, good luck!

Yeah that's what I am going to do, I am writing detailed storyboards. Both the original one and trying to bypass the force NTR in other one. I will compare the both. If the other story seems decent and involving I will work on it otherwise will have to continue it as it is.

 

[ulala0077]

Android port will be much enjoyable!

Intro doesn't have much content nor any sexual content either. I will try the "Android port" option in renpy maker in the first update, if that works smoothly it will be amazing. If not, you may have to wait for unofficial android ports until I learn how to port it.

 

[dunhill]

you know what ppl is always complaining that they more realism in porn games (their excuses for more short women without boobs or ass) so why not put more realism into NTR porn games??? as soon as their is NTR give the MC the option to buy a gun and shoot the dick or tits off anyone who wrongs him... or is that too real for ppl??

maybe give the MC the option of a baseball bat or anything else, i've never seen a guy that got cheated on just sit down and accepted it.... twice i've seen guys fight over it and both times in the end they always leave the woman because their pus** ain't worth it... lol

 

[Riitesh]

Well the game was initially going to start with the NTR event in the beginning and then the choice based scenario to follow NTR or non-NTR path. I may have to change the story to not to force NTR on non NTR players. If that happens, I will add add the previously thought out NTR scene as bonus scene but it won't be a part of the game.

It depends on what kind of NTR is going to happen, its degree and the character and its involvement in the game. The people (Non-NTR) who are going to support you will not like main girls getting fucked by others.
You can just make a NTR moment where player can stop it or let it happen. Fear of main girl getting fucked by some other dude is enough for Non-NTR folks to choose their path, you just have to write a convincing story of that fear.

 

[esoom]

Is the NTR avoidable?

 

[ulala0077]

Is the NTR avoidable?

Intro has no NTR, I working on the story to make NTR event avoidable.

 

[myuhinny]

Looking at the MC I thought the traumatizing event turned him gay. I'll probably wait for now till there is more content to see if it'll be worth checking out.

 

[MLBnoob]

Yeah that's what I am going to do, I am writing detailed storyboards. Both the original one and trying to bypass the force NTR in other one. I will compare the both. If the other story seems decent and involving I will work on it otherwise will have to continue it as it is.

I suggest you to consider some opinions not all. But consider what the main problem is, what people are complaining like a certain character or a relationship.

A Story about a most likely abandoned game that released a few months ago: MOST Forum goers complained about an old man that seduced the "younger roommate" whom MC share ownership of a cafe. Dev keeps saying he promises to cut off the old creepy guy seducing roommate (NTR). Later dev released an update that changed dialogue and made the NTR scene skippable but happening in the background, despite his earlier posts. Dev gets massive backlash while there were white knights defending him, ignorant bastards seem to forget he promised to cut the NTR or make it avoidable, or even cut the old creepy guy. Thats when they paused their patreon (had about 4 patrons) and later silently abandoned the game. Always keep your promise and the flow of the story about the NTR was off hence why it was criticized and most people just ignored the game, the white-knights (who don't know the true fucking meaning of polygamy) never showed up presently to support dev (hahaha). I know you (the dev of the abandoned game, not you ulalala0077) is still lurking the forums secretly, I hope if you and your partner makes another game consider your actions and your words.

Stick to your original story if you want, but do not promise changes that you won't deliver. As I said I am anti-NTR but I am diplomatic and won't insult anyone. If you continue the unavoidable NTR thats cool those of us who don't like that will and should leave quietly. NTR lovers are fickle, saw an NTR-optional game with 100 patrons while some NTR games don't grow in terms of patron numbers (not a discouragement but an observation). In the end you are the DEV not us, it is your story, it is you that decides what course the story should take (with the advice of patrons of course).

 

[BK186]

NTR (Avoidable) hmmm, nicee

 

[lashante]

good luck

 

[ulala0077]

I suggest you to consider some opinions not all. But consider what the main problem is, what people are complaining like a certain character or a relationship.

A Story about a most likely abandoned game that released a few months ago: MOST Forum goers complained about an old man that seduced the "younger roommate" whom MC share ownership of a cafe. Dev keeps saying he promises to cut off the old creepy guy seducing roommate (NTR). Later dev released an update that changed dialogue and made the NTR scene skippable but happening in the background, despite his earlier posts. Dev gets massive backlash while there were white knights defending him, ignorant bastards seem to forget he promised to cut the NTR or make it avoidable, or even cut the old creepy guy. Thats when they paused their patreon (had about 4 patrons) and later silently abandoned the game. Always keep your promise and the flow of the story about the NTR was off hence why it was criticized and most people just ignored the game, the white-knights (who don't know the true fucking meaning of polygamy) never showed up presently to support dev (hahaha). I know you (the dev of the abandoned game, not you ulalala0077) is still lurking the forums secretly, I hope if you and your partner makes another game consider your actions and your words.

Stick to your original story if you want, but do not promise changes that you won't deliver. As I said I am anti-NTR but I am diplomatic and won't insult anyone. If you continue the unavoidable NTR thats cool those of us who don't like that will and should leave quietly. NTR lovers are fickle, saw an NTR-optional game with 100 patrons while some NTR games don't grow in terms of patron numbers (not a discouragement but an observation). In the end you are the DEV not us, it is your story, it is you that decides what course the story should take (with the advice of patrons of course).

Don't worry I won't make promises I couldn't keep. As I said I will be comparing the story boards. Once I have done that, I will publish about the story route I will be following. I will mention it again, during the release of first chapter.

 

[Mikey Mike]

The grandmother would look sexier if her tits were at least equal in size to her daughter's. I'm not really digging her pot belly either. Maybe she could be into yoga and/or gardening to keep fit? I like the idea of the dad having a tiny dick due to decades of steroid abuse and not able to fully satisfy the MC's nympho mom!