VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1] [Ulala Games]

[Axcel McAver]

I think what the MC did was wrong. If you had been cheated, don't choose to fuck your family members. What the MC should have done was fuck the guy in front of the girl, see how she likes that. Then fuck you family and pat yourself for a good job done while your pounding your Mother and/or sister.

 

[Joshua Tree]

Hmm, a MC that easily tops the age of an early 60-year old...

Well, he have fallen on hard times

 

[Methos23]

jokes on you buddy, i would still bang her like a hungry boy with a drum!!! but for the rest of players GILFs is a real thing and many ppl is turned on by it (current company NOT excluded, i do find a sexy GLIF unresistant... noting like granny giving you a lollypop then jumping you like the 1920's) so maybe try aging the grandma in a few versions and let your patrons vote on them...

 

[Joshua Tree]

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C'mon man, put on a blindfold, and if you wouldn't know any better.... you wouldn't mind that lollypop, lol

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

The aging morps that I have makes her look like the red priestess's old age form

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I..I can't.

You know, if an NTR episode is the reason the protag is traumatized, give reason to why he does what he does. You don't really need to serve up that to the player in vivid pictures. A background story is all you need.

For a pervert you make a lot of sense. This is a easy compromise that I can agree on.

jokes on you buddy, i would still bang her like a hungry boy with a drum!!! but for the rest of players GILFs is a real thing and many ppl is turned on by it (current company NOT excluded, i do find a sexy GLIF unresistant... noting like granny giving you a lollypop then jumping you like the 1920's) so maybe try aging the grandma in a few versions and let your patrons vote on them...

Looks like we have a new king of degenerates/perverts.
I had to help wash my great grandma once and I gotta tell you I was so dry even the Sahara desert was offering me water.
Meh that sounded better before I typed it.

 

[✝Fenrir✝]

I think what the MC did was wrong. If you had been cheated, don't choose to fuck your family members. What the MC should have done was fuck the guy in front of the girl, see how she likes that. Then fuck you family and pat yourself for a good job done while your pounding your Mother and/or sister.

"Fuck the Guy in front of the girl"

 

[okabe21]

Grandma? I'm In! <3

 

[Mikey Mike]

Wow, 7 pages of wild conjecture and speculation so far and no actual game-play?

 

[darkoraclegirl]

Mom kind of looks like a guy to me and it's interesting how the grandmother looks the same age as the sister, clearly the family members become immortal after a certain point in their lives if they all look roughly around the same age. Not sure how I feel about the guy's look though.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Doesn't the MC look like a middle aged man?

 

[Joshua Tree]

All creators start somewhere. A bit to early to judge a book by the cover. Seeing the review by RidiculAwsome , it's a bit disheartening approach towards a newbie creator.

 

[BadFox1]

One of these days I'd love to make a VN with the MOST HATED tags just for the thread, whining and piss people off. Eats popcorn. The dev needs to continue the story AS PLANNED before he changes ANYTHING. THERE IS NO CONTENT to comment on. It is one scene of NTR for Gods sake. If it gets the story rolling then so be it. People get too emotional over a tag. SIGHS... I knew this thread was gonna be a shitstorm. CALLED IT! Eats Popcorn.

 

[macadam]

Grandma looks the youngest of all the females...

i agree in some part.

grand ma look younger than her daughter (the mother)...

i think she need more winkles (or whatever its called ), because she look wayyyyy too young, i'd give her 40 at max, while mom turn around 44 or something.

 

[ptahn]

For the most part non-NTR people do not whine. They do not ask for the NTR content to be removed, just that it should be avoidable. That's when the NTR people all complain about the non-NTR people. So the non-NTR people are willing to share a game and the NTR people are not willing to share. Ironic, huh? Poly Cafe died in part because of an NTR scene (I know it was not techically NTR.) BangCity has been going on for several months with an NTR-like situation and the developer has $39/month in donations. Even The Tyrant, one of the most famous NTR games has a non-NTR path. If we would just be honest with the developer, we would admit that a non-optional NTR game loses many players right out of the gate and has trouble raising money. If a new developer starts an NTR game and later makes it optional, I immediately go to their Patreon page and pledge at least a buck a month just for listening. Ulala, figure out what your goals are. If you want a lot of people playing your game and/or you want to make some money make the NTR optional. If you are just making this game because you want to tell a particular story or just for the fun of making a game, then just do what you want and don't listen to any of us.

 

[macadam]

okay, gived a try... here my lil opinion (nobody care about)

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okay, that's it... introduction of all chars... no scene, nothing at all... guess that's why its called "intro" XD.

would have still loved a bit more imho, its very empty for now, like litteraly. but well, see again later what's up to.

cant give opinion AT ALL, nor even vote or anything.... they are nothing in it yet.

 

[macadam]

All creators start somewhere. A bit to early to judge a book by the cover. Seeing the review by RidiculAwsome , it's a bit disheartening approach towards a newbie creator.

i dont even know how the fuck you can review that. they are nothing ... introduction of chars, that's it. the whole game is on the OP pics. no joke.

putting a review is just trolling at this point.

 

[ulala0077]

renders look ncice dev ... and the game definitely has potential !


can you tell us how long have you planned this to be ?

i know this is just the intro, but any info would be appreciated. like how many updates are planned ? or maybe how many chapters do you intend to make for the game ?

nice work and we hope to see more stuff !

I don't want to unnecessary prolong the game. I am planning to complete it in 6-8 months.

 

[Joshua Tree]

i dont even know how the fuck you can review that. they are nothing ... introduction of chars, that's it. the whole game is on the OP pics. no joke.

putting a review is just trolling at this point.

Some people just want to watch the world burn I suppose.

 

[Ursus4321]

The game is based on a really good literotica story I have read a long time ago. Even though story had that NTR scene, it was beautifully written in a way it more felt like the character going through a traumatizing experience and than coming around it to have a nice life (with off-course having a harem because literotica).

I have added my own NTR route and one other non-NTR route to make it a choised based VN than a linear kinetic VN.

I am starting out with 0 coding and 0 rendering experience with average but amd laptop. So, I chose that story to get a better know how of developing a game and getting experience.

My second game is going to be a completely non NTR game, but due to it's setting, it will take great coding and rendering skills and I am nowhere near that, nor I have resources to hire someone.

Make the game as you have thought. Don't let ntr haters or fans influence you. If you start to change things because they start to overwhelm their comments in the end you will do a shit that you will get bored and leave.
Be true to yourself

 

[Barbaric -Shelf]

so im going to wait till theres actually adult content