Yo! Just got back from a two week vacation, and I'm jet-lagged the fuck out, so I'll be resting for a few days. But now that I'm back I'm gonna keep working on the game! Didn't think much about it while I was away, but I did come up with a few ideas. But I wanna address a few comments first.
Some people didn't like the condom thing very much. Others did like it but explained it as a power dynamic with Kanade holding the power. A power dynamic miiiight be a part of it, I have no clue really, but here is my explanation as to how I think Kanade's actual reasoning goes which is actually really sweet.
You know how some food, while quite tasty, you don't really care about so you sometimes just down it quickly so you can feel satiated? Maybe you're running late on your lunch break and you need to eat fast to be on time. But some food is different. Those select few or single favorite food item? You'd hate to rush it. If you don't have time for it you put it in the fridge until you do have time. Because you want to savor every single bite and sensation. You want to fully finish tasting one section of the food before moving on to the even better tasting other sections. That's kinda like her boyfriend to her.
There's also the special connection she feels. The emotional connection and infatuation you can only feel with the one person you are totally and hopelessly in love with. Maybe even someone you've known your whole life? The pleasure of a raw dick is great and all especially if it's a big and fat one, but ultimately she just doesn't put much value on who takes her first rawdogging or creampie. She doesn't care about other dicks that aren't her boyfriend's beyond the physical pleasure they give her. She considers her boyfriend's feelings of course and she knows the importance society attributes to it, but to HER it isn't a significant event.
But the idea of finally becoming one in heart and flesh? With the person she loves more than anything in the whole world? Not even hindered by the separation provided by the flimsy material that is a condom. Quite frankly the closest you can ever be with your soulmate? It must seem absolutely mind blowing to her. Like, once she has had a taste of that she would fall even deeper in love with MC. That's why she wants to savor the feeling of this stage in their relationship, basically when they're still dating and everything's relatively casual, perhaps not even that different from their friendship before. Or maybe it's just the sheer state of arousal and love she knows she'd feel in that instance that she just straight up needs to prepare her heart for.
Basically like if I had the opportunity to make out with a random hot model, I probably would. But it's just not the same as finally getting to kiss your (high school) crush.
idk
(but I absolutely love this character)
This one has a lot of potential for sure. As others have already said a million times, the lack of build up and instant corruption is the big downside here.
Other than that... honestly, after having beaten it earlier and stewing in my thoughts... I'm really looking forward to more.
At first, I did hate that she just easily lets another guy rawdog and creampie her, after her whole speech to MC that she wants to save their first raw penetration for a special occasion that she isn't ready for. But I totally get what you're saying. With anyone else it doesn't matter and doesn't give her the same feeling. But with MC, it's special, and she wants to savor it as much as possible. I'm on board with this now.
I love love LOVE how much MC and Kanade adore and love each other. That's a big thing I enjoy in Netorase, when the couple clearly show how much they love each other, and the kink is all about the love. I also really love that MC isn't useless here and sex between him and Kanade is actually really good, and he can make her cum multiple times, especially after the reclamation sex when they get home near the end.
So, yeah, to Fanorase, my only issue is the neckbreaking speed of the build up to instant sluttification. Work on that and slow it down some, and this could be a banger Netorase game that we so sorely need.
Glad to see y'all agree. I find this sorta thing extremely hot, so that's why I did it lmfao. There are a lot of netorase games that have similar lines akin to "my heart's only for you", and that's extremely hot, yes, but I want to take that a step further. I'll be changing and rearranging most of the prologue, but this aspect will still be present.
well i left a comment back then, But the more i play the game the more i start thinking of certain issues tho,
Firstly i want to say that the game and story telling is really great but some points not so good...
As other people have said, The point where the female mc goes raw instantly and all slutty feels to rushed...
As some and me as well, I feel like their should be a build up before she accepts doing it raw and then starting go full slut,
I have a few opinions tho, I think that going with the EX BF was a good idea but i think you should make a build up before the MC spectates them, For example he should let her contact her ex and sleep privately and later on she reports what they have done, leaving up to ones imagination on what her report entails, and one of these reports she comments on how they did it raw but it ends with no creampie until the MC hides somewhere to spy on them which the FMC would later get creampied.
2nd thought: Their should be choice of people who the MC would want her to sleep with, Like your typical Neterose hentai games, For example could be another friend, or the janitor, Principal, Black transfer student, Homeless guy, neighbor, boss from the part time job, The bully, You get the point.
Overall the game has potential, it's the road you wish to take.
Tho i wish you goodluck and I look forward In seeing how you flesh out the game in the later future and I wish you goodluck
Big agree on it being rushed. It
was my first draft of the prologue, so I needed fresh eyes to see where I fucked up. So I'll be having more buildup there. Interesting idea on the report part... I might make that an option to let her do it by themselves some time later down the road, but right now I want their first time with him together.
And yes, I'll be making NPCs you can let her fuck. Six of those are already in my plans, but I'll take note of the others.
wow this game has a ton of potential i really like the way Kanade and Mc interact with each other and show they have complete faith and love for one another.
however maybe i sound like an echo chamber now with the other comments at this point but i feel like she just goes insta slut mode way too fast. Also the whole making mc wear a condom cause she wants it to be "special" but then goes straight into letting her ex bf and others go raw and creampie her without a care doesn't make any sense to me.
IMO when the game releases fully it will be way hotter if she keeps the condom rule for everyone But the ex bf (secretly) since she clearly feels at least something for him. maybe a scenario where she tells the mc she makes everyone wear a condom but then he spys on her and ex bf only to see them going raw and her letting him end it with a creampie. it would really hammer in the fact she could get completely taken from mc because of his fetish.
Maybe. Everyone else wearing a condom except her ex is a good idea and I'm planning on that, but I don't think I'll make it a secret. I want this game to be open communication between the couple, with hints of doubt toward the end game. I just personally think them being honest is hotter lol. But I'll definitely consider it, because, frankly, her doing it in secret
is hot lmfao.
I quite enjoyed the prologue, but as others said it ran faster than it should.
Some ideas set some rules, including a x amount of fucks rules, so Yuuji has only so many left (guessing he is the main antagonist)
determine who is the dom and sub, as the GF is trying to please your kink it would make sense for the MC to be the dom so she can't do XYZ without permission including use of condoms.
Are you going to have her stolen away (multiple endings) or are you going to have a happily ever after? If so maybe determine that she uses condoms until she is ready for the MC. In this situation it makes sense if he is the first to cum in her as she wants him to be the first for most things.
I see i see, I'll keep that in mind. I'll ((((try to)))) make a system where you can decide through dialogue how controlling you want to be. If you're more dom, you get more options on how she does stuff, but if you choose sub options, she'll decide what she likes (you'll still have options to pick from, just less so).
BUT, she won't be stolen away. Everything she does is for her boyfriend. So right now, no multiple endings. I'll finish what I have in mind first before deciding what I should do.
at least that's the plan lmaooo
This game is a gem, I really enjoyed it
1: we can give it a score of 5 out of 5 only because of its writing, its writing is so strong, it means that you can enjoy every dialogue very much! It does not contain extra dialogue at all, it does not contain weak dialogue at all, every dialogue has been worked on, every dialogue is either full of love or full of feelings related to sharing
2: This game has a strong point that I have not experienced until now, even though it is an NTS game, this game also induces feelings related to the NTR tag! I mean the feelings of jealousy and fear etc, this is great because I never want to see NTR in this game, I never want to see drama between this very cute couple
3: FMC's appearance and personality are extremely great, that means I officially fell in love with this girl, she drives me crazy every moment
4: The relationship between MC and FMC is very deep, and this is very, very great. The romance is very great. Strong romance is rarely seen in the Adult Game, and the stronger the romance, the more enjoyable NTS is
5: The story of the game is excellent, it is relationship-oriented, there is a lot of tension, we are not on the side of simple and boring relationships
and Etc
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I hope we will never see NTR or its path will be separated from NTS, so I have no problem with NTR, the separation of this lovely couple is definitely not enjoyable.
A wish:
I hope that many choices will be added to the game, for example, a choice that leads to the continuation of fmc's sexual event with another, and a choice that prevents fmc from continuing, in this way, more weight is given to mc, which means that mc does not become a loser, for example, when fmc sex with another choose whether the mc wants to witness NTR's dialogues or not, when the first option is selected, the mc and the player will no longer feel like losers,i just want there to always be the fact that MC is in control, it doesn't matter when it comes to sex, I mean whether or not it happens, two choices, in the first one, the mc accepts, in the second one, he does not accept, after he accepts, if the mc has no control over that sexual event, there is no problem, it is even great!
Most importantly, I hope that this amazing couple never gets upset with each other or that something bad happens to them
Amazing Game
There will be no hard NTR in this game. There are a lot already out there. I want to see a happy couple for once dammit LOL. I decided to make this game for that reason after all.
And yes, I agree on not making the MC feel like a loser. I'm struggling with it, because there aren't any good examples for this specific type of game(!!!), but that's my intention.
No clue when a new update will be. No promises, but maybe sometime in July. I'll be checking in here a bit since this is my first project. I have a better understanding of the more technical stuff in rpgm now, so it'll mostly be on the writing part.
So yeah
