VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[tg]

Your scenario seem for me to complicated it doesn't go with the style of the dev. I do not think she Vivian become a whore or slut nut only will have some situation where she would be "forced" to fuck with some of the characters like the twin or the basketball player. As a collateral damage. I really think is going to head in that direction.

I do think her turning into a whore is a bit much for the story. But, I hope she is mistaken as a whore, and men often treat her as one. I think that would fit right into the feel of this game. It's still early days, but I could see her filling the role of client-fluffer and such. Not in the next little while, but eventually. When the story turns darker.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

A dark heavy end is fine. Having written quite a bit myself, I believe readers, to be truly engaged, there needs to be someone or something to root for. In that scenario, I can absolutely see Hutch gaining the upper hand "eventually." After all, every person has a limit from which they rise or spiral into oblivion.

Obviously, Christian is the "evil" in the story. Vivian, while complicit, is manipulated by Christian. Christian is also manipulating Hutch (duh!), and I hope the author doesn't just leave it at surface level and have Hutch continue to be manipulated to the end. That would be WAY too shallow. I'm hoping (praying even) that we get a more complicated Hutch, one that, over time, begins to twist the circumstances to his benefit.

Christian's niece, the one who's nice to him (I believe it's his niece, I'm not sure typing this, so forgive me if I'm wrong), is a good way to start. Hutch mentioned that he's "open" to a different relationship. The word "open" is weighted in the way he brought it up out of nowhere. Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable. A dark heavy end, like I mentioned, is fine, but if it's Hutch that goes down, it will be a failed attempt at writing. If I wanted that, I would rewatch Uncut Jems. What a waste of time that movie was.

I totally get you and I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't.
I don't think Hutch will end as cuck either, the story ends a lot heavier than that and not only be just Hutch who will suffer.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

o which corner are you working tonight? I Feel like trying out a younger model so will go elsewhere.

 

[Adhdclassic]

The question truly is will the DEV stick with the NTS or again will he switch back to NTR. Shadows of Silence makes me feel they will stay together but there will be a secret. If these titles are staying. Maybe she kills Christian because he won't stop then he becomes possesive and Hutch knows she did it. But classic I love my wife so I will protect her.
#A Husband's Sacrifice
#The Price of Love
#Shadows of Forgiveness
#Shadows of Silence

 

[Aimless44]

Dev told us his story will have a heavy dark end and all you guys come up with is that Hutch reaches a level of self confident out of nowhere and can cope with everything and anyone. That's just not going to happen. This story is not about Hutch!

Sorry, where is it said that it's definitely going to be a dark ending by the DEV? Is that info on his main thread?

https://f95zone.to/members/sc-stories.4582888/

 

[X|Mortis]

I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't

Off the top of my head, I think that there's gonna be some variation across the routes/paths in which MHB would pan out:

• Cuck Path/Total Destruction - Hutch loses everything. Vivian ends up leaving him for Christian, and in time, he turns into a former shell of the man he once was and laments in despair and loneliness. After some time, Vivian gets sick of Christian and leaves him - only to be lonely herself, as she has no one else to really turn to for companionship. Simply put. No winners.
  
  
• Forgiveness and Reconciliation - Vivian seemingly gives into Christian's manipulative ways, but eventually comes to learn that Chris is not the right person for her and sees through his BS, only to gravitate back to Hutch and seek his forgiveness. Hutch eventually gets back together with Vivian and decides to put their past squabbles with Christian behind them and move on from their life in the city to settle somewhere else where Hutch has found a placement/job outside of the town he currently resides in.
  
  
• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Sorry, where is it said that it's definitely going to be a dark ending by the DEV? Is that info on his main thread?

https://f95zone.to/members/sc-stories.4582888/

From here

 

[tg]

• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

I think that last one isn't going to happen. Hutch doesn't get along with Christian at all, and he really resents what's happening. But, I like the sound of your first two. They do sound interesting.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Off the top of my head, I think that there's gonna be some variation across the routes/paths in which MHB would pan out:

• Cuck Path/Total Destruction - Hutch loses everything. Vivian ends up leaving him for Christian, and in time, he turns into a former shell of the man he once was and laments in despair and loneliness. After some time, Vivian gets sick of Christian and leaves him - only to be lonely herself, as she has no one else to really turn to for companionship. Simply put. No winners.
  
  
• Forgiveness and Reconciliation - Vivian seemingly gives into Christian's manipulative ways, but eventually comes to learn that Chris is not the right person for her and sees through his BS, only to gravitate back to Hutch and seek his forgiveness. Hutch eventually gets back together with Vivian and decides to put their past squabbles with Christian behind them and move on from their life in the city to settle somewhere else where Hutch has found a placement/job outside of the town he currently resides in.
  
  
• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

The surprise element is missing Dev mentioned will be a part of his ending is somehow not existent in all your scenarios.

 

[X|Mortis]

The surprise element is missing

Ah yes, forgot about that one Good call out

 

[AssassinWolf67]

I totally get you and I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't.
I don't think Hutch will end as cuck either, the story ends a lot heavier than that and not only be just Hutch who will suffer.

I can definitely live with that. Hell, I could live with the three of them destroying each other. I just hate VNs that use characters as just an excuse to write sex scenes. I lost too many brain cells trying to get through them.

 

[Robb123456]

A dark heavy end is fine. Having written quite a bit myself, I believe readers, to be truly engaged, there needs to be someone or something to root for. In that scenario, I can absolutely see Hutch gaining the upper hand "eventually." After all, every person has a limit from which they rise or spiral into oblivion.

Obviously, Christian is the "evil" in the story. Vivian, while complicit, is manipulated by Christian. Christian is also manipulating Hutch (duh!), and I hope the author doesn't just leave it at surface level and have Hutch continue to be manipulated to the end. That would be WAY too shallow. I'm hoping (praying even) that we get a more complicated Hutch, one that, over time, begins to twist the circumstances to his benefit.

Christian's niece, the one who's nice to him (I believe it's his niece, I'm not sure typing this, so forgive me if I'm wrong), is a good way to start. Hutch mentioned that he's "open" to a different relationship. The word "open" is weighted in the way he brought it up out of nowhere. Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable. A dark heavy end, like I mentioned, is fine, but if it's Hutch that goes down, it will be a failed attempt at writing. If I wanted that, I would rewatch Uncut Jems. What a waste of time that movie was.

IDK about Christian, but i think for both spouses, the end will be bitter. Even if Hutch gets some consolation, realistically, what he has been through will take a big toll on him. For Vivian, like i said before, it wouldn't make sense if she goes scott free from the events. I try not to take a moral stance and saying she will have to pay, but it wouldn't make sense if she didn't face consequences for her actions. I imagine something like this :

Ch 2 : After the shock of the last events, she will connect with Christian. He will give her pleasures she hadn't experienced and corrupt her. She will get accustomed to these experiences and maybe think she can keep all elements of her life together. ( Flashback of the first night). Maybe still expressing some form of guilt. Hutch suffers in silence and may need someone to express his feelings. Someone who is some form of light in the shark tank which is his job.

Ch 3 : She's getting way too comfortable with the arrangement. She is progressively more dissmissive of her husband's feelings and doesnt hesitate to fuck Chrisitian during a work related event. After the deed, they are introduced to new people (the mayor ?) who may have understood what was going on. Chrsitian sends her a dress and an address. She's used by someone (still the mayor ?). The guy doesn't care about her husband and uses her all night. She is lifted the morning by someone she knows (Marcel ?). Meanwhile Hutch is fed up by his wife, tries everything to find comfort, confides more and more to Addison and she confesses he attracts her. He doesnt know what do with it. The morning Vivian comes back, she begs him to stop "the project" and to start their old life again. The fool still loves her wife and says yes.

Ch 4 : People talk. Marcel uses what he knows this to his advantage. He brags about it to someone of his family, the mechanic, who blackmails her , he will make sure the whole town knows. Vivian gets insane pleasure even if it destroys her self esteem. The rumour spreads between the youth of her town and here come the twins. Fuck us or we tell Sawyer. Sawyer stumbles upon them and Sawyer says 'You're not my mother anymore. Don't contact me. Sawyer goes to his father (i hope he won't find Addison and his father fucking). That was the last straw for Hutch. She comes back to find in front of her house her things packed and Hutch saying he knows and she will hear from his lawyer. Addison has made sure to transmit to authorities proof that her uncle has coerced many women into having sex and is condemned for this. Will learn to be a bitch, prison is not sweet for sex offenders. Hutch breaks up with Addison saying that from now on he must take care of his son. Moves out. THE END

 

[LUCIANO2020]

The question truly is will the DEV stick with the NTS or again will he switch back to NTR. Shadows of Silence makes me feel they will stay together but there will be a secret. If these titles are staying. Maybe she kills Christian because he won't stop then he becomes possesive and Hutch knows she did it. But classic I love my wife so I will protect her.
#A Husband's Sacrifice
#The Price of Love
#Shadows of Forgiveness
#Shadows of Silence

I think and I imagine an scenario where hutch and Vivian remain together but he would know that she would still cheat on him and she will know that she can't not stop and they would live like nothing would ever happen. As example

 

[Brown-eagle]

Did another go at the backyard and bedroom scene to see if i could spot any clues since Dev said his whole story started 1st at backyard and bedroom scene and then he created the ending. I noticed this little frame although it may seem like it's just him heading back to the living room could it also mean he was starting at the knife on the counter? Perhaps a little premonition to the ending?...

 

[LUCIANO2020]

IDK about Christian, but i think for both spouses, the end will be bitter. Even if Hutch gets some consolation, realistically, what he has been through will take a big toll on him. For Vivian, like i said before, it wouldn't make sense if she goes scott free from the events. I try not to take a moral stance and saying she will have to pay, but it wouldn't make sense if she didn't face consequences for her actions. I imagine something like this :

Ch 2 : After the shock of the last events, she will connect with Christian. He will give her pleasures she hadn't experienced and corrupt her. She will get accustomed to these experiences and maybe think she can keep all elements of her life together. ( Flashback of the first night). Maybe still expressing some form of guilt. Hutch suffers in silence and may need someone to express his feelings. Someone who is some form of light in the shark tank which is his job.

Ch 3 : She's getting way too comfortable with the arrangement. She is progressively more dissmissive of her husband's feelings and doesnt hesitate to fuck Chrisitian during a work related event. After the deed, they are introduced to new people (the mayor ?) who may have understood what was going on. Chrsitian sends her a dress and an address. She's used by someone (still the mayor ?). The guy doesn't care about her husband and uses her all night. She is lifted the morning by someone she knows (Marcel ?). Meanwhile Hutch is fed up by his wife, tries everything to find comfort, confides more and more to Addison and she confesses he attracts her. He doesnt know what do with it. The morning Vivian comes back, she begs him to stop "the project" and to start their old life again. The fool still loves her wife and says yes.

Ch 4 : People talk. Marcel uses what he knows this to his advantage. He brags about it to someone of his family, the mechanic, who blackmails her , he will make sure the whole town knows. Vivian gets insane pleasure even if it destroys her self esteem. The rumour spreads between the youth of her town and here come the twins. Fuck us or we tell Sawyer. Sawyer stumbles upon them and Sawyer says 'You're not my mother anymore. Don't contact me. Sawyer goes to his father (i hope he won't find Addison and his father fucking). That was the last straw for Hutch. She comes back to find in front of her house her things packed and Hutch saying he knows and she will hear from his lawyer. Addison has made sure to transmit to authorities proof that her uncle has coerced many women into having sex and is condemned for this. Will learn to be a bitch, prison is not sweet for sex offenders. Hutch breaks up with Addison saying that from now on he must take care of his son. Moves out. THE END

It seems very logical and could be like that more or less. Will see

 

[Adhdclassic]

I don't think Hutch will end up with Addison. I do believe it's possible Hutch will help Addison take the company.

 

[packard1928]

He was doing it the whole Saturday
Sunday is the time for action.



In my opinion, it's clearly visible that he came there with someone (Vivian? Was she sent there by Chris? ) and in the second image, he's looking for that person

Yes I agree.... he is loking for someone ???

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Did another go at the backyard and bedroom scene to see if i could spot any clues since Dev said his whole story started 1st at backyard and bedroom scene and then he created the ending. I noticed this little frame although it may seem like it's just him heading back to the living room could it also mean he was starting at the knife on the counter? Perhaps a little premonition to the ending?...

That's what I thought, too when I was having a look at all the images inside the folders.
I even imagined Hutch doing the impossible and kniving both of them down and what happens after because of his silence throughout day2 at night and just a flicker of sentences the other days, was that he's just dreaming while sitting at the chair in the backyard the things that we see in the game after he caught them in the backyard.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

That's what I thought, too when I was having a look at all the images inside the folders.
I even imagined Hutch doing the impossible and kniving both of them down and what happens after because of his silence throughout day2 at night and just a flicker of sentences the other days, was that he's just dreaming while sitting at the chair in the backyard the things that we see in the game after he caught them in the backyard.

That would be an absolute deep darkness experience.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

That would be an absolute deep darkness experience.

Absolute pain. And suffering. Wow