Dealbreaker
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There is plenty of positive elements and still a sound and exciting groundwork and ideas to build upon.
I mean you are playing a fiction story so...What a fucking terrible chapter 2. It started with a lot of promise with resistant but breaking down barriers then she literally goes and fucks strangers then gets fucking raped for pay only to go cuddle up in the bed of her abuser. I can put up with some level of stupidity but she is literally one of the dumbest characters I've seen on these forums.
It started not so bad (I mean, as a former candaulist who found out after that his ex-wife cheated on him it really moved me...) but I agree, the "rape" scene was too much !so guys are you satisfied with new update? Wife became from moral to anal whore just in one 1 update
I mean she actually tried anal just for Chris.Didn't seem like she was thinking of Chris much when Rain was in her pooper![]()
Just read or skim through the last 5 or so pages if you want to know that.so guys are you satisfied with new update? Wife became from moral to anal whore just in one 1 update
I mean if Chris would have kept blackmailing her for Hutch job and eventually made her fall for his dick would it not be "another Cliche NTR game".Just read or skim through the last 5 or so pages if you want to know that.
I remember the Dev saying over the next few updates he expects the player base to split and that he thinks half will like the story and half won’t. (Or something like that, at least I’m pretty sure. Maybe somebody can remember it better)
I am on the side right now that is not happy no, but I’m gonna give it one more update to pull me back before it gets written off as another cliche NTR game.
(cmon Hutch, don’t be a useless passive fuck anymore…)
Oh my dear friend vivian was never moralso guys are you satisfied with new update? Wife became from moral to anal whore just in one 1 update
Everybody know Christian cares nothing about Vivian thats not rocket science.I enjoyed chapter 2, partially because of the sex scenes, but also because it confirmed my opinions about Christian and Vivian.
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There are those in the thread, who have written that there was a possibility that Christian would fall for Vivian. As someone who followed the thread from the beginning, I know this. And who said anything about rocket science?Everybody know Christian cares nothing about Vivian thats not rocket science.
I think to at least a minimum I wouldn’t have expected her to fold that quickly, I know it’s only 5 chapters. But she’s just full blown Christians property now and we’re only 40% done…wtf else is she gonna do now apart from be a whore.I mean if Chris would have kept blackmailing her for Hutch job and eventually made her fall for his dick would it not be "another Cliche NTR game".
There's not much way the story can go, either you get Damsel in distress wife succumbing to pleasure or corrupt hidden whore.
In real life why do you think people cheat? They don't get the attention, pleasure or both from there partner, I agree the shift was very quick but SC only have 5 chapters to wrap the story so he can show the full slutification of Viv.
Just read or skim through the last 5 or so pages if you want to know that.
I remember the Dev saying over the next few updates he expects the player base to split and that he thinks half will like the story and half won’t. (Or something like that, at least I’m pretty sure. Maybe somebody can remember it better)
I am on the side right now that is not happy no, but I’m gonna give it one more update to pull me back before it gets written off as another cliche NTR game.
(cmon Hutch, don’t be a useless passive fuck anymore…)
i swear see if turns into some form of stockholm syndrome that she eventually breaks free from or something like that and hutch just takes her back no questions asked and acts like nothings happened i'm gonna be so disappointedI think to at least a minimum I wouldn’t have expected her to fold that quickly, I know it’s only 5 chapters. But she’s just full blown Christians property now and we’re only 40% done…wtf else is she gonna do now apart from be a whore.
Like, I get what you mean with “there’s not many ways this story can go” But for me, this just wasn’t IT. Isn’t this story supposed to be a deep emotional one? Like who am I supposed to care about in this story now. After CH1, I felt bad for the couple and was hoping they would figure it out. But now, how am I supposed to remotely care, what happens to this slut. Shes just a serial cheating whore, who blames her husband and can’t stand the idea of him leaving her and being happy, while she’s now just going to slut it up with his boss, and whoever tf else?? She’s just genuinely an awful person.
And the only thing that’s keeping me interested so far, is the hope that I’ll get to see Hutch or somebody, give her some fucking kind of reality check.
If this next update just solidifies Hutch as a cuck or some useless pos, I think I’m gonna call it…
Your prediction of the bedroom conversation wasn't so bad.Overall, I’m disappointed with a large part of your comments.